princess to housekeeper, ft. super junior (my first story)
princess to housekeeper, ft. super junior (my first story)
Feb 4 2007, 09:36 PM
Joined: 4-February 07
hi everyone!! this is my first story!!since my motivation to start wrting my first fanfiction was because of val's 'what i did for love' so i though i might as well to just try it! i hope that you guys will like it.... yeah... i know, my crappy writing^^" please do feel free to tell me if any parts are confusing. thanx everyone! enjoy!
Title: princess to house keeper
featuring: super junior
NOTE: since i'm writing individual stories for all of the members in super junior~~~ *yeah, i still like this group~~ it's been a year*, so, there is no main character in this story because there will be 12 different grls with ther own stories (but i'm writing all their parts... just views from different grls... that's all). i hope i don't confuse any one here. so, after so much talking.... let's get into the story!!
Ok people! imagine that your life is just perfect. Everyday, you have a limo (yes!! Your own limo and driver) to drive you everywhere you want to go and you have the latest fashion and clothing, perfect hair, perfect nails, lots of expensive jewelries, lobsters dipped in butter is just a little snack for you as appetizers Ah! Life is great!! There is no nothing to worry about. You have loving parents, good friends, money, everything that you can possibly ever want in a girl's life. Then suddenly one day, you just found out that you got kicked out of your perfect little place by no one other than your own parents who gave you the lame excuse of "Honey, you need to start depending on yourself and be independent, but remember, mommy and daddy will always love you!!" and they just throw you out in the middle of no where.
Well, that's exactly what happened to me. What did I ever do to deserve this?
Anyways, they threw me to a country where I didn't even know the language and with only a cell phone that's about to run out of batteries and a bag full of nothing but junk food. And guess what? Just when I thought this is the end of this horrible nightmare it's actually the beginning of it!! Well, you are probably wondering why, right? I'll tell you why! Trust me, you'll never believe this. I, Jung Mina, (yes me, the luxury queen!) became the servant of this crazy group of wild -not animals-, but they are more like.... what's the right word for it? Oh yeah that's right! Childish guys or what others like to call them -- celebrities! That's right! I can't believe that they are the new, ever popular, Korean boy band all over the country! That's right, you've heard it! Guess who they are? They are my 13 so called masters: Super Junior.
-End of prologue-
~~~Chapter one -- the miserable beginning~~~
Aw.. darn it! What place is this? Why do mom and dad have to leave me here? This is a tragic!! I stood in the front of the airport exit, one hand holding my bag of junk food and the other with a small bag of clothes as I watched the cars and people in front of me pass by. The sky line had already turned pitch dark and for some reason, God just won't pity me. He has to pour down a big rain on me. God! Please give me a sign, tell me how to get out of this horrible nightmare! I prayed.
Splash! As a silver BMW went by, the careless driver spoiled my Gucci jacket. My clothes! I screamed and tried catch up to that car. "Hey you! GH35560! Stop!" But it was no use, the driver had already went away in his convertible God! This is definitely not the sign I'm asking for! Why can't this be America? Why? If this was America , I could just go outside, call a taxi, and tell the driver to take me to a near by hotel. But over here, I don't even speak a single word of Korean! An even if I did speak Korean, I don't have much money with me except for the 20,000 won that I exchanged from the airplane ride from the stewardess with the only money that I have left in this jacket. (Haha, I know it's weird but I like to put some emergency money inside every one of my jackets and jean pockets so if I went outside and ran out of money or if my wallet got stolen and my driver is not there with me, I would still have enough money to make it back). But I forgot to put refills in from last time! Ah! It's all my crazy parents' fault! If they didn't tell Smithers ( my former loyal driver) to kidnap me when I've fallen asleep and take me to the airport with the most simple baggage that a traveler can ever imagine --- a bag of junk food and a bag of 4 daily changeable clothing. And with these luggages, they've put me in the plane from New York to Korea . (Author: wow! She must be amazing, how can she be sleeping through all these processes? She must be a deep sleeper! ^^) When I finally woke up, I found my self sitting in a big plane with strangers all around me and the last thing that I remembered is me reading the note that my parents had tug into my jacket pocket that said :
Have a good time! Sorry if mommy and daddy put you out there in the big world all alone by yourself but you have to understand that we just wanted you to learn to be independent and be more responsible and we want you to learn your native language, so be good!! Oh yeah, remember sweetie! You are currently in Korea! We are sure that you are going to like it there.
We love you,
Mommy and Daddy
So that's the reason why they've put me here? This is so lame and stupid! Grrr!! Hey, that's it! Where's my cute little cell phone? I've had quite a few Korean friends, maybe I can ask them if I can stay at their house tonight! Yes! As I searched inside my bag of clothes, just as soon as I've took out the mini white Samsung, my hope immediately dropped. What? It's almost out of battery?! Ah! How worse can this get? But, come to think of it, at least its got some battery right? Fine, I have to get help in this kind of emergency!
"Hello? Nana? Yes, this is Mina, I was wondering if I can stay over at your house tonight because.."
"Oops sorry, I'm busy now, gotta go bye!"
"Hey! But, I didn't even finish my sentence! Wait!" I can't believe that she hanged up on me before I've even finished my sentence! "doo doo doo.." As I listen to the hang up sound of the phone, I started to get mad and I felt that from the very first moment that I've stood on this piece of land, I have not been welcomed by it at all.
Arrg!! What kind of friend is that? Fine! Then I don't need her! Traitor! So I tried another line.
"Hey Nam Jee, guess what? I came over to Korea! Can I please stay at your house tonight? We girls will have lots of fun! I'm at.."
"Oh, it's you? I thought that your parents kicked you out of the house. But hey I really want to help you.."
Yes!! So does she mean that she will keep me? Yes yes yes!! Humph! Park Nam Ji! You are so dead! How dare you talk to me like that? I have a name! But, I'll forgive you since you've decided-"
"sorry! Our whole family's got a horrible case of chicken pox! Bye!"
What the heck people?! Is this what you considered as friends? But what about the "we are best friends and will help each other through everything no matter what? I give up! So there are no real friends around me except for money and luxury? And how do they know that I'm kicked out of my house?...
Looking down at my cell phone, the batteries are about to go out, there are only enough batteries to make one call, but who can I call! "Grrrrrr" Oops! That was so embarrassing! How can my stupid stomach growl and object to me at public? So, out of my so called eating emergency, I opened my bag of junk food and took out a bag of lays chips and silently, sitting on the floor of the airport exit, eating the only food that I was going to have for my dinner.
"Gome te ma ri ga han ji be yi so, appa goon, amma goon, eggi goon!" Huh? My cell phone suddenly rung. Who would call me this time?
"Hey Mina! I heard that you are already at Korea right?"
"Huh? Who are you, wait! You are Yun Hee!! Yun Hee, can I please please please stay at your house? I'm all alone here at the airport; I'm cold and hungry and wet with only a stupid bag full of junk foods!! And my clothes are dirty all thanks to that stupid driver. I cried over the phone, hoping that Yun Hee my last hope would help me.
"Hey don't cry Mina, calm down! I'm on my way! I have a feeling that you are in Korea some how. Ok, tell me which exit you are at."
~~~An hour later~~~
"Yup! Welcome to your new home Mina! This is our school dorm! I know it's kinda small and all but that's all I've got out here! And there's your bed." said Yun Hee, pointing to the bottom mattress of the small twin size bunk bed next to me. "The bathroom is over there by the left of the room. If you are hungry, I'll make you some instant noodles, since it's so late and we are not allowed to make loud noises in the dorm so sorry that I can't cook you anything else." Yay!! Food!! That's ok, it's better than anything that I've been eating for the whole day.
I smiled at her. "Oh yeah, if you need anything, you can call me, I'll be sleeping on the top of the bunk bed! Remember to wake up early tomorrow in the morning so I can go to the principal's office to sign up with you!"
Well, at least this place is clean and dandy. Ahh! Even though this is smaller than my room at home but, oh well, at least I have a place to stay at.
-End of Chapter 1-
Chapter two--- my new life
Now, it has been a month since I came to Korea . Well, come to think of it, Korea wasn't as bad as I thought, at least, with Yun Hee's help, I've managed to get everything done easily. So, I guess I can say that my new life has just begun.
The school that I'm attending now is called St. Lafford High or SLH. And it acquires each and every one of the students not only to study but to also go out side and get a part time job which they called "job training" that students do to get paid so they will stand a better career chance than the students at other schools when they graduate. Also, this "job training" also counts as 30% of your grade! I'm ok with everything except the job training part because I don't even have to do my chores back at home so how the heck am I going to have a part time job outside? My maid did everything for me back home and the only thing that I had to do was to make myself look good. But since it's for my grade, I'll do it. I've never flunked any of my classes before and I don't want this school to have my first ever history of flunking any classes, especially when it comes to this job training part. Besides I need money to support myself and the school expenses. Right now, I have to find something to do that's just for me.
Beep beep beep!! As the sound of Yun Hee's alarm clock rang through my ear, I slowly opened my eyes, seeing the first ray of sunshine coming from the window. "Oh my God! Mina! Wake up! We are going to be so late! Come on!" Yun Hee screamed from the top of her lungs. As I slowly grabbed the alarm clock near to my eyes, I screamed too. "It's 9 am?! What happened to the clock? I thought I put it to 8:30am!" I asked Yun Hee as we quickly got dressed and got ready for school. "Did you push the button that has a bell on it? Or the one with a book on it??"she asked, after she had grabbed her homework from the desk into her backpack.
'I think I pushed the book one." Then she stared at me.
"Oh darn it! You should have pushed the button with the bell! The one with the book is set on for weekends only."
"Oops! Sorry!'' How am I supposed to know that? Yun Hee's the only one who uses her alarm clock. I always use my watch. If I didn't leave my watch at school yesterday I wouldn't be so late today.
"Come on Mina!" Thank God! We only used 10 minuets to ran all the way from our dorm to our English classroom.
"That.... that.. was..a.. a.. amazing!!'' as we breathed heavily and started to walk towards the class. There are still 15 more minuets until the class is about to start. So I've decided to walk to the cafeteria to get a cup of cappuccino.
"Thanks! That'll be 4000 won!" As the impatient lady stared at me, I searched through my wallet for the money for the cup of cappuccino. Even though I am learning Korean, but, my Korean is still pretty horrible. Let me take this as an example. It took me 5 minuets to explain to the lady what a cappuccino is. I have to point to the milk over at the refrigerator across from the ordering table and then point at a cup of coffee that a man was drinking and I kept on saying "Milk with coffee, yes, yes, hot milk coffee." Everyone in the cafeteria was staring at me with the ''what the heck" look and "Why are you taking so long?" look. When I had finally finished my cup of cappuccino, and looked up at the clock on the cafeteria wall I realized that there were only 8 more minuets left!!! Oh darn it!! As I was running as fast as I could towards my class, I accidentally bumped into someone. All of my books dropped to the ground, papers were flying everywhere.
"I'm so sorry, I apologies for that!" A cute guy's voice flew through my ear, apologizing to me in Korean. But of course I don't understand what he was talking about. All I heard in my head was "blah blah blah blah" Arrg!! The last thing that I'd want is to bump into someone and make myself late to class. "Don't you have eyes? Goodness, don't you know that I'm late for class? Ahh, now my books and homework is ruined!! Oh my Gosh!! There's a big foot print on my homework!! Professor Park will so kill me now!" Without even looking at that poor human being that I was scolding at, I released every strand of madness and grievance inside me even though that I know it's my fault. "Don't you know how hard it is to be kicked out by your own parents from home and come to this strange and odd school all alone while almost all of your friends has turned their backs on you??..." as I talked and talked, I forgot that I have to go to class now, I just let all the things in my mind run through and be release through my mouth. When I finally finished, I cried out, my tears came running down my cheek, and then, I looked up to the person that I've bumped into, that guy sure looked shocked. His eyes opened wide like a gold fish, his jaws dropped and I guess he had never ever seen a girl like this before, so crazy and sad. But then, he returned to his normal look, and held out his hand.
"Oh, so you speak English huh? Are you a transferred student? I'm sorry that I've bumped into you!" Then, he smiled warmly at me. Now, this is my first time looking up at that poor guy that I've just screamed at. Wow! He's pretty cute and shy; perhaps.. I should say cute and pretty. His features looked so delicate like a porcelain doll. "Hi, my name is Kim Kibum, what?s your name?"
"I'm Jung Mina. Sorry about that, I didn't mean to scold at you, I think I'm just too stressed out.. I should be the one that's apologizing." I answered as he helped me up. Hey wait.. Did he just talk to me in English? How did he know English? I wanted to ask but I remembered that I had to go to class.
"Sorry, I have to go now, bye! But thank you!"
As I rushed to my class and into my seat, the bell had just rung. Whoa! That was close!
-End of Chapter2-
Author's note : whoa!! that was long!! srry.. but i hope you guys like it! i'll do my best to finish the story! please feel free to leave me comments! i will be happy to correct my mistakes!
P.S. Thanks to my friend Jen for correcting my grammar part of the story and helping me come up with the title!! Love you!! You are the best!
This post has been edited by pucapunipoemi: Feb 4 2007, 09:38 PM
Feb 4 2007, 11:54 PM
Joined: 22-January 07
I love u
Feb 5 2007, 02:10 PM
Joined: 24-October 06
that was pretty good, kinda fast
but it was good. write more!
Feb 9 2007, 10:11 PM
Joined: 4-February 07
PB. & Mun-Mun: thanx for reading! hope you guys enjoy the new chapter!
Chapter three-- kim kibum
Thank goodness! This boring class is finally over. “Where have you been?”
Yun Hee asked after the bell. I knew she would be suspicious when she saw
the big foot print on my homework because I’ve always kept my homework
clean and neat. “I went to buy some coffee at the cafeteria… but I bumped
into someone and my stuff had dropped to the ground…. I don’t wanna talk
about it… it was just so embarrassing!” then, as Yun Hee looked at me, still
wanting to say something but had swallowed it down her throat because she
know that I won’t tell her anything no matter how much she bug me. The only
possibility for her to find out is to wait for me to tell her.
Ahh! This school is so complicated! How come it’s so big? I still can’t get used
to it after being in here for a whole month! Arrg! Thus, after my 5th morning
class, my head started to hurt badly~~~ and then it came the dizziness! So
much for this! Yes!! Finally! Lunch time! The best time of the day is here! As I
dragged Yun Hee, the over achiever--who is still thinking her head off for her
precalculous homework--to the café two blocks away from the school. Compared
to her, I’m more of a food craver at lunch time. As we stood in the waiting line, Yun
Hee suddenly told me that she has to make a call for home and she had asked
me if she can borrow my cell phone. “Sure, but let me find it first.” As I search
thru my pocket for my white mini Samsung, all I can find is two keys for our
dorm door, some coins, and two pieces of gum but no cell phone. Where is it?! Where
could it be? I remembered that I’ve put it in my pocket this morning, even thru all of the
rush…. OMG!! This is the phone that went with me from America all the way to here!
This is the cell phone that went thru the unbelievable reality that I’ve got kicked out of
my own house with me! How could I ever lose it?! ….. Ok Mina! Don’t panic! Think think
think! Where is the last place that you’ve seen it? It’s…. it’s…. OMG! It’s the cafeteria!
Would it be? No! It wouldn’t be! I didn’t saw it on the ground when my things had scattered
on the floor…. But probably, I didn’t look clearly because all I did was yelling at that poor guy
named…. Wait... What was his name again? Korean names are so hard to remember! They
all have something like Kim, Lee, Sung, and Won in them.. Well maybe not all of them but
most if them! And anyways, why should I be even thinking about some stranger’s name?!
All that it matters now is—to find my precious cell phone!! “Is there something wrong?”
from my panicking action, Yun Hee sensed that there’s something unusual happening …
“Yun Hee, I’m so sorry, it’s not that I don’t want to borrow you my phone but I think I’ve
lost my cell phone during the time that I was there at the cafeteria!” “That’s ok, I’ll help you
find it!” Aww… how come she’s always so understanding? She’s such a good friend!!
Just as I was about to walk out of the line, some one called “Mina! Jung Mina!” Who’s
calling me? I don’t even know anyone else at school besides Yun Hee (<--- due to my poor
Korean), who on earth would be calling my precious name? As I turned around, I immediately
saw the guy that I’ve bumped into this morning. “Oh! It’s you! You’re….” “Kim Kibum.” He
finished my sentence for me~~~~ how embarrassing! It’s so unmannered to not know
the name of the person who your talking to…~__~” “Oh, I came to give you back your
cell phone. You forgot to pick it up this morning.” He smiled warmly again and answered.
This is the second time that I’m looking at him closely… like really paying attention to his
feature. He’s got a pair of really thick eye brows, unlike other Asians, compared to them,
he has a pair of big and glassy like eyes, his nose is somewhat a bit pointy but not too
over done nor is it flat down like the other Asian guys that I’ve seen. Wow! His teeth are
also amazingly white and perfect when you put it together with the pink lips, he’s
gorgeous! Wonder if he has ever got braces or is it just natural. With that short black hair,
I guess you can say that there’s a prince charming like guy standing in front of me. You can
never get tired of looking at him! “You guys know each other?” Yun Hee finally interrupted
me. “Um... I guess…He’s that guy that I’ve bumped into this morning…” I answered as I
looked at Yun Hee’s shocking face. “OMG! Do you know who this guy is?” she asked me
again. “Didn’t you listen to him? He said his name was…” “He’s Kim Kibum!!! That cutest
member from Super Junior!” she finished my sentence for me. “So? What’s so shocking
about that?” Yun Hee looked at me surprisingly “Don’t you ever listen to Korean pop
songs? OMG! And you call your self a Korean? Goodness! Super Junior is the ever popular
Korean boy band! This guy is a celebrity standing before you! And he’s the most popular
guy in the school! ...Well actually one of the popular guys in school beside the other Super
Junior members who’s attending our school .” Ok… now I’ve remembered something! No
wondered that day when Yun Hee brought me to the principal’s office to sign in for the school,
the principal has taken out a bunch of documents for me to sign. Yun Hee told me they are
some basic rules to the school that says I can’t tell anybody outside of the school about other
students’ informations, I can’t even mention their names. Oh… so this is the reason to that!
They don’t want us to tell everybody outside about that there are celebrities in our school!
No wonder! At first I thought the principal was going to sell me as some kind of property to
someone because I have to sign so many papers~~~ now I know that what I had assumed was
not true… but why would they attend this school? Yun Hee told me that SM Entertainment,
which is the company they work for, wanted every one of their celebrities to have enough
education to deal with their career and the outside world, so they have to finish all the way
to university and graduate.
“So, do you guys want to eat at the same lunch table with me and my friends? Since
the seats are running out…” as that cute voice asked, a large group of girls has looked at
our way, trying to kill me and Yun Hee with their dangerous stares. I don’t have a good
feeling about this….
-End of chapter 3-
Feb 11 2007, 11:25 AM
Joined: 24-October 06
that was so cute.
haha, post more
Feb 27 2007, 09:20 PM
Joined: 4-February 07
Chapter 4 part 1-- meeting the guys
If Yun Hee still have some sense, she would have let me reject the offer but I guessed that she’s just too
excited to even think about what will happen to us afterwards than having lunch with a bunch of popular
celebrities. As we come up to the table with Kibum, there were a bunch of girls who’s coming closer and
closer by the minute…. And they just keeo on staring at me and Yun Hee with disbelieving eyes. “Can you girls
back up a little? Thanks!” as Kibum said politely to that huge group of girls. Luckily, they can’t do anything in
front of their favorite celebrities because they don’t want to leave a bad impression for their admirers. But I
have a feeling that we are going to get killed after Kibum and the other guys are gone….
As we come near to the table, I instantly saw 4 guys looking at us. How should I describe them? Well,
let’s just say, all I can say is that they all look…good.... that’s it.
Then, I heard Kibum talking to all of his friends in Korean and Yun Hee just whispered back at me telling
me what he’s talking about. According to Yun Hee’s translation, she said that Kibum is introducing us to his
friends. And she just couldn’t keep herself from going hyper like “ OMG!! It’s Sungmin, that cute teddy bear-like
boy in the group!” as I followed the direction that Yun Hee was pointing at. That guy waved at me and
smiled cutely at us.. Oh boy, no wonder he’s “teddy boy”. “And there’s Leeteuk! The group leader, who is
famous in the group for his “water screen” for waking up the members in the morning. Oh, and the guy
nearest to you is called Donghae. He likes to wear baggy boy clothings a lot. Over there that’s the newest
member of the group! His name is called Cho Kyuhyun, who’s also the youngest of the group. And finally…
Kim Ryeo Wook! My personal favorite! Third youngest of the group who’s shy but also very talented in
music! Especially the piano!!” OMG!! Is she crazy or not? Did she not know that I just came to Korea? How in
the world am I going to remember all those difficult names? Besides, how many people are in this crazy boy
band? ARRG!!! My head starts to hurt again!! “Don’t be shy Mina! We know how to speak English so if you
got any problems on your school work, you can ask us! Oh yeah, especially Kibum and Shiwon, since
they are in the same grade as you two!” said the kind band leader. We smiled back at him and sat down
into our seats. And then, friendly conversation went on and on. But suddenly…..
“Hey, that girl! Yeah! You! Stop looking back and forth like an idiot! Yeah you! So your name is Jung
Mina?” (x_x) I’m speechless! Who would be so rude? As I turned around, I saw a tan, spiky hair guy
walking towards our table, looking at me weirdly… How dare he speak English to me?! English is supposed
to be a graceful language!! “Hey you porcupine head! Didn't you learn any manners? Don’t you know
that this is not the proper way that you should address some one? You have to use the respectful form!” I
said to that spiky head…. Or that rude porcupine head. Then suddenly, every member of the band is gazing at me, even
Yun Hee's gazing at me, with wide eyes… “What? Shouldn’t I talk back to his rudeness?”
“That… is Choi Shi Won. Known for his coldness and ignorance but, since he’s also good looking, he became
the second most popular SJ member! And, he’s super smart and tricky!” as Yun Hee whispered. Oh… so that’s the name of
that rude spiky head! “Yeah, Shi Won hyung… calm down. She’s a new transferred student!” as Kibum
and Kyuhyun said to that yellow shirt spiky head. Yun Hee gave me a pitiful look….
to be continued....
This post has been edited by pucapunipoemi: Apr 25 2009, 04:42 PM
Feb 28 2007, 11:18 AM
Joined: 22-January 07
This is a fun story
Mar 4 2007, 12:57 AM
Joined: 11-March 04
where's the continuation?
Mar 5 2007, 11:17 PM
Joined: 4-February 07
QUOTE(e_vaholic @ Mar 4 2007, 12:57 AM) [snapback]2765623[/snapback]
where's the continuation?
don't worry! i'll put up the next chapter up soon! usually when i say "to be continued" itjust mean that there's more than 1 pt to the chapter because i separated them in parts due to not enough time writing the whole thing so yeah~~~
just to make sure it doesn't confuse u ^^"
Mar 9 2007, 09:03 PM
Joined: 4-February 07
chapter 4 Pt 2/2 Choi Shiwon
Afterwards, I tried to calm myself down too… but, how can a guy be so rude like that? Why can’t he be
more like understanding or perhaps… more friendly and nice like Kibum? Humph! Anyways, we just sat in
our spots and I just tried to ignore that spiky’s rude words…. Well… until suddenly this topic just came up
“Oh yeah Mina, do you know about the job training part for the school which goes into your grade?”
Kyuhyun asked innocently. “Yup, I’m still thinking about what I should do! This is so hard!! I don’t want to
fail!” I answered. “Hehe… I bet she’s just too stupid to do anything or as people would say…. Useless.” Ok…
Mina, breath in, breath out! Inhale! Exhale! I can see that the other members of the band trying to giving
Shiwon signs telling him to stop, especially that leader named Leeteuk. Mina, remember what you learned in
health class? Ok, calm down… just think about what happened and talk it out with the person who’s involved
in the problem and everything will settle just fine. I kept my silence, my precious silence….so, I held my
peace and kept on my smiling face and kept the conversation going. “Hmm.. really? What about you Yun
Hee?” “oh, I’ve got a job at the bakery nearby… I was thinking about getting Mina in the bakery with me…
well, that is if she wants to go with me.” Yun Hee answered but continued “But, I’m still worried about Mina,
since she’s not very fluent with Korean…and the grading is according to how well you are doing with the job
you have. I’m sure that you guys are familiar with that rule in the school right? I mean, they do call your
work place and check on you….” And she sighted sadly. “Oh really? Mina, if you don’t mind, I’ve got
something in mind for you… that is if you want to do it… and it doesn’t require you to be fluent with Korean
plus, we’ll guarantee you get the grade that you deserve!” the leader guy interrupted and said. “Well, sure,
what do you have?” I was curious about it. “Our old housekeeper Ms. Yoo just got sick a few days ago and
we can’t find anyone to take care of our house and we are in need of a good housekeeper for us since you
know how our schedule is, except that today, the four of us is kinda loose…and… yeah…if you don’t
mind….” “And your point is?” I asked, confused… why is he talking about some old housekeeper that they’ve
hired? “Well, I was thinking…that maybe you… could be our…. housekeeper? Since we don’t know who else
to hire because if we send the news out and when those crazy fans have heard the news they will probably
make a mess in our house instead of cleaning it and our company doesn’t have enough workers out there
for Lee SooMan to order them to clean our house and take care of it for us. Plus, Ms. Yoo is getting pretty
old….” He looked at me with his puppy dog eyes… “WHAT? ARE U CRAZY? ME BEING A
HOUSEKEEPER?” “WHAT? ARE U CRAZY? SHE BEING A HOUSEKEEPER?” both me and that spiky shouted out
at the same time “SHH!!!” everyone at the table gave us a warning glare and the leader guy
continued… “Aiish! Don’t be so loud! Everyone is staring at you guys right now!” Leeteuk warned. “Hyung..
maybe u should rethink about this! I mean, how can we hire her? Besides, we don’t even get along well!
This is like the first day that we’ve met this girl and how can we trust her?” Shiwon asked. “Yeah.. Why
choose me?” this is like the first time that I’ve agreed with this yellow shirt spiky hedgehog head. “It’s
simple! Because, she’s not familiar with us and she’s not one of our fans! So she’ll just look at us and judge
us like normal people!” “But I don’t think this is such a good idea.. I mean it’s a girl in a house full of guys
that I don’t even know…..” I said in a doubtful voice.
“Look at her, she doesn’t even look like she know how to do anything! AHAHAHA!” Shiwon said in
sarcasm. “Hey! What do you mean that I can’t do anything? I’ll show you that I can do it!” I defied him..
trying to defend myself. “Oh yeah? I bet that you don’t even know how make scramble eggs!” the yellow
shirt spiky argued back. “How do u know that I don’t know how to do it?” I questioned back. “Well then, tell
me how u make it step by step!” and he looked at me waiting for me to answer him. “Well… hmm.. that..
that is a … that’s a very good question… how do u make a scramble egg.. well.. different people have
different taste and…,” I’m trying to take up time as much as possible. “And?” he looked at me with an evil
smirk on his face… then smiled, with a satisfying look on his face telling everyone that he’s going to win this
argument. “and.. different people have different tastes so… the ones that I make probably won’t suit u since
Americans have different cooking styles than Koreans.” Arrg!! Somebody help me!! This guy is just so…
“Ha! This is the stupidest come back I’ve ever heard. Anyone who’s smart enough knows that you don’t
know how to make it!” “You know what? I will do it and I will show you that I can so do it! I’ll prove it to
you!” I yelled back. “Oh, really? When is that? A hundred years later?” “GRRR!! I’ll show u! Starting…..
-end of chapter 4-
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Apr 21 2009, 10:05 AM
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where's the rest!?! this is good i want to know whats gunna happened!!!
Apr 25 2009, 04:23 PM
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Chapter 5 pt1 -- unexpected kiss
"East Camel Street #231 ……" as I was facing a big mansion that looked a bit too excessive to be
called the house of what normal teenagers/ young adults would live in, but it’s completely normal if you
call it Korea's most popular boy band’s house. I read the address again and again, making sure that I
am at the right place. This reminded me about my unfortunate life again! Aww man! Come to think of
it, I'm starting to regret my choice already …. GRRR! If it wasn’t for that hedgehog head, I will not even
agree to this idea in the first place … Darn it! If I could've only calm down at that time and start to think
about what will happen to me later, I wouldn't be here standing in front of this house, which many girls have
only dreamed of coming. But for me, I really really do wish that I'm one of those unlucky girls that can
never ever come near to this house, which is in front of me right now …. Oh kapeeish! You
know what Jung Mina? It’s too late to turn back now! You just have to stick with it. You’ve given your words
so you have to keep it! As I was thinking about whether to go inside or keep on staring at this mansion, I
suddenly saw a silver BMW parked on the other side of the street near to the mansion … Hey, that car
looked awfully familiar …. “GH35560 …” As I look at the driver license plate … GH35560 … have I heard that
some where before? ….. ahhh what ever, who cares …
Then, I slowly walked up the stairs to the front porch, and as I’ve finally had the guts to stand in front of the
door. Ok … Just knock it … knock it!! As I told myself to do so, my hands started to sweat. As I raise up my
trembling hand that's getting closer and closer to the door by the second, my body is drawing nearer and
nearer to the door, 3 ….2….1…..
Huh?! Who the heck opened the door at this time?! Oh, damn it! When my hand was only 1 mm from the door, it
opened by itself. "Waaaa?" I guessed that I was too surprised to react when door just
suddenly opened like that. I just lose my balance …as I expected to hit the cold hard marble floor, I
prayed that God will protect my face. Please! GOD! Why do you have to be so cruel to me? What if Choi Shiwon
saw me like this? You know that spiky head lives here so why do you have to let me fall and be his laughingstock?
I bet he'll laugh his head off afterwards! However, fortunately, or i should say unfortunately, God did return
my prayer, he did protect my beautiful face and he did prevent me from being a laughing stock ……..
because, everyone was staring at me!!!!
As I was falling forward, I saw a big, magnified face of no one other than----SPIKY?! That’s fine! As long as he
catches me, I'll let it go. OMG!!! Do you believe in fate? Before, I don’t even believe that this word actually
exist but I guess that there is fate in this world. In fact, everyone has one, it’s just whether they came
early or late. Well, my fate did came, but at the WRONG time with the WRONG person! My precious pink lips
landed right on my worst enemy! It’s not too high nor too low nor to the sides of the cheek or anything … it
landed no place other than his lips!!!! It’s like God was trying to fool around with me ….. HOW COULD THIS BE?!
to be continue....
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Apr 25 2009, 06:12 PM
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awww yay!! thanks! can't wait for the next one!
thanks for the link!
Apr 25 2009, 07:57 PM
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ch5 Pt2-- Reaction
As all the guys in the mansion stared at me and the devil standing by my side whom I just lost my first ever
precious kiss to, I pushed away, turning red, and I had such a strange feeling inside me. It’s nothing like
I’ve ever experienced….. I peeked at Shiwon, I saw his face turning red too… just like me, perhaps I
should say it’s redder than mine…. We just stood there, in silence. Finally at once, we did not argue
with each other…. It felt so… strange……“Omg! Congrats Shiwon hyung! You’ve got it! I can’t believe it! It’s
your first…..” Kyuhyun said happily, clapping his hands but suddenly the statue like Shiwon just turned
around and quickly covered Kyuhyun’s mouth with his palm. Then, I saw that every member of the band
starts to mumble and giggle about something and they just looked at me and Shiwon like two aliens from
outer space….. Anyways, just then, Kibum and Sungmin entered into the house. It looks like they just got
back from their commercial casting. “Hyung, why is the door opened up like this?” as they asked that strong
muscular/ sorta scary guy….. oh wait.. what was his name again? I remembered that Yunhee and Kibum had
told me and introduced me to the other members once and they’ve mentioned this guy… I think it’s Kang
something… Kang Kong? King Kong? Well, it’s something like that.
“Omg! Shiwon I don’t believe it! How can you kiss Mina? How could you? Mina is supposed to be as innocent
as an angel! I can’t believe you!” as Sungmin the teddy boy pitied for me. Anyway, isn’t that a bit too
exaggerated? But in the other hand, I looked at Kibum, he just kept quiet and he had a weary smile on his
face…. Not the normal sunny warm smile anymore…. He just looked even more quiet than usual….. My
“Um…. I think… we should settle this down. Listen, Jung Mina. I’ll just let this go since this is done in neither
of our own will so I’ll let it go. But only if…..” as that spiky turned my attention from Kibum back to him, his
looked at me evilly with the smirk on his face which he had used to trick me into agreeing to do this house
keeper job. I can’t believe that his blushing moment went by so quickly! How did he do that? What the heck?
Does he have multipersonnality or something? Hmm… I knew it! This is definitely not a good idea to start with…
dam it! “What do you want?” I looked back at him, trying to act brave.
“But, only if you promise not to tell anyone in the school or other people outside and I’ll make sure that the
guys over here will keep they mouth shut about this. And of course… about the responsibility….” Yup.. this is the
part that I wanted to hear about “…. Since you are the one who bumped into me, it is YOUR fault! So in order to
pay for the loss of my sex appeal.. you have to become not only the housekeeper of this house but also my
personal servant to pay me back what you have done to me.” What?! Is this guy crazy or what? It’s my fault?
This is totally an accident! This is so not fair! I mean, he’s a celebrity, he should have experienced kisses
when he was shooting commercials and TV series with other female stars isn’t it? I mean, I should be the one
who’s saying that line right? He should be the one who’s taking responsibility for this! And plus, it’s my first kiss!
My precious virgin lips…. It kept itself virgin for a whole 17 years! How could this be?
“But this is an acci….” As I was trying to argue back, he answered me back with an unbelievable
comeback. “If you don’t do it, I’ll make sure to give you a bad grade and make you forever regret this! I’ll
tell the teacher who’s checking your progress about how a bad worker you are!”
“But…. I …”
“No 'it’s 'and’s and 'but’s! Starting tomorrow, you have to come here at exactly 6:00 AM in the morning
and make our breakfast. Sometimes, we might need you to prepare lunch for special purposes. After
school, you have to come here straight. Be sure to finish doing the laundry before we come home… which
is about 5:00 pm. Then, you have to clean our rooms… and especially mine, please make sure that you’ve s
crubbed the floor clean and shinny you got that? Ok, dinner should be on the table at 7:00 PM straight, but
sometimes we won’t eat at home so we’ll call you and….” Then he paused, and continued. “Don’t u think u
can take a break from that. If that happens, you have to clean the bathroom along with cutting the front lawn plus
make sure you wipe those windows clean. Don’t let me see one single water stain on it! And as for today,
your job is to make each and everyone here their dinner you got that?” What?! How can I remember so
many things? This is insane! So that means I have to accept it? No way! But if I don’t he’s gonna make me
look like a bad student/ worker in front of the teacher! ARRGGG!!! “Oh yeah, don’t put any peppers into any
of my food! If I catch that, you!” then he pointed at me… “You will be so dead!” “Hey, don’t you know that
it’s rude to point at people?” arrg… even though I know this is a worthless come back, but still, this is
better than keeping myself silent. “Wait just a minuet!” as I turned around and I saw Kibum, finally retrieved
from his silence, started to walk towards Shiwon… “Shiwon Hyung… don’t you think this is a bit too harsh?
I mean, Mina is new here and you know that she can’t possibly finish all those things!” then that leader guy
started to tell Shiwon to stop this insanity and everyone said that it is really not fair to me since it was just
an accident. “Oh yeah Shiwon! Remember! We have to put all of our scores together to average out the
total so it won’t make much difference even if you gave Mina bad grades!” as the adorable Sungmin said.
Thank you so much for standing up for me! “Shiwon ah! Don’t torture a cute girl like that! It’s really unfair!
Imagine you being in Mina’s shoes!” as Yesung oppa said trying to calm down Shiwon… but it was no use…
no matter how everyone was trying to calm Shiwon down, it was just making the situation worse…… “Hyung!
You guys shouldn’t interfere with this… since I said she will have to be my personal maid and the
housekeeper of this house so only minor scores will come from you guys, but the major score has to come
from me. Besides, this would be good exercises for her. She looks like she really needs a lesson on how to
take care of her chores…”
Just then, I thought that my life was doomed Kibum suddenly came close and he grabbed me by my hand
and said to Shiwon, “Hyung, I don’t think so! From now on, I will also be Mina’s personal master, as in she is
my OWN personal servant and I’m sure that is higher than personal servant right? So there, the score will
average out! And don’t you think that you can order this girl around because I’ll make sure that you won’t
hurt one single strand of her hair!” then, he grabbed my hand tightly and took me with him, walking toward
the door way…. And suddenly he turned back “Oh yeah, Shiwon hyung, today, Mina’s taking a break from
work. Hope you won’t mind!”
And, everyone just stared at us, shocked again... their mouths opened wide… I’m sure that I can put a
whole pineapple into each and everyone of their mouths with out wasting my effort to squish it down their
throat… and I looked back at that Spiky… his face turned into a deep dark reddish color. His eyes turned
into nearly a purplish brown color. His right hand clenched together into a fist… boy, he look as mad as h***…
yup.. I’m sure Mt. Shiwon is going to go “puff” and explode!
Chapter 5 end
Apr 26 2009, 03:27 PM
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lol awww how cute! yet exciting! can't wait for more!
Apr 26 2009, 04:33 PM
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Chapter 6 pt1--magic crush
Phew! After that argument, I’m sure that I’ll never go back to that house again.... at least for some time!
Actually, i'm even surprised myself how we even manage to slam the door at Shiwon.... i was so freaked
out that time.. but thank god i did not panic but I just realized that i had made Shiwon and Kibum turned
against each other right? Why do I have to cause so many trouble for Kibum? … After all, that’ll make his life in that
house harder… poor boy….[ author: and you too!] Anyways, now, thanks to Kibum, I had my day off and we
are walking on one of the most popular tourist streets in Korea. So many people are chattering, so noisy and all…
but the atmosphere is so happy and joyfully merry…. And I saw 1, 2, 3, 4, 5,….. so many couples walking
together, holding hands, flirting in some sort of way. The warm light of the street lamp gave the street a
magnificent dreamy feeling, as if you were looking at a piece of art work….. wait… WAIT A SECOND!
COUPLES ON STREET? FLIRTING? I mean, it would be normal but, EVERYBODY is holding hands!!! …. WHERE
DID ALL THOSE COUPLES CAME FROM? WHAT DAY IS TODAY? OMG JUNG MINA! ! WHERE AM I?!
“Kibum shi, where are we going? And why are all those people acting like that? Is this a movie you’re
shooting?” I asked, feeling like an idiot. “Shh!!” Kibum warned me with the mention of his name… oh… so
this isn’t a movie shooting cast or else he wouldn’t tell me to keep quiet about his name. Then, he led me
into an ice cream shop. Wow! This is the cutest shop I’ve ever seen! There were 3 little mood dolls hanging
at the front door (author: I’m not sure if this is what u call it.. cuz they are those dolls that look like cute
Halloween ghost dolls that u would normally hang on the tree.. but except cuter without the scariness… if
anyone kno wut that’s called, plz tell me and correct me. Thanx! ok, back to the story) as the wind blows on
them, their little white skirt puffs up, as if they just finished eating from the shop… on the top of the
building, printed in comic sans font with the words “magic crush” in rainbow color. On the outside, the huge
glass windows substituted the awkward tiled walls. Making the shop looked like a crystal castle. When we
went in, the rich ice cream aroma suddenly filled the air. The rich creamy taste of vanilla, bitter sweet
chocolate chips….. and the fruity smell of strawberry cream….mmm!! I’m hungry! “Mrs. Woo, 2 bowel of
magic crush please!” as Kibum ordered. “Got ya!” as the puny little woman answered. “Do you always come
here? Sounds like you are really similar with this place!” I said looking at him, curiously, trying to guess was
he was trying to say… but he just looked at me with a warm smile on his face as if that was his way of
“Here you go, two bowels of magic crush” as two plates of beautifully arranged rainbow colored, flower
shaped ice cream appeared in front of us. It looks so pretty! I felt so guilty about eating it! just as I was
about to dig in, the shopkeeper said to Kibum with a jolly tone “Oh yeah, Kibum ah, I thought you said that
you will never find someone who would be suitable with magic crush. But looks like that is this the special
girl. She looks wonderful!” as the shop keeper kept her nice warm tone… I can see that they are pretty
familiar with each other…. But special girl? What special girl? And what exactly did she meant? As I turned
towards Kibum, I saw his cute face turning a bit red… as if there’s a little secret that he has held tight into
himself for a long time, but which he does not want to reveal yet…. Is he waiting for the right time?
to be continued...
Ch6 pt2/2--babo and friend
So…. Back to the point….. the ice cream shop keeper just winked at us and went away… wonder what that is
for…. Anyways, I have never ever been so happy and merry for a long time until now. We talked and
talked, it’s like, I spilled out every bit of dissatisfaction inside me. I felt so glad that finally, there’s some one
other than Yunhee who can actually understand my feelings-- My sadness. Then, as I took
big spoonful of my rainbow colored ice cream, the coldness has melted in my mouth and somehow I felt that
it has washed away all my troubles—the fact being kicked out of my own house, from losing my perfect
little place to now, living in Korea with the only friend that I have, to being the housekeeper/maid for super
junior….. it all just happen so fast, it’s like I have no more remaining seconds for reaction time or to
simply adapt to all those changes. Especially when you’ve just realized that you gave away your precious
first kiss to the person that u hate the most in the world…..
As I was eating between each spoonful, the sweetness of the ice cream has eased away the pain slowly…
and it’s like some sort of curing medicine, I’m feeling much and much better. I had totally forgotten the
dieting plan that I’ve set for myself along with YunHee’s help. At first, I only took little spoonful and then, as
the sweet taste got into my mouth, I just can’t resist it anymore. My stomach just craves for more and
more. ARRGG!! My hard work… all that 3lb that I’ve lose this month, from all the restrictions, has turned
into nothing now… GRRR! Fine! I don’t care anymore! This ice cream taste so good! “Oh yeah Kibum shi, you
still haven’t answered my questions yet! Why are you…..” then, I saw Kibum staring at me with his oppa to
dongsang expression on his face … “Huh? Is there something on my face?” I paused and ask. Then,
he slowly took out his right hand, picked up a napkin from the table, and reached for my face, paused, then
wiped off the cream off my side lip… that was so strange… it’s done in such a careful way that you can’t
even complain any thing about it. “Babo! Be careful next time! Remember to wipe off your mouth after
you’ve finished eating you food!” “Thanks! I.. I think I can do it my self.” Then, I awkwardly took that piece
of napkin from Kibum and wiped off the remaining bits of ice cream.
Then, I felt an unusual coldness coming from behind, and it goes down all the way from myneck to spine… is
there…. SOMEONE SPYING ON US?! Then, I heard foot steps coming toward us, closer and closer and closer,
it sounds like the owner of that foot step is very very mad and they are hiding their anger to the
extreme… so.... impatient, as if they are ready to.... KILL?!.... “JUNG MINA! COME HERE! YOU SERVANT
GIRL!!” yup, guess who this thundering/demanding voice belongs to? Who could it be? Of course, that’s no
one other than my worst enemy……..
end of chapter 6
Apr 27 2009, 09:33 AM
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its getting good!!!
Apr 29 2009, 10:28 PM
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Chapter 7-- The Trap
“JUNG MINA! COME HERE! YOU SERVANT GIRL!!” as I looked at the way which the angry sound came from,
I saw--- SPIKY….. Dam it! Why does he have to come over here? And how come he doesn’t even have
anything on him to cover up his face? I slowly moved my body in my seat, until I was about to stand up and
I thought “Jung Mina, why do u have to listen to him? Who does he think he is? You’re not his personal slave
or anything.” Yeah! That’s right! Why SHOULD I listen to him? …. So.. An evil plan took root in my mind.
Since this is a public place, and he didn’t put on anything to cover his face up, he has to control his voice
from yelling loud so he will not be recognized right? Haha, then, I’m not going to stand up and follow him! So
just keep on calling! Just keep on calling! I’ll pretend like I didn’t hear anything! ^ ^
Then, the impatient voice begun to call my name again, this time, more eager and demanding and it no
longer can control it’s volume and anger anymore “JUNG MINA! HOW DARE U! DON’T YOU EVEN THINK THAT
YOU CAN IGNORE ME! STAND UP THIS INSTANT NOW!” Gosh, why does he have to yell so loud? Does he
want everyone in the shop to know my name or something?! What a stupid idiot! As everyone turned their
attention to me and that…. That IDIOT! Omg! I’m having so much fun calling him an idiot!... well, of course
not in front of his face, but pure imagining in the mind is good too! Hahaha! Then, all of the girls in the shop
suddenly realized something and they all started to scream “OMG! R U CHOI SHIWON? SHIWON OPPA, I
LOVE YOU!!” “NO, I LOVE YOU MORE! I’M YOUR #1 FAN!!!” “SHIWON OPPA CAN I HAVE UR
AUTOGRAPH?” “SHIWON…..”….Eww! Gross! How could people like such an idiot? And goodness!… Is he trying
to find trouble for himself or something? Why don’t he at least wear a hat or something to cover up his face?
Gosh, I looked at Kibum, and tried to see when can we snick out of the shop without anyone noticing us…
luckily, Kibum has a hat to cover himself up.. Unlike that stupid IDIOT spiky! Hahaha.. I know I’m being evil
right now, but hey, IT’S PAY BACK TIME!
Then, just as Kibum has grabbed my hand and led me to the back door of the shop, I turned around and
looked at that helpless fool, trying to get rid of all of those crazy fans, I started to… worry about him?!! I
started to feel … well… kinda bad…. Well maybe not that bad, but just… guilty… what’s gotten into
me? “Sorry, Kibum, I can’t just leave Shiwon out like that, I’ll go and get him out. You can go get the police
and settle the fans or else, I don’t think Shiwon will ever get home.” I let go of Kibum’s hand without even
look at him, I ran toward that bastard… with my heart beating faster and faster…
thump….. thump…. Thump…
and my face started to feel warm. Until I’ve reached over to the crowd, I found out that there is not
a single space left for me to squish in, so… damn it!!! (Author: WOW! Can’t believe that she still has the
strength to curse! Hahaha… ok ok, fine. Back to the story!) then, I just remembered that I’ve got a whistle
inside my pocket from my gym class that I have forgotten to put it back. Then, I took it out and inhaled a
full mouth of fresh oxygen, and finally----“BEEP!!!”
Everyone turned around and looked at me while I thought that probably it’s still not quiet enough, so I
started to scream “BE QUIET EVERYONE!!” like crazy. After 30 seconds, I’ve finally realized that I can hear
the wind blowing on my hair, but I had already forgot what I was gonna say… “Um… uh…” I just stood there
dumfounded like a piece of rock while the crowd look at me with a what-the-heck stare and then, a girl
emerged out from all those people. WHOA! She’s one darn scary girl! I think I can describe her as sumo
size. Wonder if she had ever went to a sumo wrestling match… I bet she will win every match! “What do you
want? If you don’t have anything to say to us then why did u interrupt our time with Shiwon oppa? Do you
know that u are being so disrespectful to other people?” she was looking at me, as if she was ready to
smack me using her large fist. OMG! Please don’t kill me!!! God I pray to thee!! Halleluiah!! Come on come
“I was just… I guess I was trying to say…. STOP BUGGING SHIWON! U GUYS R THE ONES WHO R
DISRESPECTFUL! STOP TRYING TO INTERFERE WITH OTHER PEOPLE’S LIVES! EVEN THOUGH SHIWON IS A
POPULAR CELEBRITY BUT AT LEAST LET HIM HAVE SOME PEACE AND QUIET TO ENJOY HIS OWN LIFE!
PLEASE!” I don’t even know what I’m shouting about because my brain felt so numb from the nervousness
inside me and part of me was scared to death of getting hit by that big crowd of girls surrounding me and
Shiwon. “Who do you think you are? Trying to stop us? Don’t even think about it! It’s not like you are
Shiwon oppa’s girlfriend or something!”
Then, suddenly, a warm hand gently placed upon my shoulder and another hand held me close by my
waist… wtf? Who the heck?! OMG!
end of chapter 7
Ch8 pt-- Danger1
As I was standing still stiffly as the hand started to grab me closer and closer, tighter and tighter, and it got
hotter and hotter moving from my shoulder to my neck. It’s like there was so much anger in it that it was
trying to reveal itself thru it. “HEY… SOMEBODY PLZ TELL ME THAT THIS IS A JOKE THAT U GUYS ARE
PLAYING ON ME! R U GUYS PLAYING THE MURDER GAME? I’M…” I screamed, hoping that who ever is doing that
to stop their silly game because it’s gotten too far!!! But, the hand that had grabbed me from my waist,
slowly, revealed a ……… pocket sized, shiny fruit knife?! Then, every one of the girls started to scream and
they looked at that knife with horror. Slowly, I felt that my air way is almost being cut off from the fresh
oxygen…. I felt dizziness coming into me….. no… I must not die! I must fight back!! As I used my two hands,
trying to get that hand off of my neck. I can see that spiky standing beside me, knowing that this is getting
serious and he started to yell at the person who’s grabbing me…. “Hey you! What are you doing? You better
stop this right now! This is a public place! Please don’t make any troubles out here!!”
“Shiwon oppa!! How could you? How could you? Why did you do this to me? WHY?!” as the girl screamed
back at Shiwon, and I could see the girl’s feature, only blurrily with my side view vision, but still, you can
make out the outline of the girl’s face, through all of that thick long black hair, she has a face that shimmers in
the light, she was surely a beauty, a model like figure….but, a dangerous beauty… well, considering the
situation now. Then, I turned toward Shiwon, and I saw his expression--- confused. “Don’t you remember
me? I love you so much!! Well, of course, I don’t expect you to know my name, but at least, you should
have remembered me… I’m your #1 fan! I went to all of your concerts and I always stood near the front
row that’s nearest to the stage…. Don’t you know how hard it is for me to buy all those good seats for the
concerts? They cost me almost all of my allowance that my daddy gave me--- 600000000 won per month. I
watched and bought every little thing that you have made CFs about. I have all of the movies and series
that you have played parts in…. I spent all of my money on you! I’ve even asked daddy to make an order of
bed sheets with your face printed on it and it’s made all the ways from the best fabric company in the
country! I even have shirts that have your faces printed on them. Until now, I’ve spent almost all of
my daddy’s fortune on you oppa, I’m so disappointed on you!!” then, she held on to my neck even
tighter, as if she was trying to break it with all her strength. HUH?! So it’s spiky’s fault? He got me into
this?!!! I knew it! Thanks to his handsome face, I’m going to be killed by this psycho girl!! Or else, how could
I be in this situation right now? That girl must have thought that there’s something between me and
him. “What? I don’t know what you’re talking about! Are you sure you’re ok? How am I supposed to
remember all of my fans? This is ridiculous! And even if I do like someone else, why do you need to care?
It’s none of your business!”
“So you do have something going on with this girl huh? Just as I had seen with my own eyes!! You did kiss
her on Valentine’s day! You’ve even followed her all day trying to protect her from danger even you saw
that she was with Kibum oppa…. You traitor! You left me no choice! I’ll let you watch how painfully she is
going to die because of your unfaithfulness to me!! I’m going to let you pay!”
to be continue....
ch8 Pt2--blood and tears
Cold sweats dropped down from my forehead, as the crazy fan girl raised her hand with the fruit knife,
badum…. Badum…. Badum…. I guess.. this is where everything is going to end…. My horrible
experience, after being kicked out of my own house, now, I can’t even die in the way I wanted to… instead, I
have to die in the hand of a stranger, who is the obsessed and crazy/ mental fan of THAT IDIOT!!! DARN
IT!!! My life!! Wasted!! “NOOOOOOOO!!!!” as I heard a shout coming beside me, just as the knife is going to
struck into my body, that…. That… THAT IDIOT CAME!! He grabbed me and turned my body away from the
knife….. “JUNG MINA!! YOU BIG BABU HEAD!! Don’t you ever do that again! Do you know….. how… worried…
I am?” as I looked at him disbelievingly, he hugged me…. Tightly… stab!!! “Shiwon, are you… ok?” as I
looked back at him as he embraced me. There’s a painful expression on his face…. But he still managed to
smile… a forceful smile… then, he dropped his head onto my shoulder, eyes closed….
“CHOI SHIWON!!! YOU BIGGEST IDIOT!! WAKE UP!!! WAKE UP!! DID U HEAR ME?! YOU LAZY BUM!!! YOU
BIG PORCUPINE!! WAKE UP!! WHAT IS THAT ALL ABOUT? WHY DID YOU BLOCK THAT FOR ME? DON’T YOU
THINK THAT I’LL EVER FORGIVE YOU FOR ALL THE MEAN THINGS THAT YOU DID TO ME!! I’LL MAKE YOU
PAY TOOO!! Wake up!! Wake up…… wake up…. You… idiot…..” as I shouted, I felt that my whole body is
trembling hard… shivering, and shaking…. I felt…two streams of wet trails on my cheeks, making its ways
down my face. Drop, drop….
“I didn’t do it! I didn’t do anything.. I was.. I was…. I was just… I didn’t mean to…” The mental girl was
shocked. She held both of her hands up high into the air. Her face turned pale like a ghost, her eyes opened
wide and she kept on shaking her head as her perfect porcelain doll like curly hair moved from side to side
on her slender shoulder with her Gucci dress….. everyone else in the ice cream shop was stunned…no one
dared to move nor even make any sound, for they were too surprise to say anything until….“Somebody
please call the ambulance!! Someone… please… help!!” as I pleaded and finally, everyone took action. Some
took out their cell phones or went to the near by telephone booth to make calls to the police and the nearby
hospital; some came to help calm me down. Just as the stabber girl was trying to run away, someone
caught her and others rushed on to help the others to try to hold on to her, preventing her from escaping.
“Bam” as the back door of the ice cream shop opened violently after several minuets, Kibum came in
with a bunch of police and as soon as he saw this, he went over to me and he let the police do their work,
asking what has happened…. At the same time, the ambulance came with its loud high pitched siren. The
annoying sound stuck my ear drum…. my ear was hurting so badly that I felt that it’s going to explode. As
Kibum shoved aside the crowd and went to me, he saw Shiwon laying in a pile of blood and me, keeling
beside him, who can’t do anything except letting my tears fall uncontrollably down my cheek, as if there is
no way of stopping. Then he hugged me, “It’s ok Mina, hyung is going to be ok…” this warm soft voice... it
chased away the fear inside me… as if this is a shield covering over me… like an oppa, trying to protect his
little donseng…. I felt better… a lot better…
As I watched Shiwon being put into the ambulance, the doctor asked “Are you two his friends? Then you
guys better come along.” On the way, I hold on to spiky’s hand, which I had never done so before….. so
tightly that I didn’t noticed how Kibum was taking note on that. And I kept on praying inside my heart,
hoping that he’ll be alright… hoping that we’re not too late…. On the way, no one spoke to break the silence
nor even dared to make any sounds…this weird silence kept on stirring my mind.
Finally, I asked Kibum with what ever little energy that’s left inside me “Kibum shi…. Do you think… we can
make it?.... I….. I don’t want Shiwon to…. Leave us…. To leave… all of us…..”
end of chapter 8
Apr 30 2009, 08:40 PM
Joined: 5-April 08
Poor Shiwon oppa....T_T
Then there's Kibum oppa too...awww can't she have both guys? xD lol
love it!!! can't wait for the next one!
May 19 2011, 07:48 PM
Joined: 4-February 07
As I was standing still stiffly as the hand started to grab me closer and closer, tighter and tighter, and it got hotter and hotter moving from my shoulder to my neck. It’s like there was so much anger in it that it was trying to reveal itself thru it. “HEY… SOMEBODY PLZ TELL ME THAT THIS IS A JOKE THAT U GUYS ARE PLAYING ON ME! R U GUYS PLAY THE MURDER GAME? I’M…” I screamed, hoping that who ever is doing that to stop their silly game because it’s gotten too far!!! But, the hand that had grabbed me from my waist, slowly, revealed a ……… pocket sized, shiny fruit knife?! Then, every one of the girls started to scream and they looked at that knife with horror. Slowly, I felt that my air way is almost being cut off from the fresh oxygen…. I felt dizziness coming into me….. no… I must not die! I must fight back!! As I used my two hands, trying to get that hand off my neck. I can see that spiky standing beside me, knowing that this is getting serious and he started to yell at the person who’s grabbing me…. “Hey you! What are you doing? You better stop this right now! This is a public place! Please don’t make any troubles out here!!”
“Shiwon oppa!! How could you? How could you? Why did you do this to me? WHY?!” as the girl screamed back at Shiwon, and I could see the girl’s feature, only blurrily with my side view vision, but still, you can make out the outline of the girl’s face, thru all of that thick long black hair, she has a face that shimmers in the light, she was surely a beauty, a model like figure….but, a dangerous beauty… well, considering to the situation now. Then, I turned toward Shiwon, and I saw his expression--- confused. “Don’t you remember me? I loved you so much!! Well, of course, I don’t expect you to know my name, but at least, you should have remembered me… I’m your #1 fan! I went to all of your concerts and I always stood near the front row that’s nearest to the stage…. Don’t you know how hard it is for me to buy all those good seats for the concerts? They cost me almost all of my allowance that my daddy gave me--- 600000000 won per month. I watched and brought every little thing that you have made CFs about. I have all of the movies and series that you have played part in…. I spent all of my money on you! I’ve even asked daddy to make an order of bed sheets with your face printed on it and it’s made all the ways from the best fabric company in the country! I’ve even have shirts that had your face printed on all of them. Until now, I’ve spent almost all of my daddy’s fortune on you and oppa, I’m so disappointed on you!!” then, she held on to my neck even tighter, as if she was trying to break it with all her strength. HUH?! So it’s spiky’s fault? He got me into this?!!! I knew it! Thanks to his handsome face, I’m going to be killed by this psycho girl!! Or else, how could I be in this situation right now? That girl must have thought that there’s something between me and him. “What? I don’t know what you’re talking about! Are you sure you’re ok? How am I supposed to remember all of my fans? This is ridiculous! And even if I do like someone else, why do you need to care? It’s none of your business!”
“So you do have something going on with this girl huh? Just as I had seen with my own eyes!! You did kiss her on Valentine’s day! You’ve even followed her all day trying to protect her from danger even you’ve saw that she was with Kibum oppa…. You traitor! You left me no chance! I’ll let you watch how painfully she is going to die because of your unfaithfulness to me!! I’m going to let you pay!”
Cold sweats dropped down from my forehead, as the crazy fan girl raised her hand with the fruit knife, badum…. Badum…. Badum…. I guess.. this is where everything is going to end…. My horrible experience, after being kicked out of my own house, now, I can’t even die in the way I want to… instead, I have to die in the hand of a stranger, who is the obsessed and crazy/ mental fan of THAT IDIOT!!! DARN IT!!! My life!! Wasted!! “NOOOOOOOO!!!!” as I heard a shout coming beside me, just as the knife is going to struck into my body, that…. That… THAT IDIOT CAME!! He grabbed me and turned my body away from the knife….. “JUNG MINA!! YOU BIG BABU HEAD!! Don’t you ever do that again! Do you know….. how… worried… I am?” as I looked at him disbelievingly, he hugged me…. Tightly… stab!!! “Shiwon, are you… ok?” as I looked back at him as he embraced me. There’s a painful expression on his face…. But he still managed to smile… a forceful smile… then, he dropped his head onto my shoulder, eyes closed….
“CHOI SHIWON!!! YOU BIGGEST IDIOT!! WAKE UP!!! WAKE UP!! DID U HEAR ME?! YOU LAZY BUM!!! YOU BIG PORCUPINE!! WAKE UP!! WHAT IS THAT ALL ABOUT? WHY DID YOU BLOCK THAT FOR ME? DON’T YOU THINK THAT I’LL EVER FORGIVE YOU FOR ALL THE MEAN THINGS THAT YOU DID TO ME!! I’LL MAKE YOU PAY TOOO!! Wake up!! Wake up…… wake up…. You… idiot…..” as I shouted, I felt that my whole body is trembling hard… shivering, and shaking…. I felt…two streams of wet trails on my cheeks, making its ways down my face. Drop, drop….
“I didn’t do it! I didn’t do anything.. I was.. I was…. I was just… I didn’t mean to…” The mental girl was shocked. She held both of her hands up high into the air. Her face turned pale like a ghost, her eyes opened wide and she kept on shaking her head as her perfect porcelain doll like curly hair moved from side to side on her slender shoulder with her Gucci dress….. everyone else in the ice cream shop was stunned…no one dared moved nor even made any sound, for they were too surprise to say anything until….“Somebody please call the ambulance!! Someone… please… help!!” as I pleaded and finally, everyone took action. Some took out their cell phones or went to the near by telephone booth to make calls to the police and the nearby hospital; some came to help calm me down. Just as the stabber girl was trying to run away, someone caught her and others rushed on to help the others to try to hold on to her, preventing her from escaping.
“Bam” as the back door of the ice cream shop opened violently after several minuets, Kibum came in with a bunch of police and as soon as he saw this, he went over to me and he let the police do their work, asking what has happened…. At the same time, the ambulance came with its loud high pitched siren. The annoying sound stuck my ear drum…. my ear was hurting so badly that I felt that it’s going to explode. As Kibum shoved aside the crowd and went to me, he saw Shiwon laying in a pile of blood and me, keeling beside him, who can’t do anything except letting my tears fall uncontrollably down my cheek, as if there is no way of stopping. Then he hugged me, “It’s ok Mina, hyung is going to be ok…” this warm soft voice... it chased away the fear inside me… as if this is a shield covering over me… like an oppa, trying to protect his little donseng…. I felt better… a lot better…
As I watched Shiwon being put into the ambulance, the doctor asked “Are you two his friends? Then you guys better come along.” On the way, I hold on to spiky’s hand, which I had never done so before….. so tightly that I didn’t noticed how Kibum was taking note on that. And I kept on praying inside my heart, hoping that he’ll be alright… hoping that we’re not too late…. On the way, no one spoke to break the silence nor even dared to make any sounds…this weird silence kept on stirring my mind.
Finally, I asked Kibum with what ever little energy that’s left inside me “Kibum shi…. Do you think… we can make it?.... I….. I don’t want Shiwon to…. Leave us…. To leave… all of us…..”
end of chapter 8
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