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harutenshi
post Apr 25 2004, 02:23 PM
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"Take that Jun!" yelled a little black hair boy, as he threw sand to another boy with dark brown hair.
"Haha Armadio you always think you can defeat me!" laughed Jun, as he threw a juice box to Armadio, hitting him in the head.
"Waaaa!!" cried Armadio. A girl about three years old rushed to him.
"What wrong Armadio?" asked the girl with a ponytail.
"Jun hit me with a juice box, now I got a boo boo on my head!"
"Jun that wasn't very nice she threw a bucket of water at him.
"Hey, Shinee! Stop that" Jun laughed. Armadio, Jun, and Shinee threw water at each other. Then a girl with pig tails waddled over to them.
"Umm, hi" the girl with pig tails said softly.
"Oh hi!" the three said in unison.
"What's your name?" asked Shinee looking at her.
"Harutenshi, but people call me Haru." she spoke softly and looked at the sand.
"Welcome Haru! I'm Armadio! To my left is Shinee and to my right is the clumsy Jun!"
"What'd you say?" asked Jun to Armadio.
"I said, spiffy Jun!" Armadio lied. Jun rolled his eyes.
"Come play with us Haru!" offered Shinee.
Haru's big brown eyes widen and sparkled! The four played tagged and threw sand at each other for the rest of the day.
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(Now they're teenagers and preteens)
Jun and Shinee were a couple and they were inseperable. Armadio was a very strong fighter, very good martial arts. And Haru was more out spoken. But then one day they lost each other.
"I'm sorry you guys." spoke Haru as they hung out at AsiaFinest smoothie bar.
"What are you talking about Haru?" asked Jun, as he shook up his orange mango smoothie.
"I have to leave."
"Haru stop pulling pranks on us again." said Armadio and Shinee.
"I'm serious. I'm moving to New York City. I want to persue my dreams." The three were confused. Haru did talk about wanting to go live in the city, but that was after college. They agreed to stick with each other no matter what happened.
"How can you do this to us Haru?" asked Jun who was the most quiet out of all of them this afternoon.
"It was my decison. Why can't you be more supportive of me?" asked Haru.
"But why the rush Haru? You said after college! We all agreed all four of us would go there for college and then we would get apartments and live near each other." said Shinee.
"Times change and so do people" Haru spat as she got up and smoothed her Paris shirt, they got her for her birthday. She grabbed her Hello Kitty bag. "I'm sorry, swing by my house when you all are finished." she mumbled as she ran out the door.

So how do ya like it? It's not that great is it? I'll continue it later though!
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post Apr 25 2004, 05:57 PM
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Haru,I had no idea you could write so passionatly. Your story,its beautiful,I could literaly feel the sadness from it. I bow before your writing skills. I must know what happens next!
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post Apr 25 2004, 06:26 PM
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Awww, C'mon Haru! Don't leave us! Hehe, nice job. Lol, I like how the beginning started embarassedlaugh.gif
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post Apr 25 2004, 07:14 PM
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Thanks icon_smile.gif I'll try to post it a.s.a.p.
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post Apr 25 2004, 10:13 PM
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Where do you get your ideas? icon_wink.gif
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post Apr 25 2004, 11:01 PM
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interesting..... curiosity is getting the best of me. post soon,biggrin.gif
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post Apr 25 2004, 11:33 PM
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haha great story haru beerchug.gif
im eager to see what happens in the next chapter
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post May 15 2004, 12:34 PM
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Maaaann. That next chapter must be pretty long. embarassedlaugh.gif
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post May 15 2004, 12:55 PM
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"We gotta find some way for Haru not to go." Armadio said. He, Jun, and Shinee sat on the bench.
"It looks like she has her mind set on it." said Jun as he closed his eyes.
"How could you say that!" yelled Armadio. The three sat around still trying to come up with a plan.
"I got an idea!" Shinee exclaimed.
"What's that?" asked both Jun and Armadio.
"We go over to Haru's house and try to convice." The three got up and walked to Haru's place.
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Haru heard a knock at the door and got up to see who it was.
"Who is it?" asked Haru
"It's us!"
Well gee, that really specfic, thought Haru as she heard Armadio and Jun fighting. "Come on in!" Haru opened the door and the four walked to the living room.
"So when are you moving?" asked Jun
"Well, I'm looking for some apartments in Manhattan."
"How could you do this to us!" yelled Armadio. Shinee kicked Armadio in the shin for his behavior.
"I don't understand what you're talking about" said a confused Haru.
"You think it's okay to move to New York City and leaveyour friends behind in this crappy place!" yelled Armadio. Jun and Shinee held hands together afraid something bad was going to happen. Haru started crying.
"Do you know bad it hurts when I'm moving without my friends by my side! Do you know how bad it hurts when you say that!" Haru cried, breaking down.
"Haru.." said Shinee softly as she tried comforting her, but Haru pushed away.
"You know, I wasn't sure if I should stay here or not. This makes me want to move to New York City more!" Haru shouted as she ran out of the house slamming the door behind her.

Oy, that was bad. embarassedlaugh.gif I had writer's block for a long time. I don't know where I get my ideas. embarassedlaugh.gif It just comes to me, when I start typing.
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post May 15 2004, 03:49 PM
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wow...im surprised on how well you got our personality's in this...
this is a good story Haru i hope you get the next chapter out soon biggrin.gif
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post May 16 2004, 11:49 AM
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Ya,I know. Well I hope to see the next part soon O.K? icon_wink.gif
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post May 16 2004, 02:15 PM
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Nice going Armadio!

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"You think it's okay to move to New York City and leaveyour friends behind in this crappy place!" yelled Armadio.


icon_lame.gif Smartness Armadio embarassedlaugh.gif
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post May 16 2004, 02:21 PM
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*slumps*Life mocks me at every turn.
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post May 16 2004, 02:30 PM
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*pats Armadio on back* Don't worry, I'll try not to mocj you in the next chapter. Sowwies.
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post May 16 2004, 02:33 PM
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Its okay.*bows*Besides I said life,not my friends.
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post May 17 2004, 05:51 PM
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O.o oooohh another story to read good job Haru beerchug.gif
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post Jun 20 2004, 04:34 PM
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Haru walked around around the park still trying to cool down after the episode. Maybe I was being a little too rough on Armadio. And I should apolgize to him, thought Haru as she walked along the pond. She was too caught up in thinking of what to say to her friends that she bumped into a guy. "Aaah!! I'm so sorry!" cried Haru, as she got up to help the guy.
"No, it's my fault." said the guy, as he held his hand. She looked at him and he took her breath away. He was tall around 6 foot. He had spikey black hair with brown highlights. He was asian and looked like the surfer/skater/preppy kinda guy. She blushed as her mouth dropped to the ground. "So what's your name?" he asked.
"Uh...what's my name you ask? Uhh....my name is Harutenshi, but everyone calls me Haru."
"Haha, you're a cute one. That's a cute name." He said, as he observed her.
"What's yours?"
"My name is Lei." he smiled.
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"Armadio this all your fault!" yelled Shinee as they ran after Haru.
"Well sorry!" Yelled Armadio, as the three made a turn.
"Come on you guys. Calm down! The main thing is to find Haru." Jun said, as he wiped the sweat dripping down from his forehead. All of a sudden they spotted when of their fellow friend from AF.
"NUNG!!!" the three shouted as they ran up to him.
"Oh hey guys!" said Nung, he had brown hair and was around 5'10.
"Have you seen Haru?" asked Armadio.
"I might have..."
"You sure?" asked Jun. The four walked into the park and heard two people talking.
"Well I gotta go." said Nung, as he jogged out. The three waved bye to him.
"Ya know...that voice sounds awfully familar." said Shinee. "Wait, that's Haru's!" Shinee exclaimed as the three followed the voice. They saw Haru talking to a guy. Shinee, Armadio, and Jun all exchanged weird looks as they saw Haru and the guy walk away, hand in hand.

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post Jun 20 2004, 04:47 PM
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Even in the stories that guy intrudes. Not that theres anything wrong with that.
Great job Jessie.

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post Jun 20 2004, 04:51 PM
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^Haha. It's a different dude.
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post Jun 20 2004, 04:53 PM
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Yeah but still. Nah,I'm kidding its cool.
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