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inspired by my friend (who didn't listen to me)

Posted by felltohell, Nov 29 2008, 02:45 AM

tonight
you play with a married man.
talking dirty..

tonight
you ride on his car alone,
talking dirty

tonight
talking dirty,
you paint a naughty smile on your lips

tonight
your blouse lying on the passenger's seat
your arms all over him

tomorrow,
you cry
talking dirty



Comments

  NINDOX, Dec 5 2008, 11:28 PM

I like the repetition, but I don't know how well, talking dirty translate over in English. It kinds of off, but the concept is nice, and the hurt is blunt. I hope your friend will listen to you in the near future.

  felltohell, Dec 6 2008, 01:21 AM

yah the whole concept is when somebody says "talk dirty". it could mean a lot of things.
i left a lot to the imagination of the reader, which is not a good idea at all...
but the ideology and the context at which the whole thing takes place, i think, doesn't find anywhere in the culture f the english language....
i think

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