The War Of Our Hearts, a short yet quiet strange prologue... Options

[Sokha]

Prologue

This hate has consumed my soul and that of our world. Half and half we have become, like yin and yang, but neither light nor dark only hate of that of our countryman two. I can only wish, but not out loud, to be one again, but not as whole.

Come to me once more that I have betray my Lord so only to be betray that of myself. Lust and pain, I despised thou so, only to run back, with tears on my face, to that of thou. What of that have I become, to fall on my knee for some man that neither care nor love?

My tears have yet to mean anything but nothing to thou. Only that of my cold stone heart that thou wish to break into pieces that thou have already done so. Of all these pain, of all these hurt, thou cannot but comprehend of what betrayal can cause to a heart as weak as mine.

Look at me! Look at me! Look at me!

That I must scream for thou ears to be stilled close and unheard of my woe. This wars, that neither has begin nor end, has torn me, broken me, oh so dearly that I can neither say that I am who I am. And this lover of mine that showed me love only that of love is all but lies did so too steer me somewhere, where I neither can hear nor see.

Am I but lost, am I but gone, am I but dead. My Lord, my betrayal, my love, all meant nothing when thou is around. For I am blind, for I am stupid to fall down upon my knees and not to realize it!

For this war, this hate has lead only to nothing and nothing is but everything…


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I know, its quite strange, tell me what you think. ^_^

This post has been edited by Sokha: Jun 12 2004, 12:13 PM

[Nung1]

i think its pretty good. requires u to think a little bit to understand. Gj

[RockHeart]

Dont feel be disappointed!!! Try all the best you could, in order to fight back the environment that aggressed and distressed on you!!




RockHeart,



:genius:

[Armadio2]

Quiet interesting. I love the way you worded everything.

[Sokha]

Dont feel be disappointed!!! Try all the best you could, in order to fight back the environment that aggressed and distressed on you!!




RockHeart,



:genius:

Huh???

[Nung1]

Rockheart phrases things a bit funny . he means welll but i think he mean. dont worry bout what others think but write to ure own discesion. dont let other's maybe negative taste blok what u want to do.

(thats what i think he said im not sure)

[RockHeart]

Rockheart phrases things a bit funny . he means welll but i think he mean. dont worry bout what others think but write to ure own discesion. dont let other's maybe negative taste blok what u want to do.

(thats what i think he said im not sure)

Nung1!!! You are so smart than everyone...You know!! Sometimes i wrote a sentence then has no one understand it!!! I should proud to myself!!...But you are the best!!! You know exactely of my point....




RockHeart,



:genius:

[Rocky Cuong V]

So sad............