Jun Vs. Armadio, the endless struggle......... |
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Jun Vs. Armadio, the endless struggle......... |
Feb 14 2004, 01:35 AM
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AF Pro Group: Members Posts: 1,993 Joined: 1-January 04 From: Australia |
"Now what's happening!" thought Armadio to himself bitterly. BOOOOM! Armadio heard a loud crash and turned around to see what was happening through the rear window and to his surprise he saw a flaming police car wreak next to a tree the officers seemed just as surprised as he was."what the hell cause them to crash?" questioned the officer driving. "let's go back and see what happend" suggested the
second one. Suddenly Jun slide through the car window on the patienger side and in one swift motion undid the second officers seat belt,opemed the door and threw him out with no remorse what so ever. "JUN! how can this be" statted Armadio in shock. Jun and the driver started wrestling at the front trying desperatley to for each other out. "YOU BASTARD!!!!I'LL KILL YOU" threatened Jun as he got out a long dagger and stabbed the officer in the chest. The officer eyes started to widen and became lifeless. Jun tossed the corpse to the open road then switched to the driver's seat and began to stop the car. Armadio was shocked that Jun did all that and took note that Jun was furious. As Jun got out of the car he slammed the door and opened the passenger door. "I thought you died" said Armadio "I am dead........" replied Jun. "really?" asked Armadio "No but YOU soon will be!" said Jun ferociously. "How did you escape? asked Armadio. "well........" said Jun Earlier "Nnnnnnnoooooooo" Screamed Jun as he started plunging off the clifff he felt his hair and clothes raffliing as he fell done to meet death. Frantically Jun grabbed his dagger from under his sleve wicth was held by a black bandage wrapped around his arm. "Oh god let this work" prayed Jun as he stabbed a rock with his dagger which had stopped his fall.................... "After that i rock climbed up and stole one of the police cars the one you where in had already left with another one though lucky one pig decided to take a cigerrete brake" told Jun to Armadio. Armadio's jaw had dropped at the story Jun told. Jun continued on "thanks for letting me almost plunging to my doom! I should kill you now while your unable to fight back but where is the honour in that?" "so can u please unchauff me?" pleaded Armadio "hold still"adviced Jun as he left up his dagger above his head. "wow your like a cat with nine lives you never die and becareful i don't want my hand in two!" said Armadio. Jun ignored him and cutted the cain in two. "so what do we do now?where do we have the final showdown? asked Armadio as he and Jun went into the front seats of the car. "I don't no to tell you the truth but what i do know is that we need to dump this car and fight some where else because the police will be after us" informed Jun "I wonder how everyone is at AF you know nung1,cevil,james,aznkid,azngirl,atlantis,ben well u get the picture" said Armadio "You do know that only one of us will return to AF" reminded Jun as he drived back on to the freeway. "Are you there joe?" questioned a voice. "huh" remarked Jun "it's comming from the radio!" exclaimed Armadio "simon are you there?guys are you alright don't worry we're sending fifty men over to your locaion...." echoed the voice. "$hit what do we do now? we're fu-ked this time!" said Armadio with his voice shaking. "ummm" replied Jun slowly. "what do you think?" asked Jun quickly "we fleee and take selter at AF until this all blow's over!" replied Armadio "maybe if i speed i will be able to get off the freeway before........." Jun's heart stopped as he saw a group of police cars in the distance................... |
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Feb 14 2004, 07:14 AM
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AF Pro Group: Members Posts: 1,129 Joined: 12-November 03 From: Dundee, Scotland |
Still being persued by the Police?!
But it's all good - keep up the good work Jun! |
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Feb 14 2004, 09:51 AM
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AF Elite Group: Members Posts: 7,111 Joined: 26-November 03 From: Michigan. |
lol very nice once again..AF is speshul! lol..
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Feb 14 2004, 12:22 PM
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AF Addict Group: Members Posts: 792 Joined: 18-December 03 From: USA, Philadelphia |
nice nice
cool i was mentioned?!?!?!?! cool |
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Feb 14 2004, 01:18 PM
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AF Elite Group: Members Posts: 7,111 Joined: 26-November 03 From: Michigan. |
dont be feelin too special, bcuz i was mentioned too..lol...we're all family it's all good...MORE MORE MORE NICE STORY JUN KEEP IT UP!
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Feb 14 2004, 01:30 PM
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AF Fiend Group: Validating Posts: 417 Joined: 23-November 03 From: London,England |
Good story,but I think we need to actualy get away from the police.
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Feb 14 2004, 02:37 PM
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AF Addict Group: Members Posts: 792 Joined: 18-December 03 From: USA, Philadelphia |
yea but it was kinda cooll when he stabbed the police guy in the chest >:)
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Feb 14 2004, 06:00 PM
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AF Pro Group: Members Posts: 1,993 Joined: 1-January 04 From: Australia |
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Feb 14 2004, 06:30 PM
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AF Elite Group: Members Posts: 7,111 Joined: 26-November 03 From: Michigan. |
aww darn...lol..nice going jun!!
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Feb 14 2004, 07:19 PM
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AF Pro Group: Members Posts: 1,993 Joined: 1-January 04 From: Australia |
well here are some spoilers for the next bit.................
1.we find out why Armadio is so fixated on killing Jun 2.AF will be a key location for the finale 3.more people will be mentioned in the story |
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Feb 14 2004, 07:38 PM
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AF Elite Group: Members Posts: 7,111 Joined: 26-November 03 From: Michigan. |
wow..i cant wait mayn!! get it get it!!
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Feb 14 2004, 08:28 PM
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AF Addict Group: Members Posts: 792 Joined: 18-December 03 From: USA, Philadelphia |
get it done yo... i wanna read more
remember peoples the more you read the more you succeed |
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Feb 15 2004, 08:43 AM
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AF Pro Group: Members Posts: 1,129 Joined: 12-November 03 From: Dundee, Scotland |
We all wait in anticipation! I hope this story has an exciting climax!
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Feb 15 2004, 10:19 AM
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AF Addict Group: Members Posts: 792 Joined: 18-December 03 From: USA, Philadelphia |
is it done now?????? i can't wait ne longer man!!!!!!
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Feb 16 2004, 01:42 PM
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AF Fiend Group: Validating Posts: 417 Joined: 23-November 03 From: London,England |
QUOTE (Jun @ Feb 14 2004, 08:19 PM) well here are some spoilers for the next bit................. 1.we find out why Armadio is so fixated on killing Jun 2.AF will be a key location for the finale 3.more people will be mentioned in the story Cant wait to see what you come up with for number one.(Grabs a 2X4 |
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Feb 17 2004, 01:11 AM
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AF Pro Group: Members Posts: 1,993 Joined: 1-January 04 From: Australia |
"fu-k! what the hell are we going to do now?" asked Jun in desperation. The car was now on the bridge where they engaged in combat earlier. "drive of the bridge" replied Armadio sounding unexpectingly calm. "what" asked Jun making sure he heard clearly. "DRIVE OFF THE fu-kING BRIDGE IT"S OUR ONLY CHANCE" scolded Armadio. "Ok hang on to something" warned Jun as he swirved the car. The car was now in midair. "HOLLLLLLY SHIIIIIIIIT" screamed Jun and Armadio together as they awaited for the impact that lyed ahead. The car landed perfectly though it bumped viciously a few times making Jun's and Armadio's body fly every where."we made it!" said Jun in disbelief. "onward to AF!" replied Armadio. "hey Armadio why do we have to fight?why-" Jun was interupted by Armadio's Explosive responce "SHUT THE fu-k UP!IT'S ALL YOUR fu-kING FAULT! IF YOU DON'T SHUT UP I'LL SOMETHING RIGHT NOW THAT I CERTAINLY WON'T REGRET!" from then on the trip to AF was in an awkward dead silence.
Later...... The pair stood in front of a gigantic building which was white and big golden letters spelling "ASIA FINEST=connecting the world to asian culture" as soon as they entered Armdio whispered in Jun's ear viciously "roof top 2:00 AM" and the he stormed of to the right and entered the games room which contained the latest arcade games. Stood there staring at the receptionest desk "I need a new masmune.........I better find Shadowblade" Jun walk of to the lounge room.......... Aznboy saw Armadio walking around the games room and decided to aproach him "Whats up Armadio" greeted Aznboy "nothing much" replied Armadio "So you killed Jun huh" asked Aznboy "that's none of your buisness" replied Armadio with rising anger. "ooooooooohhhhhh so you ended up getting your @$$ whooped" laughed Aznboy "SHUT UP!!!"snapped Armadio. peoples heads started turning in their direction. "I'm going....." said Armadio trying to keep his cool then left the room. Azngirl poped up and asked "whats wrong with him??" "I have no idea.....maybe you can go ask Jun whats going on. James said he wanted to vs me in DDR" replied Aznboy "ok i'll go find him" said Azngirl as she left the room to begin her serch. Jun found Shadowblade and ran towards him "hey whats up?" asked Jun. "nothing much. seeing by the way you came here you must want sometihng do you not?" questioned Shadowblade "i need another masmune have you got any left i promise i'll pay you back next saturday" "fine but you better give me the moey by sunday or it'll get ugly" threatened Shadowblade as he gave Jun the sword. "now begone" said shadowblade unpleasent'ly "thank you and consider it done!" panicked Jun then he left for the main foyer. Then he saw Azn girl aproaching him then greeted "hey Jun" "hey" replied Jun "so who one the big fight?" asked azngirl getting straight to the point. "we still have to finish it" said Jun as he began to walk off. "WAIT!" exclaimed Azn girl as grabbed his arm "at least tell me why you two are fighting.you two used to be really good friends" said Azn girl quickly. "Fine i'll tell you" sighed Jun. Azn girl began to listen intently to his story. "Me and Armadio liked this really nice girl don't ask hat her name is because i dont want to mention it" said Jun Azngirl nodded her head. "i remeber the night when all this began as if it was yesterday..................." "Hey Jun how about a drag race?" callenged Armadio but Jun shook his head "nah man i just wanted to steal this cars to test them out" "whats wrong chicken?" mocked Armadio "c'mon it'll be fun" pleaded the girl "i'll ride with you if you do". "fine but as soon as this is over we dump the cars" sighed Jun "agreed" said Armadio as he went in the stolen car. Jun and the girl went to the car next to it. "when that light goes green we start" announced Armadio. The two started reving their cars the light was still red.....Jun felt the palm of his hands sweating "there no need to be nervous it's just a drag race" laughed the girl. Jun nodded on the other hand Armadio was calm. The light flashed green the cars were now speeding in the distance. "WOO HOOO" Yelled Armadio who was enjoying the thrill of going at 100k. Armadio was now ahead of Jun "c'mon Jun go faster" said the girl Jun began catching up on Armadio when out of no where disapeared by the truck crossing in front of Jun. "WATCH OUT!" warned the girl. "fu-k!" swore Jun as he tried to swirve the car but the car keep sliding..................CRRRRRASH! the patienger side of the collided into the truck first. Armadio had gotten out of his car and ran towards the car wreck. the car had flipped upside down by the impact of the ccrash. Armadio stood frozenly at the wreck. "hellllllllllp" "hellllllllllp" Armadio heard Jun screaming. "Armadio help me out" pleaded Jun immeadietly Armadio grabbed Jun's hand an pulled him out the wreck when turned around the car exploded up in flames. Armadio called out the girl's name as if he was expecting her to emerge from the flaming wreck. Armadio fell to his knee's "no" he said faintly a tear emerged from his left eye. Jun staggered towards Armadio and place his hand on Armadio's shoulder to comfort him. When Armadio felt Jun's hand his sorrow then transformed into rage and he felt for the taste of revenge "YOU!" screamed Armadio as he released him self from Jun's hand he then stood up. "This is all your fault!" pointed Armadio. Jun felt his sorrow now turning in to fury "YOU THINK I WANTED THIS TO HAPPEN?!" "YOU THINK I LIKE THE FACT THAT SOME JUST DIED BEFORE MY EYE'S!" screamed Jun "YOU WERE THE ONE DRIVING!" argued Armadio "I SAID I DIDN'T WANT TO RACE!!!BUT NOOOOOOO YOU JUST HAD TO FORCE ME!!!!!" Jun then saw Armadio had calmed down and say "I shall wander ever on.........Searching for you.Because I know, As long as you, Are out there.I can never,Rest in my grave.I will find you,And make you pay." "his face that day was like none other he was full of hatred and sorrow............." continued Jun. "wah..........i didn't things were that bad between you guys......." replied Azn girl in shock. "Bye" said Jun "Bye" said Azn girl. Jun looked around the foyer and saw Randerkill and Atlantis argueing over something in the games room near them he saw Ben and Korn talking to each as usaul. Then Jun saw Armadio making some usaul threats to Cevil. Armadio caught Jun's eye and at that moment Cevil kicked Armadio's shin and ran off to the car room. "you'll pay for that" yelled Armadio he was about to persue Cevil but he felt something pull him back. he turned around to find Jun standind right behind him. They stared at each other with unblinking eyes until James walked pass with two girls that he chatted up. "roof top tomorrow don't forget" reminded Armadio "yeah whatever" replied to Armadio as he left AF to prepare for tomorrows fate.......................the question is who will survive????? |
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Feb 17 2004, 02:14 AM
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AF Geek Group: Members Posts: 189 Joined: 18-January 04 From: australia |
hehe, the story get's better and better!
can't wait! |
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Feb 17 2004, 05:25 AM
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AF Pro Group: Members Posts: 1,129 Joined: 12-November 03 From: Dundee, Scotland |
wOOOOOOOOOOt! Jun this is pure gold mate!
Are other members getting a mention again next time? Because I'm liking my role in this! This post has been edited by JamesLovesAyumi: Feb 17 2004, 05:35 AM |
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Feb 17 2004, 10:19 AM
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AF Elite Group: Members Posts: 7,111 Joined: 26-November 03 From: Michigan. |
lol..nicely written once again Jun. Keep up the Good Work
BtW, AzNgIrL is CoOl! |
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Feb 17 2004, 03:48 PM
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AF Addict Group: Members Posts: 792 Joined: 18-December 03 From: USA, Philadelphia |
lol nice story lol i saw some mistakes but it's all good!
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