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 Jan 18 2009, 05:34 PM
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AF Elite  Group: Members Posts: 6,405 Joined: 8-December 06 From: no idea.  |
Here, I am again without an umbrella within my reach. The rain keeps falling from the sky and the tears I once held back are dripping all over my face. Once upon a time, the sun was out and the grass was green. Now, the sun hides in fear and the grass is greener on the other side.
Our paths would have never crossed, however, due to our decisions, our paths crosses. We were not star crossed lovers; we did came from different worlds. Man, I'm stuck, I don't know how to continue this piece. |
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Jan 18 2009, 09:32 PM
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AF Guru  Group: Members Posts: 3,049 Joined: 6-July 04 |
It's not meant to be continued. Stamp a "The End" on it and move on to the next story.
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Jan 20 2009, 02:30 PM
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AF Pro  Group: Members Posts: 2,869 Joined: 8-February 08 |
haha shes always being cute.
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Jan 20 2009, 08:11 PM
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AF Elite Group: Members Posts: 6,405 Joined: 8-December 06 From: no idea. |
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 I'm not always being cute and no I'm not cute... I'm a MONSTER! ROAR! |
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Jan 20 2009, 10:38 PM
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AF Guru Group: Members Posts: 3,715 Joined: 22-February 05 From: Chicago |
QUOTE(miss_merisha @ Jan 20 2009, 08:11 PM) [snapback]4093973[/snapback] ^ I'm not always being cute and no I'm not cute... I'm a MONSTER! ROAR!  I like the imagery, but it gets jumbled with some words. |
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Jan 21 2009, 11:10 PM
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AF Elite Group: Members Posts: 6,405 Joined: 8-December 06 From: no idea. |
Haven't edited this piece yet and I might give up on this piece.
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Jan 24 2009, 10:06 PM
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AF Supreme  Group: Members Posts: 12,430 Joined: 12-May 04 From: somewhere out there |
QUOTE(miss_merisha @ Jan 20 2009, 08:11 PM) [snapback]4093973[/snapback] ^ I'm not always being cute and no I'm not cute... I'm a MONSTER! ROAR! hahah i liked that 
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