The Rape Options

[Ralf]

interesting story. did it really happen though? this kind of rmeinds me of the rape scene in orwell's 1984

I don't remember any rape in 1984.
I read that book 26 years ago, but I really don't think there is any rape.

[jryanas]

I don't remember any rape in 1984.
I read that book 26 years ago, but I really don't think there is any rape.

Yeah man, I was thinking the same thing too. I remember Winston eventually got it on with Sophia(whom I've always imagined to resemble my Gr.10 math teacher). But both were yearning for the passionate exchange of bodily fluids.

As for the original story, as I must feel I must comment on it. Given my extensive research on psychoanalysis(NOT), I'd have to say. If cloudyski is a virgin, she probably wants her first time to be with another virgin. And has even gone as far as contemplating and playing out this hypothetical situation her heard over and over many a time. It has consumed her mind to the point that she had to write it down and share it, as to get it off her chest. A release, that if indeed her first time experience is not with another virgin, at least she had the dream. Her disappointment will be easier to bear.

If she is not a virgin, then she's just plain crazy. Putting so much emphasis on that one impending factor would lead one to believe that she may have had a traumatic first time experience.


As for Fivers, OMG DOUBLE RAINBOW ALL THE WAY ACROSS BUT SKY.
It's one thing to think about it, it's another thing to write it down. It's a completely different thing to write it down and not even realize how intense such an experience can be. I don't mean to come off as sounding like a lecturing parent, but I must say it again!

OMG DOUBLE RAINBOW ALL THE WAY ACROSS THE SKY

[fivers]

relax man, it is just fiction lol

[KraterosHellas]

I don't remember any rape in 1984.
I read that book 26 years ago, but I really don't think there is any rape.

nvm i take that back. i mean the sex scene. where the male lead goes to a prostitute

[Ralf]

nvm i take that back. i mean the sex scene. where the male lead goes to a prostitute

Yeah, I remember. And to gain further control over Human nature, the ruling Party was exploring ways of genetically eliminating the pleasure function.


Any other budding writers out there ?
Post your school essays and creative writing folks.

[Mona]

This "story" is the daily lifestyle of cloudyski haha.

story itself has a nice irnoic twist but to be honest the writing was sloppy(no offense)

don't a guy need to be hard to have intercourse.
So he was having a wet dream when you (i mean she the woman in your story) walked in for him to be hard?

This post has been edited by Mona: Apr 6 2011, 03:20 AM

[txoomsuab2]

ahaha funnyass story, people and their fantasy