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ok this is my first fan fic so tell me if u like it and i'll continue posting the rest. please be honest. if u think it sucks i wont flame u for saying that. sorry its not that long and doesnt have a title.




Chapter 1

I’m beginning to understand it all. My reason for living. My reason for dreaming and being afraid. My reason for being with you. It all started on that day I was first felt alone.

February 14, 1993
(Mina's Diary)
My name is Mina. I’m three and today is my birthday. My mommy promised me today that she would take me out somewhere for lots of fun. I can’t wait. I wanted to bring my best friend Kenji but my mommy said no. It’s suppose to be a family trip. Just me and my family I can’t wait. When I get home I’m gonna tell Kenji all about it.

(Kenji’s House)
Kenji - Mommy please can I go with Mina? It’s her birthday and I wanna be with her.
Kenji asks his mom over and over as she does the dishes. His mom stops looks down at her 5 year old boy and holds his chin up.
Taka (Kenji’s Mom) - You can’t be with her.
Furious Kenji takes a step back and screams.
Kenji - Why can’t I be with her she’s my best friend and it’s her 3rd birthday?!?
Taka looks at the ground trying not to hurt her son’s feelings as she denies the truth.
Taka - Because her 3rd birthday is really special to her parents and it’s a family thing that you mustn’t interfere with.
Tears of anger begin to fall down Kenji’s face.
Kenji – You’re lying! She would include me in everything even if it’s a family thing! Taka tell me the truth!
Ignoring the fact that her son just called her by her first name she hesitantly tells the truth.
Taka – Her parents have taken her off to her aunt’s in LA.
Sad Kenji runs out the door to Mina’s house. Taka runs after him.









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