inspired by my friend (who didn't listen to me)
Posted by felltohell, Nov 29 2008, 02:45 AM
tonight
you play with a married man.
talking dirty..
tonight
you ride on his car alone,
talking dirty
tonight
talking dirty,
you paint a naughty smile on your lips
tonight
your blouse lying on the passenger's seat
your arms all over him
tomorrow,
you cry
talking dirty
Comments
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NINDOX, Dec 5 2008, 11:28 PM
I like the repetition, but I don't know how well, talking dirty translate over in English. It kinds of off, but the concept is nice, and the hurt is blunt. I hope your friend will listen to you in the near future.
felltohell, Dec 6 2008, 01:21 AM
yah the whole concept is when somebody says "talk dirty". it could mean a lot of things.
i left a lot to the imagination of the reader, which is not a good idea at all...
but the ideology and the context at which the whole thing takes place, i think, doesn't find anywhere in the culture f the english language....
i think
i left a lot to the imagination of the reader, which is not a good idea at all...
but the ideology and the context at which the whole thing takes place, i think, doesn't find anywhere in the culture f the english language....
i think