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searching for the right melody to dance to...

Posted by felltohell, Dec 10 2007, 09:07 AM

i stepped my left foot back
then you followed with your right
you slowly leaned your face towards mine
as i reluctantly threw my head backwards
you looked into my eyes, searching
then i closed mine
our hands held tightly together
danced together in the cold misty wind
you whispered my name in my ear
but i called his name in my mind

it was all so sudden
i found my shaking body on the floor
no longer dancing
though searching for my tune...



Comments

  NINDOX, Dec 6 2008, 12:05 AM

Really like this. The detail and intimacy of words.

  felltohell, Dec 6 2008, 01:13 AM

put ths together during my unfaithful days...

 
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