Hmong force marriage, "MOM I am going to KILL YOU!!!!" Options

[fallenspirit]

Author's Note: Hello everyone. first time on here and I don't know if they put up stories about hmong people. So if they don't then, I'm the first person to write a fanfiction with Hmong Characters!! Please enjoy reading!!

Hmong words
1. Me Ntxais- daughter
2. Niam- Mom

I am going to be using some Hmong words in the story and I'll be updating the words so you guys will understamd what it means!

Prologue

“Niam! Why are you doing this to me?”

“Me Ntxais! Why are you yelling at me!”

“Because you and dad are forcing me to marry a person that I don’t even know at all!” I cried painfully.

“Ai-ya, you are such and immature incompetent.” Hearing her say that, I wailed louder.
“Mom!!” I cried again tugging at her sleeves.

She mumble something and tugged me off her sleeves and left the room.

“Hmpf” I pouted.

“Why do they have to do this to me!” I said and crossed my hands in front of my chest.

My life is going to be ruin!
I was so planning on going to college, but no, I was going to be force into this stupid marriage.

“AHHHHHHH!” I screamed in frustration and slam into my bed.

This post has been edited by fallenspirit: Feb 23 2008, 04:41 PM

[JakeCutter]

I hope you make a part two. I want to see what happens next.

[Chillin]

Please continue this story!! Make it good!

[lamplight]

the next day my mother and i had to go visit my future husband and his family.
ugh.
i had so much planned out for my future.
i can't believe she would do this to me.
i'm just a girl of 18.
i wanted to accomplish so much like getting a degree and actually fall in love with someone i respect.
now all of this is impossible.
we arrived at his house.
there was a metal gate surrounding the house
we walked in there was a beautiful garden in the front with a great fountain
i knocked at the door
no one answered
i knocked again 4 to 5 times
an old man answered the door
"yes?" he asked
"hi! is mrs. yang home?" my mom asked
"state your relationship with mrs. yang and why you are here" he asked
"i am a good friend of mrs. yang. we have been best friends ever since we were young. we are here to discuss the arranged marriage between my daughter and her son"
"oh yes mrs. yang did mention this today come in come in" he said
a woman in her fifties appeared
she had beautiful white skin and a head full of dark curly hair
her eyes looked happy but with a tint of sadness to them
"mrs. yang!" my mom greeted her
"ah mrs. xiong you still look so young and radiant as always" mrs. yang said "this must be your daughter, she is beautiful, her eyes have so much life, like mother like daughter eh"
"haha oh mrs. yang you flatter me" my mom blushed
"come sit down" mrs yang offered
we sat down and drank tea
maids came walking by whispering to one another looking at me
"i am glad my young david will be getting married. ever since his dad died, i've been so worried about him. but we need someone to take over his father's business. he needs to start making a family and being dependent" mrs. yang said
a young man walked down the stairs
he looked at us with confusion
then it seemed like a lightbulb went on in his head
when he realized who we were
he was tall and handsome.
his dark fine hair swept to the side.
"ah david! come here meet your future wife!" mrs yang ordered
he blushed and i felt myself turning red as well
my mom whispered, "aren't you glad you're getting married to him, why he's got the entire package rich and handsome."

[fallenspirit]

the next day my mother and i had to go visit my future husband and his family.
ugh.
i had so much planned out for my future.
i can't believe she would do this to me.
i'm just a girl of 18.
i wanted to accomplish so much like getting a degree and actually fall in love with someone i respect.
now all of this is impossible.
we arrived at his house.
there was a metal gate surrounding the house
we walked in there was a beautiful garden in the front with a great fountain
i knocked at the door
no one answered
i knocked again 4 to 5 times
an old man answered the door
"yes?" he asked
"hi! is mrs. yang home?" my mom asked
"state your relationship with mrs. yang and why you are here" he asked
"i am a good friend of mrs. yang. we have been best friends ever since we were young. we are here to discuss the arranged marriage between my daughter and her son"
"oh yes mrs. yang did mention this today come in come in" he said
a woman in her fifties appeared
she had beautiful white skin and a head full of dark curly hair
her eyes looked happy but with a tint of sadness to them
"mrs. yang!" my mom greeted her
"ah mrs. xiong you still look so young and radiant as always" mrs. yang said "this must be your daughter, she is beautiful, her eyes have so much life, like mother like daughter eh"
"haha oh mrs. yang you flatter me" my mom blushed
"come sit down" mrs yang offered
we sat down and drank tea
maids came walking by whispering to one another looking at me
"i am glad my young david will be getting married. ever since his dad died, i've been so worried about him. but we need someone to take over his father's business. he needs to start making a family and being dependent" mrs. yang said
a young man walked down the stairs
he looked at us with confusion
then it seemed like a lightbulb went on in his head
when he realized who we were
he was tall and handsome.
his dark fine hair swept to the side.
"ah david! come here meet your future wife!" mrs yang ordered
he blushed and i felt myself turning red as well
my mom whispered, "aren't you glad you're getting married to him, why he's got the entire package rich and handsome."

What the Heck??

Who's story is that...not mine thought...sorry

[fallenspirit]

Chapter 1

Sleeping peacefully, I thought about all of the things happening in my life. Scratch that, happening in the future.
Huh….I sighed and tried to close my eyes, but these raindrops started to fall out.
I sniffled quietly and tried to wipe it off before anybody could come into my room. After I finished crying I looked at the clock, It said 11:11 am.
Wow I slept for so long. What a surprise, my parents aren’t even piss at me for sleeping so late.
I sighed again and threw my head back onto my comfy pillow. Who cares anyways, their just going to sell me off to some rich snobby hmong family.
I hate my da.nm life. Being only 17, I’m going to be forced into marriage. Shifting over to my right side I closed my eyes, but these problems kept on getting at me.
Shifting back to my left, I was not comfortable at all.
I cried and tossed my body out of my bed.
*Boom* My heavy body bumped onto the ground and I cried out more in pain. Rubbing my injured butt my brother tsim meng, or Meng for short, poked his head in.
“What do you want?” I yelled at him. He looked a little bit nervous and came and plop himself onto my bed.
“Um, sis, I heard about what’s going to happened to you.” He said and played with his fingers nervously. I Smiled and replied,
“Don’t worry about me, worry about yourself.”
“Will, when you m-marry, just still remember your little brother okay?”
I scoffed and said, “Now who’s going to get marry?”
He smiled and came to help me up.
“Thanks little bro.” I said and ruffled his messy black hair. He smiled again and playfully slap my hands off.
~~~*~*~*~*~*~**~~**~~**~~
Just so you know, my name is Sua Nag, or Nanny. Not like Nanny 911, but like N-A____-n-n-y. The A is long
“Nanny!” My little sister exclaimed running up to me. I hugged her and placed her down onto the couch and sat down next to her.
“Ey, Nanny! Your finally awake!” My older sister dee exclaimed and I hugged her.
She too, sat down next to me and stared off into space. Such a pity, that I’m getting married first before her.
Wait----no, I’m not really going to get marry actually, I can run away-- “Nanny!” My little sister, Douachee exclaimed and I jumped.
“What?” I asked.
“Can we go to the park today.” She asked and I nodded in return.
Dee looked at me nervously and I asked her what is wrong.
“It’s just that, Why are you acting so cheerful?” she asked.
“Do I look cheerful?” No, I am so totally not cheerful at all.
She sighed and fiddled with her fingers. I swear, why is everybody acting so weird today? Am I suppose to go berserk and cry like a baby? I feel like Frankenstein. Everybody looks nervous around me accept for Douachee who is only 4 and knows nothing.
I scoffed at my sister Dee and asked where mom and dad went.
She looked a little bit nervous to answer me.
“Where did they go?” I asked.
“Well, um, they went to have a conference with our soon to be in-laws.”
“What?” I hiss, scaring Douachee. I gave her a reassuring smile and patted her back before looking up at Dee.
She look nervous under my gaze. “Is there something I should know?” I asked suspiciously.
“Lets go to the park!” She replied and walked off towards her room.
I huffed at her. That’s how she is anyways; Always scare to face her little sister.
“Nanny, can you buy me an ice cream today.” She smiled up at me.
“Yes!” I said and tickled her until Meng came in.
“I heard you guys are going to the park today.”
“You want to come?” I asked. He smiled cutely and replied, “Yes.”
When Dee came out we headed to the park. She pulled out her white Camry from the driveway and we drove silently to the park.
Well, almost silently, Douachee kept on jabbering on and about what she was going to be doing at the park today. While Meng, just stared out the window silently.
I sighed and looked out the window too.
Okay, since there’s nothing to tell you while the drive I’m going to tell you about my family.
Tsim Nuj, is my oldest brother. He’s 25 years old and is currently attending Harvard, planning to become a lawyer. He’s a very good brother. Although I don’t get to see him much, I still think he’s awesome.
The second oldest is Dee, she’s 20 and is currently attending Princeton, she’s planning to become a doctor. This is their summer off so she decided to come back home for the whole summer.
The third oldest is me! I am 17 years old and is currently attending ***** high school. I’m a junior and is the president of the debate team. When I grow up I want to become a lawyer too, but my mom and dad had to go and ruin my dreams….
Fourth oldest is Tsim Meng. He’s 15 years old and is going to the same high school as I am. Greatest soccer player alive and a guitar freak.
Fifth youngest is Douachee, she’s four and attending **** elementary school. Very cute and popular at her school. You do not want to count all of her friends. She got millions of them. Mostly the teachers and students there knows her.
~~*~*~**~~**~~**~~*~*~*~**~~*~~
When we got to the park Douachee ran out quickly and started playing with the other kids.
While I help dragged out Dee’s umbrella, three folding chairs, and Meng’s soccer ball.
DE-Da - Da - Da - Da - De -De -Da - Da

My cell phone ranged and I picked it up.
[“Yo, Nanny Where are you?”] A feminine voice said.
“I’m at the park Der.” I said.
[“Dude did you forgot what were suppose to do today?”] She exclaimed furiously in the phone.
Flashback.
“Nanny are you free this Saturday?” Der asked me.
“Why?” I replied.
“Will, you know that my dad’s hair product company is sort of suspicious with the company he’s working together with, right?”
“Yeah, what’s the problems.”
“Well he just wanted me to go and check out how they’re doing with the new hair product coming out.”
“So, why you ask me?” I asked turning the corner.
“Well, my dad he doesn’t want the other people to see that he’s suspicious of them so….” She broke off and I nodded my head for her to go on.
“So…I want you and me to go and steal some of their products for my dad to see how it’s made.”
“What? We might get caught!” This is serious! How can you ask me to go!! My parents might kill me!
“Well, since you and me have been like best friend forever and we’ve did some spying around and solve some case. I just thought that we might accomplish this mission that my dad had bestow upon me.”
Oh right steal some hair product!
Well that’s typical Der for you. She really wants to become a detective when she grows up and she’ll do anything her papa ask her.
“Why did he give this job to you and not somebody else?” I asked.
“Hahahaha” She laughed nervously and continue, “Well, he didn’t really ask me I just took it.”
I glared at her and sighed in defeat. “Fine I’ll go with you.”
End of Flashback.

[lamplight]

What the Heck??

Who's story is that...not mine thought...sorry

my version sorry
heehee i like to write stories too
love your story

[fallenspirit]

my version sorry
heehee i like to write stories too
love your story

thanks for reading so far...I don't think it is succeding though

[JakeCutter]

Question: Is this a true story? :P

[Babyfox143]

i once fornicated in the laundry room.

[fallenspirit]

Question: Is this a true story? :P

no...it's all made up, but this do happened sometimes in the hmong culture. It doesn't happened that much frequently now.

[fallenspirit]

i once fornicated in the laundry room.

what is fornicated??

[Chillin]

what is fornicated??

*covers ears* dont listen to that bad lady sweetheart

[fallenspirit]

Chapter 2 [ The Technique, Goods in Disguise]
“Can you take me home?” I asked my sister.
She looked at me curiously.
“Um…” I licked my cracked lip, not knowing what else to say.
She stared at me and told me to get into the car.
“Can you give this to Meng?” I asked and handed her $3.00. Whew, good thing I didn’t forget, or Douachee will kill me for forgetting to buy her an ice cream.
She took it and I walked off towards her Camry. She follow me to the Camry moments later.
“So, um, why did you need to go home?” she asked turning the corner.
“Um…well, me and Der had something plan and I just forgot about everything, so I just need to go grab some stuffs.”
Tuning the car into the driveway I got out quickly.
“Be right back.” I told her and headed into the house. Jumping up the stairs, I grab my large bag which I sling it around my shoulder, put a hat on me covering my face, and took a sweater just in case.
“Um…Can you take me to Der’s house?” I asked slamming the Camry door shut.
“Sure.” She said and pulled out of the driveway.
~*~**~~~**~*~*~**~~**~~*~*~~*~**~**~**~
“Okay you’ve got everything?” Der asked me.
“Yes!” I salute and she laughed. We were standing outside of the huge company with people dress in suits coming in and out.
“So, my dad told me that the hair products are arriving today, so we can just wait until they load it and steal the conditioner and the shampoo.”
“Okay.” OMG I can’t believe I am doing this.
“lets sneak into the back.” OMG!!!
Just Breathe Nanny. XD
10 minutes later.
“Nanny! Wake up their here!” Huh…
“Okay get ready!” okay.
Dud dud dud dud dud.
The truck made a sound as it was backing up. It parked and two men got out.
One was fat and the other one was skinny. Good thing one of then is fat, then we’ll be able to out run them.
“Jimmy open it up.” The fat dude called and the skinny dude opened up the back of the truck. After they load them all off, we waited and waited for them to leave but they didn’t.
Damn. Were so screw.
“Time for plan B” I whisper in Der’s ear. She smiled wickedly and crept away to these empty boxes and pushed it all down.
“What the heck was that?” Yelled the fat dude and he and the skinny dude went to check it out.
While I crept to the boxes of shampoo and conditioner.
I took my scissors out and cut the tape straightly down on one of the box. Grabbing a shampoo and conditioner, I expertly re tape the box again with some tape I brought, and stuff the hair products into my bag.
As I was about to leave, I tripped and made a loud noise. That seriously attracted the dudes attention and they came flying over to me.
$hit! I’m screw! Run Run!!!

I could see Der motioning for me to run and so I got up and silently hid behind these other boxes.
“So you’re the girl that’s been sneaking around here huh?” The skinny guy said behind me and took my collar.
So busted!!
“Let me go!!” I yelled as he tug me towards the fat dude.
At the back I could see Der frozen staring eye wide at me.
She knocked down some more boxes and the skinny dude, name Jimmy, turned around to look back as she ducked down.
At that point I bit his hand and he howl in pain.
Pft….that didn’t taste so pleasant.
I follow Der into the elevator and she pressed the first floor button.
I sighed in relief and we both laughed at our stupidity, but we didn’t laugh long though, because when we got up there, there were security guards running our way.
$hit!!!!
“Split GG” I yelled and we both split.
“JoJo !”[Her fake name when we are in trouble] I threw her my bag as she threw me her. She quickly hid the bag and started running away.
This technique is called The goods in disguise.
Seeing that, the guards all follow me, thinking that I’ve had the bag.
I sprinted running around the corner dodging people and threw anything possible that can block the guards way.
Running around I spotted an exit, which weirdly took my into another building.
Omg this is so weird.
My heart was pumping and adrenaline was running very fast.
$hit….
Screw this…Why are they chasing me just because we stole a damn conditioner and shampoo.
I dashed up some three or four flights, as the guards were right behind me.
I rounded a corner and randomly went into a room. Closing the door I lean against it breathing heavily. I could hear footsteps running past the door.
$hit, that was so close…. I heave a sigh of relief and closed my eyes.
When I opened my eyes, I explored the room I was in.
What the heck?
Is this a hotel?

This post has been edited by fallenspirit: Mar 20 2008, 04:19 PM

[mysteriousgirl]

Please continue. I want to know what happens next. Thanks.

[miranda]

hey... Love the story.. Email me when u update the story... K thanks!!!....

[Chillin]

more

[pkakale]

love it update!!!

This post has been edited by pkakale: Nov 4 2008, 09:32 PM

[ThisOneGuy]

what is fornicated??

look it up.

[jbwkzholic001]

awwh! your story is quite similiar to the one I'm progressing right now. haha
just that my main character named Sue isn't so popular but she's got dignity and pride to herself and quite stubborn but she's kinda forced (meaning she has agreed as well) to sign a marriage contract with her mother's ex-bf's wife's friend's son who is a businessman to save her mother from the debts she's building up due to health issues.
And i like to create older main characters maybe between their early and late twenties bcuz i read alot of fiction novels so i guess i'm more used to creating maturer people.
im starting to think my stories are going in the lane of korean dramas >.> i dont want that. but anyway, keep up the good work! xD