Jun Vs. Armadio, the endless struggle......... Options

[AzNgIrL]

ooo i cant wait for this one either...

[JamesLovesAyumi]

There's no hurry man! Better totake longer and do a better job of it! Can we have a little taster or whats going to be in it??

I've got script work to do for a short film my friend's and I hope to make over Easter, so the writing and storyboarding for that have left me with less time to complete my story on here ...

[Jun]

this is all i've done im sorry but iv'e been getting alot of homework lately........

Armadio and Jun
Armadio was on a train towards the city. He was the only person on the train except for four guys huddled up at the other end of the carrage. They started to take occasional glances at him,Armadio had a feeling that this trip was going to be a long one...........One of the four guys approached him "look i don't want to hurt you just give me all your money and we'll leave you alone....." threatened the gangster as he reached out for his knife. Armadio's eyes narrowed as he stood up face to face with the stranger.

One guy called out "Phong don't worry about it we'll get someone else" Phong ignored him readying his knife for a quick stab. "don't make me ask again" said the guy, Phong flinched at the command and walked away from Armadio. Armadio could tell that the guy Phong was frightened of was the leader. The train started to slow down as it drew nearer to the station. Armadio saw the rise up,so he decided it would be wiser to follow them out. Armadio heard some voices talking about something called AF.............

well thats the teaser what we will find in Armadio AND Jun is how they met the girl.
you will see how they met and their great friend ship before the accident

anyway iv'e got to give this "girl" a name the reason why i didn't give her a name in the first part was because what if i named her after someone on AF by accident?
well if there are any females who want a role on Armadio and Jun then give a holla.

[JamesLovesAyumi]

Sounds good Jun. That sounds like the beginning of the story is just as good as whay comes later!

[AzNgIrL]

well if there are any females who want a role on Armadio and Jun then give a holla.

tehhe here! lol that's good so far Jun

[Jun]

well if there are any females who want a role on Armadio and Jun then give a holla.

tehhe here! lol that's good so far Jun

Azn girl u have been mentioned in the story once before but if u want to be in it i'll
have to use your real name Shinee
(do u mind?)

[AzNgIrL]

lol, really it's up to you, i wouldnt mind, but ur choice...and if you do..i dun mind...it's been mentioned around here MANY MANY times

[Armadio]

Jun,I was hoping that,if you dont mind,that I could work on the prequel wit ya.

[Jun]

^ dude you should of asked me earlier because i have a basic idea of the story line BUT i guess you can message me and tell me your ideas so i can add it on to make the stroy longer............


Armadio span around to see three teens laughing about some jokes but they mainly talked about AF. Armadio was intrigued in AF. What is AF a club?A dessert?
A brand of clothes so he decided to ask them.........

"Hey can tell me how i can get to AF?" asked Armadio. The trio stared at him as if he was lost. After a long awkard silence they laughed at Armadio the gut in the middle laughed "How can you not know where AF is?" The girl next to him also decided to join as well "C'mon Norman don't bother with him just because he has a low IQ doesn't mean we should mock him" "You're right his like a neanderthal"
replied Norman and with that he fell straight to the ground. Where Norm's head was lyied Armadio's fist in mid air. The third teen that hadn't said anything yet
decided to avenge his fallen friend while the girl went to Norms aid.

"I don't want to hit you......but i will" warned Armadio as he dodged a bout of punches. "Fine......." replied Armadio as kicked the dude's chest. The third guy crumpled to the ground and with that. Armadio walked into the city to search for "AF" Armadio had been roaming the city for hour's asking people where AF was but he felt he was being missleaded. He was passing by an Ally when
he heard a voices echo he stood and listened "GIVE ME ALL YOU fu-kING MONEY b!tch!" echoed a voice Ferociously. "Wait isn't that phong voice" thought Armadio to himself when a voice that rised up with anger broke his concentraction.
"BRING IT ON I'LL TAKE ON ALL OF YOU!"

Armadio decided to investigate and creeped into the darkness of the ally...........

[Armadio]

Lookin good so far,and Im glad you exepted my offer.Lookin forward to workin with ya.

This post has been edited by Armadio: Mar 7 2004, 07:53 PM

[Jun]

lol same here

[Armadio]

But,just so ya know,this is only a temporary truce.Once this thing is done,its on buddy.

[Jun]

Armadio saw could barely see anything he went around a corner to discover 5 guys under some lights. He sneaked up behind a bin to get a closer look. And saw.....Phong! with a knife threatening some other guy for cash. "Vu can i stab him?" asked Phong as listened for what the leader had to say. "Well if Nam and Ty hold him there.......then fine go for your life" replied Vu. Jun saw Vu smile at that replie "crap he means buisness only if Ty and Nam weren't holding me down............." though Jun desperately trying to find a way ouit of this situation. Vu tried to stab Jun's chest but Jun barely moved out the way. "HOLD HIM BACK!" ordered Phong. Nam angrily replied "Why don't you try Jackass!". Armadio ran and tackled Phong to the ground. Vu was shocked that someone had been watching. "take care of them two i'll meet the rest of you at the "place"" ordered Vu as he walked away. Jun was grateful that someone was here to aid him. Armadio and Phong were wrestling on the ground for the knife the seemed like it was going no where until Armadio got the upperhand by grabing the knife.

At that point Phong quickly got of the ground same with Armadio "Let him go" threatened Armadio. Ty let go of Jun's arm to ally Phong but didn't relaise the possiblity of Jun being able to help. Jun then caught Nam of gaurd by firing his right fist straight at his jaw. Nam ignored the pain and kneed Jun with great strengh. Armadio wasn't able to help seeing the fact that Phong and Ty were now advancing on him. "What's your name" asked Phong "Armadio" replied Phong tring to keep his eyes on both opponents. Jun was now on the ground from Nams last blow. "Fool" said Nam as he grabbed Jun's hair. Jun then got his fist and smashed it against Nam's shin "AAAARRRRGGGHHH" Nams scream echoed all over the Ally. Phong and Ty turned around to see what had happened then suddenly Armadio kicked Ty's back which resulted him in falling to the ground (well more like flying because he didn't suspect the blow) Phong didn't know whether to attack Jun or Amadio. As they were on either side of him. Jun quikly grabbed Phong from behind. "Armadio NOW ATTACK HIM NOW" informed Jun. Armadio did as he was told and landed 6 punches and 4 elbow strikes. Jun then threw Phong into the wall. Phong started to bleed from his mouth and his forehead. He then smiled in a strange way and said "We will have our revenge.........." Jun looked to see Armadio staring at him.

Armadio smiled and had put out his hand "Hey im Armadio" Jun smiled back and replied while shaking his hand "Well im Jun thanks for helping me back there i thought i was fu-ked" Jun and Armadio started to walk out of the ally. "Hey Jun......." began Armadio
"Yeah what?" replied Jun "by any chance do you know what AF is?" asked Armadio hoping to find a reliable answer. Jun smiled
and answered his question "Oooooohhh you mean Asia'sFinest,yeah i go there all the time". "really well can you show me the place?" asked Armadio "Sure why not it's the coolest place plus i owe you for saving my @$$ back there"
After walking for fifteen minutes they finally arrived in front of THE AF building. Armadio stared at the magnificent buildind in awe
Jun was walking inside but saw Armadio still looking at the buildind "Are you going to come in dude?" asked Jun. "Nah......i'll come by tomorrow i've got to catch the 5 o'clock" answered Armadio. "k cya" replied Jun "bye".....................

Meanwhile...................
"Vu..........don't do this to us" pleaded Phong with a gun pointing to his head. Ty and Nam also were begging for their lives.
"Tell me brothers..........how on earth did you let some surban guys beat you................."
Phong,Ty and Nam were now kneeling before Vu. "We underestimated them" replied Ty "why should we even let this bother us Vu?
who give a $hit?" asked Nam. "It is not the fact that you got beaten up but the actaul fact that you failed to even retrive any money!"
answered Vu firmly. "You wouldn't kill you own blood would you?" asked Phong trying to escape this situation.
"No........i wouldn't........" replied Vu. The 3 kneeling figures relaxed. "BUT THEY WILL!" exclaimed Vu. 3 loud bangs filled the room.
The bodies collapsed to the floor in an instint. "Jun......Armadio...............I don't care that you two had kicked the fu-king $hit through my bros BUT this gives us a bad rep which means you two MUST be eliminated for us to regain our pride.................."

[JamesLovesAyumi]

I didn't see this coming, but cool idea!

Good work as per usual Jun!

[dreydle]

so good!
woo! keep them coming jun! great story so far! keep it up!

[AzNgIrL]

Nice Job Jun. I started giggling when AF was mentioned. Nice



BtW, did you know there actually is somebody on the forums who's name is Phong?

[Armadio]

Good story so far,havent had this much antisipation in a long time.Must see more.

[Jun]

The next morning Jun and Armadio were walking through the city as they were walking to AF the accident went past some people taking photo's. They once again were in front of AF, Jun walked in the building followed by Armadio. "see that desk there" pointed Jun "yeh" replied Armadio "why?" "you have to apply for membership then they'll give you a name tag see" said Jun pointing to his.
"I have to wear a name tag!" exclaimed Armadio in shock "but there so......." "Just do it!" commanded Jun. "Ok ok im going........."
"how did i ever get myself into this..........." thought Armadio to himself as approached the desk. He saw a guy with the name tag saying "KoRn". "look at this paper work for me Ben" said KoRn throwing a binder at Ben. "Ouch! what the hell do you have in this thing" asked Ben as he started to rub his head. KoRn broke out into laughter. "Yeah keep laughin' KoRn until you see what happened to your car" said Ben mischiefly "my car...." said KoRn to himself "MY CAR!" KoRn ran outside the building.
Armadio saw Ben putting what looked like laxative's in KoRn's coffee. Ben achknowledge Armadio waiting. "Hi how may i help you" asked Ben "I came to apply for membership" anwsered Armadio. "Sure just fill out these forms and your set" instructed Ben as he reached in side the desk for an application form............

Jun was wondering why KoRn had ran out side the building so fast..........then he saw a girl entering the AF lounge. She saw him looking at her and he just looked away for awhile "Whoa...........who is she?" thought Jun to himself. Jun saw that Armadio was still filling out the form. "I'll go for a quick peck for her name tag then come back......" thought Jun to himself by the time he turned around she was gone. "arrrgggghhhh now iv'e got to look for her............." sighed Jun to himself as he approached the AF lounge
He scanned the room.........kulong was talking to Shortibebi and a few other girls.......near them was Xx Alex xX having some god knows what argument with nung........in the end she got so sick of that she slapped him which made his face go really really red...........Whoami was talking to saint legend about kung fu but where was that girl? He felt a tap on his shoulder he span right around to find himself face to face with.......her he was shocked that she was behind him the whole time. she didn't say anything
she jus looked deep within his eyes he did the same. he even forgot to look at her name tag. It was like their eyes were hypnotised......after what seem like forever she spoke "you dropped your card Jun" she gave him the card and walked in the other direction. Jun was still staring at her until she left the room....."who is she?" questioned Jun to himself

Armadio had finally finished all his forms. "Welcome to AF" welcomed Ben. Armadio thanked him "thank you" he now put on his nametag. He a then saw the girl that Jun had just encountered. "Oh my god...." said Armadio to himself as he watched her walk to
the exit. He decided to run after her. He finally caught up "Hi" said Armadio quickly. The girl turned around slowly and greeted Armadio "Hey" "can you please show me around uh you see i'm new here please" he smiled at her. she smiled back "ok".
"My name is Armadio" said Armadio introducing himself "I know i saw your name tag well mine is Shinee" replied Shinee pointing to hers. "Where would you like to start" asked Shinee "anywhere" replied Armadio. "well how about we start with the game room?"
suggested Armadio "fine with me" smiled Armadio so the duo went to the game room.

Jun returned to the foyer only to discover that Armadio was gone "where is he?" thought Jun to himself......"WAIT A MINUTE!" thought Jun to himself smiling. "Maybe i could use this time to catch the girls name!even know more about her!" Jun decided it was time to search for her so he decided to check the game room first he entered the magnificent room ony to find hundreds of people playing the arcade games. "Oh man i had to pick this room first............" thought Jun to himself. He then heard a familiar voice "me and you Jun one on one!" Jun turned around to see James with his usaul fan club of girls. Jun smiled "Ok let's go b!tch"

The two were both play DDR "Your going down Jun" laughed James as he was getting every combo right. "Dawm" thought Jun
"his gotten better.........." Armadio walked passed with Shinee and saw Jun versing James "Go Jun!" cheered Armadio Jun turned around to find Armadio and.....HER! Jun then lost got distracted.........."Ha Jun looks like i win to day laughed James as he decided to find another opponent. "Hey Jun this is my friend Shinee" smiled Armadio and Shinee this is my "And Shinee this is my friend Jun" "Hi" said Jun blushing "Hey" replied Shinee "So what you guys doing"asked Jun "I was just showing Armadio around AF"replied Shinee "hey im going to leave ok so see you all later" said Jun "really? how come" asked Armadio "Tired" said Jun sounding disbelievingly tired. "well ok then i'll see you tomorrow at the station" informed Armadio "ok bye" said Jun "Bye" replied Armadio and Shinee together. "I need to go to the toliet i'll be right back ok Armadio" said Shinee rushing to the toilet.

Jun walked out the AF building and saw a group of suspicous guys with black bandana's looking in his direction and back. It was as if they were looking at a picture or something......they now started to stand up and walk in his direction. Jun knew there was no way he could take on all of them....so he ran he was hoping that they weren't after him so he looked back to find 20 guys chasing him "OHHHHH $hit!" yeld Jun as he ran down the street.....at time like this i wish wasn't so young...........He saw 4 motor cycles coming his way...."aaaaaahhh crap if i go back i'll get beaten to a pulp but if i go forward im gonna get runned over!" said Jun to himself but he still chose to run towards the motorcycles. The motor bike now had reached but were circling him like hungry vultures. Jun jump onto a bike and threw the gangster off "thank god my friend taught me how to use this" said Jun to him self as he started to zoom into the distance wait i have to get Armadio! Jun skillful swirved the bike round towards AF and speed towards there
3 bikes were still persueing while the 20 other guys were waiting for Armadio outside of AF. Jun ride through the glass doors of AF
knowing that if got of his bike
A:it would get taken back
B:he would get pummeled to a pulp
C:he would have no escape

Jun went flying through the doors glass shattered everywhere. everyone in the foyer stared as Jun. Jun put a fake smiled and acted as if nothing had happened "haha..........hey guys" Armadio rushed towards Jun "WHAT ARE YOU DOIN!" demanded Armadio for an anwser. Shinee walked in the room next to Armadio "No time to explain people" anounced Jun and he pointed to Armadio "Dude you and me need to get the fu-k out of here!the gang from yesterday are after us forrevenge just like Phong said!" "No way" said Armadio not believing what he heard. "Just get on!" commanded Jun. Armadio went on. As soon as Armadio got on the bike.
Jun speed out out of the foyer and jkust like he suspected the gang now was persuing them...... but this time 10 bikes were after them the rider's were twirling Chains. One bike was now beside Jun but Armadio decided to show them that they weren't going to go down with a fight. So he actaully jumped on the persueing bike and stabed the gangster with Phongs knife.
"Heh i knew this would come in handy" said Armadio as he caught back up with Jun. "Dude that was cool!" exclaimed Jun as he speed past a car.

"WHAT DO WE DO NOW?" screamed Armadio but the wind muffled his voice. Jun barely heard him "WE RIDE TO THAT TRAIN" yelled Jun back as he pointed to it. The persuers must have seen Jun pointing because they too were now heading for the train!
Jun and Armadio were now on train tracks persuing the train. Jun was right in front of Armadio. Armadio saw that their enmies were drawing near. Jun grabbed his shoe and threw it threw the door window. "Ok now all i have to do is open it......"
thought Jun to himself he leapt and grabbed the window though he felt glass cutting through his skin. "HURRY JUN THE ARE RIGHT BEHIND US NOW!" warned Armadio as he tried to speed up. Jun opened the door "JUMP ARMADIO!" A chain that was thrown at Armadio's bikes wheel so Armadio forced him self to jump unwillingly seconds before the bike flipped over. Jun grabbed Armadio's hand and pulled him to safety....................................

[JamesLovesAyumi]

Jun, excellent work mate! I hope this story gets the recognition it deserves!

{James is the DDR King & has his own female fan club - All Right! }

This post has been edited by JamesLovesAyumi: Mar 10 2004, 05:30 AM

[dreydle]

ooo....wut happens next????!