The Devil's Toy RATED R!!!, starring Big bang TOP, fictional girl name Pandara, big bang... Options

[pkakale]

Chapter 1

(Pandara P.O.V)

In this world, this place…you say America is the dangerous place on earth? You wrong. There’s one place in this world, way worse then any country you have ever been to, the devils ground were everyone is afraid. America have government, president, even hundreds of police forces…but here…yes we have the same thing…but they are cowards they are nothing but wussies, they all bow down to one Mafia in particular, The Black Dragons…
There are 5 members in this gang, the scariest of them all, the Leader…Choi Seunghyun. He is the son of the former Mafias but just recently he had died, and passes everything to his son. His past is a mystery no one knows. They had said that long before, Seunghyun had been a gentleman, never hurt a soul. But now everything had change, he different his skill I heard the best at everything. He was good with guns, knives, blade, fist, you name it, but all in all, he cold. He’s a killer. Another member Dong Youngbae, who goes by the name Tae…well I heard he well with guns, he the best straight shooter in Korea. Kwon Jiyong, known as G.Dragon, he is the fastest blade thrower in all of Korea. Kang Daesung know as Metal Fist, he has this kind of weird looking glove that has spike coming out of it, one punch I heard can kill you. The youngest is name Seungri also known as Ri. His specialty is his star blade the thing he carries with him every where. But don’t underestimate him. He never misses and the place he aims for is your throat…
Well anyway…My name is Pandara Nim. I am 18 years old, I have 2 sister and 2 parents. Hahaha yea…to tell you the truth I don’t even know how The Black Dragons look like. I just heard people talk about them. But I’ll tell you one thing, I ain’t scared of no one. I hate bad people. They prey on the innocent people. Take my father for instant; he’s a gambler/alcoholic. He always abuses my mom, my sister and me. I hate him…I wish he wasn’t my dad. My mother cries every day for his doing. He takes our money for our schooling to gamble and drink. I work 2 jobs to keep my family out of poverty. My mother blames herself for our distress. I can’t stop my father, but I can try to make the best of it, as long as I am around my family will never die of starvation…

*At home*

“Umma, what is there to eat? I am starving.” I said, my stomach growling.
“I have dumpling, are you hungry for one? She asked.
“Always…” I smiled.
“Unni!!!” Daleen called out.
“Hey, where is Sandy?”
“I’m right here unni.” Sandy said strolling in the kitchen.
“Who was work unni?” Daleen asked me.
“I think the correct question to ask is; how was school? Then you ask; how was work?” Sandy said.
“Sandy unni, stop being a smarty pants.” Daleen said.
“I’m stating the truth.” Sandy defended herself.
“Whatever…” Daleen rolled her eyes.
“You guys, come on stop fighting. Here I brought you something.” I handed them the egg rolls I bought.
“Yah!!! Egg rolls!” Daleen said.
“Unni why did you buy it, you know Daleen is an egg roll lover.” Sandy said.
“That why I bought it, here, it the book you wanted.” I smiled.
“Awe…unni your so nice…I love you.” Sandy smiled happily.
“Sandy unni, your such a book worm.” Daleen said.
Sandy stick out her tongue.

*door slam open*
“Yannie!!! Where the fu-k are you?!
Omo my appa…
“What is it honey?” my umma asked.
“How much do you have on you?! I need it now!” my appa yelled.
“I have no more, you took it last night. I don’t even have money to pay for our daughter schooling.” My umma cried.

*slapped*

“I DIDN’T ASK FOR YOUR OPINION LADY!!! NOW GIVE ME WHAT YOU HAVE!” he yelled.
“Appa stop! Please…umma doesn’t have any money!” I yelled.
“You stay out of it!” my appa warned.
He went on beating my umma, and my dongsengs pulled him away, he pushed my dongsengs so that their back hit against the wall.
I ran in and pushed him, he fell on the floor, “Don’t touch my umma!” I yelled.
“He got up and slapped me, “You tomboy! You dare push me! I’m your appa!!!”
“You shouldn’t even deserve to be called my appa!” I yelled.
“You’ll regret this!” with that he left, I helped my umma and my dongsengs up. When? When will this torment end?

(End of Pandara P.O.V)

(TOP P.O.V)

“Did you get my money?” I asked the bastard cowering in front of me.
“I’m sorry Mr. Choi, but I don’t have any money, I lost it all.”
“Chun…you do know how much you owe me right?” I said taking a sip of my red wine.
“Yes, yes of course.”
“I’ll pay you back as soon as I have money. Just give me more time.” He begged.
I stared at Tae and nodded my head. He knew the signal…

*Wham*
*Wham*
*Wham*

“STOP! Please stop!” he cried.
“*cocked my gun* Now tell me, do you have the money or no?”
“Please, please”—
I point the gun to his head, “One…two…”—
“I’LL SELL YOU MY DAUGHTER!”
I thought about it, “Why would I buy your daughter, just look at you, your filthy how do I know she is beautiful or not? She’s probably ugly like you.”
“No, no my daughter are exquisite, she beautiful. She’ll make you happy.”
What kind of father is he, coward, “What’s her name?” I asked.
“Her—her name is Pandara”
“Pandara? Interesting. You! Old man lead my boys to your house, Tae…bring Pandara and this old man back to me as soon as possible.”
“Yes TOP.”
“Now old man, if she ugly…both of you will die.” I warned.
“You won’t be disappointed…

(End of TOP P.O.V)

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I hope you like it!!! ^_^

This post has been edited by pkakale: Nov 4 2008, 09:34 PM

[pkakale]

Chapter 2
You’re my Toy…

Pandara P.O.V)

“Umma, are you ok?” I asked her.
“I’m fine, I’m use to it. I’m sorry girls, it all my fault.” My umma cried.
“Umma it not your fault. You shouldn’t be blame for all this.” I told her.
“But”—
“Umma, there’s no but, I will care for you I won’t let anything happen to us”—

*door burst open*

“What the hell!” I saw a group of guys came in, my appa in front of them, omo his face was bruised up…
“Which one is she?” I heard the shortest guy out of all the men asked.
“She’s right there!” my appa said.
“Appa what are you talking about?” before I can get my answer, 2 guys dragged me, I started kicking, where are they taking me?
“Let my sister go!” Daleen yelled as her hand came up and knocked the guy in the back, he dropped and grabbed out a gun, “Now well you Shut up and stay still or do you want this bullet in your head?” he growled.
“Seungri! That enough just take her and leave!”
“Seungri? Your—you’re a member from The Black Dragon? No it can’t be, Seungri carries star blades. Not guns.” Sandy cried out.
He showed us his star blade, “I carry guns when I have to, especially at a time like this when you have little girls banging on your back.” He glared at Daleen.
“Stop the chit chat! Let’s go!” he carried blades in his in his sweater, his ankles, and slip it on his arms, that must be G.Dragon…
Omo…what has my father done…
“Why Chun why?” my umma cried.
“SHUT UP LADY! I have a say in everything, I’m the man in the house!” they took me to the car, they started the engine and started leaving, through the back window I saw my umma and my 2 sister running after me…tears came down from my eyes, umma…Sandy…Daleen…
They blindfolded me, so I that I couldn’t see where they were heading. I can’t believe my father dare to come across them…The Black Dragon.
We seem to have arrived, but I couldn’t see anything, they dropped me on the hard cold ground, where is this place.
“Take the blindfold off.” That voice, who can it be?
The blindfold was taking off, I stared at my surrounding, my father at my side, the men who kidnapped at me, as I roamed the room, I saw the tallest man, and this is no doubt Choi Seunghyun known as TOP the Leader of The Black Dragons…

(End of Pandara P.O.V)

(TOP P.O.V)
When they brought her, I wanted to kill the old man, the daughter he sold to me, look like a dam boy, except for the long hair that is. But my voice caught behind my throat when they took off the blindfold. The man wasn’t lying. The chick was incredibly beautiful, her lips a full shade of pink and full, her hair black brown, her skin a delicate texture, her eyes round with life. I can’t really describe her; only that she is magnificently beautiful…

(End of TOP P.O.V)

(Pandara P.O.V)

I stared at the guy, what an incredibly handsome man. I couldn’t breathe. But my appa brought me back to reality, “So what do you think?”
“For a coward and an ugly man, Chun…you produce such a lovely girl.” TOP said.
“Thank you. You can have her, is my debt paid?”
“Appa! What do you mean?”
“He means he selling you to me…” his eyes show a hint of mockery.
“IT CAN’T BE! You gotta get something else from him, he doesn’t own me, I only have one parent, and that is my umma!” I yelled.
“YOU b!tch!” he picked up his hand to strike me.
*pulled out a gun*
“Uh-uh-uh-uh…don’t…don’t mar her beautiful face, if you do, I might just have to kill you both.” How can I say he was handsome, this man is the devil!
My appa put his hand down, “Can I go now, you have her, do what you like with her.”
Tears pour down from my eye, how can he be so cruel.
“You know I hate fathers like you…Ri”
*flying star blade*
It happen so fast, it was like a blur, first you see my appa happily wanting to leave, the next thing you see a star blade right in the middle of his throat…
“APPA!!!!” I cried.
I turned to the bastard and his men, “You bastard! Why did you kill my appa?!”
“He was getting on my nerves, plus I was doing you a favor, didn’t you hear him? He sold you and encourages me to have fun with you.” The bastard said.
“But he’s my father…” I cried.
“Beside…do you want him to live and do the same thing to your sister?”
He as a point, but still he my appa, even if he isn’t a great appa, a bad one at it he was still my appa…
“But you didn’t have to kill him!” I yelled.
He came next to me holding my chin up so that I was looking directly at him, “Don’t make me mad, if you know what’s good for you, and don’t try anything stupid. Believe me, it your family that get the consequences.”
“My family… let me go; I want to see my family.” I said.
“That depend if your good enough to me, and earn it, I will let you see your family once a week.”
“I’ll do anything, just let me see my family please.” I pleaded.
“Tae…take her to her family, give her 15 minutes, and I expect her back.”
“Yes TOP.”
The guy name Tae, blindfolds me and took me to my umma. I knew I was home when I heard my umma yelling my name.
“Umma!!!” I hugged her.
“Unni!” both my dongsengs yelled.
I embrace them…I have to make this time worthy who knows when I can see them again, “Umma listen closely, I won’t be gone forever, I will come visit once a week.” I cried.
“What do you mean sweetie?” my umma asked.
I turned to my dongsengs, “Sandy and Daleen take care of umma when I’m gone. I will come see you…um…I won’t be here give you egg rolls everyday anymore ok Daleen, Sandy, um…I can’t bring you anymore books. But I will try whenever I come.” I couldn’t contain my tears anymore, no matter who brave I wanted to sound.
“Unni, where is appa?” Daleen asked.
“He’s gone.” I cried.
“What?” my umma cried.
“He’s dead…” my umma started crying.
“I can’t stay long”—
“Let’s go.” Daesung called to me.
“Bye umma, bye Sandy, bye Daleen.” I cried.
I hugged them to me, my tears pouring like water full. Goodbye…my love ones.
They did the same routine, they blindfold me. Soon I was back to the devil’s den.
“Are you happy that you got to see your family?” the devil asked.
“Let me go please, I won’t tell the police that you killed my appa.” I told him
“No, even if you did tell the police what do you think their going to do about it? Nothing.”
“You are the devil! I hate you! All of you!” I yelled.
He grabbed my jaw, “I don’t think so sweetie, don’t forget our bargain, if you can keep me happy, your family will live in peace, if not…they’ll be just like your appa.” He whispered to me.
“You are despicable!” I spat at his face.
“Don’t push it sweetie, because for now on you are my toy…

(End of Pandara P.O.V)

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That the second chapter, lol what do you think? Is it ok?

This post has been edited by pkakale: Nov 4 2008, 09:35 PM

[wolfblade]

0.0 nice

[wjfox46]

huge wall of text scares me

[pkakale]

Chapter 3
Your mine…

Hey you guys here the 3rd chapter, I know I know
I write a lot huh? I have nothing better to do that why.
Lol. Well anyway. Plz comment.
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(Pandara P.O.V)

You are the most despicable slime in the world!” I spit at his face, he looked mad, he wipe the spit off his face, and glared at me, but I didn’t back down.
“You really want your family to get hurt don’t you?” he said.
Did I really want my family to get hurt? No I can’t let him hurt them…
“No…no I don’t want them to get hurt.” I said.
“Good girl.” He grabbed me up and holds me to him, I could feel his member pressing against me, “You guys can go; I’m going to be here a little longer.”
The boys left him; I was alone with this devil…
He grabbed me and started pulling me with him, he put me on top of the table, and he came for my t-shirt, “What are you doing!” I yelled.
“Let’s have a little fun shall we?” he grabbed my t-shirt and pulled it off of me, bearing me with my bra only. I started to scream.
“No one gonna help you sweetie.” He pushed me down so that I was lying on the table; he went on top of me and started kissing me. His hand was everywhere he was grabbing my breast, squeezing them with all his strengths. Am I really going to become this man toy?

(End of Pandara P.O.V)

(TOP P.O.V)

Dam this chick taste good, her breast was just the right size for my hand, not to big, not to small. I unhooked her bra kissing the valley between her breasts, when the bra was off, I was giving the most glorious sight a man can only wish to see everyday, her breast was beautiful. I took on nipple into my mouth, I suckled it slowly, has I felt her relaxed. The old man gave me his daughter, ha…I’m just glad she a pure virgin, now only I can fu-k her. After I was done suckling the first nipple I went to the next, I pulled her pants down leaving her only with her panties, I then slid my hand between her legs, my hand resting at her pussy. She tried to push my hand away but to no avail since I am the strongest. I thrust my tongue into her mouth as my finger slid inside her panties; I put my hand inside her folds, until I found the spot that opens her inner beast. I flicked once at her clit as she moaned inside my mouth. I broke the kiss, “You like that don’t you sweetie?” I continue to kiss her ask I rubbed her clit, making her buckled and moan into my mouth. I pulled my hand out and sucked on my finger that was in her tight sheath, “Dam sweetie you taste good.”
I came between her legs, pulling them apart so that I can have access to her magnificent pussy. I pulled her panties off, “WHAT ARE YOU DOING! STOP”
I hold her down and flicked my tongue across her clit, she started moaning and buckling again. I licked her up and down side to side, as she tries to wiggle away from me. I stopped and push my self between her body, my d!ck press against her pussy, “Do you feel that sweetie? I’m hard for you; I’m going to pound my d!ck in and out of you.” I hold her legs apart as I plunge deep into her wet warm tight pussy. She cried out in pain, god this $hit feels incredible. I almost came then and there. fu-k yea…
“STOP! You’re hurting me!”
“Not a chance sweetie, I won’t stop especially when it feels this good.” I pulled out and thrust back into her full force. I repeated do so, until I was struggling for release. I pulled her for a kiss. I thrust one last time as my seed spurt out and into her pussy. After I was done, I wipe my remain seed that was on me, and threw the towel at her to clean herself. She was crying. Girls… that was all they’re good for…sex and only sex.
“I hate you! You ruin me!” she yelled.
“Don’t blame me, blame your appa!” I said.
“You had what you want! Now let me go!” she yelled.
I grabbed and squeezed her hand, “No my sweet…your mine…”

(End of TOP P.O.V)

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Well that the 3rd chapter lol, I hoped you guys liked it. Ha-ha I will update tomorrow.

This post has been edited by pkakale: Nov 4 2008, 09:35 PM

[wolfblade]

my partially virgin eyyesss

good job xD

[pkakale]

Chapter 4
His home my prison…

(Pandara P.O.V)

After the devil had his way with me, they blindfold and tied my hands. I had no idea where they are going. When the car stop, one of them dragged me out of the car, they took off the blindfold. I found myself staring at the most beautiful house. But my thoughts was shattered when girl way older then me and even older then the devil and his friends. She came out her breast bare and jutted out for all to see.
“Seunghyunnie! I missed you.” She stared at me, “Who is this girl?” she said dogging me, her body pressing intimately to him.
“She here to replace you.”
“She can’t be, she can’t please you like I can.” The older woman said in denial.
“Actually she can, I tried her out already.” The devil said.
How dare he? How can he tell this tramp!
“Please Seunghyunnie, don’t kick me out, no one can fu-k me better then you.” She said.
“Hmm…if you want to keep your position, show me how much.” The devil told her.
Before I knew what he meant, she was on her knees pulling down his zipper, I almost gagged when she pulled out his d!ck and engulfed it in her mouth, he was huge, and yet she had him half way in her mouth. While sucking his d!ck she started massaging his balls, she dipped down and sucked on his balls. You could hear the disgusting sound she was making. I turned my face away.
“Tae, make sure she watches me.” Tae held my face in place so that I watch their nasty display. The devil pulled her up by her hair and pushed her to the nearest table, he pulled up her skirt and thrust deep in her pussy, “Yes…oh…uh…um…my…god…fu-k…uh…” she moaned.
“I’m coming b!tch.” He pulled her by the hair again making her suck his d!ck again as he came in her mouth…the tramp swallowed it.
I was totally disgusted.
“So…do you really think she can do better?” the tramp asked.
“Yes, way better, plus I like tight pussies, not loose. *Snap* throw her out, make sure she doesn’t come back.”
He dragged me up the flight of stairs, the tramps still calling to him. He took me to the master bedroom and threw me on the bed.
“You like the show didn’t you sweetie?” he asked me.
I got up and swung at him, my fist connecting to his jaw, “fu-k you, you son of a b!tch!”
“Not only you dress like a man, you swing like one too.” he said, spitting the blood from his mouth.
I tried to swing at him again, but this time he grabbed my hand and threw me against the wall, “For that, I’m going to punish you.” While pinning my hand to the wall, his hand went to my pants and pulled it down, he threw me on the bed. I tried to get up, but I felt my @$$ rise up, my panties were dragged down. The next moment I cried out in pain as he thrust deep inside my @$$.
“fu-k…oh…$hit…you’re so tight…oh…uh…” he moaned.
I cried as he ram in and out of me. I squeeze the bed sheet trying to soothe the pain. The bed shook every time he thrust into me.
I hate my father! I hate this devil, but most importantly I hate myself. I hate myself for not being able to fight him hard enough.
He plunged into me over and over again. The pain didn’t lessen only worsen. All I can feel is my @$$ tearing every time he thrust himself in.
Then I felt it, straight to my toes as he cum inside of me.
He pulled out of me; the pain was still there…
“Don’t ever get me mad again, I won’t guarantee the life of your family. He threw my pants at me and left outside.
In one day, my life change, the life I once love, now is the life I want to forget. I am trapped in the devil home…I had earned a prison to call my own…

(End of Pandara P.O.V)

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Well here’s the 4th chapter, did you guys like it was it ok?
Plz comment…

[wolfblade]

i repeat, my partially virgin eyyyess D=

is good xD

[treesa]

aww i feel bad for her
top is soo mean always
raping her..

[wjfox46]

poor poor girl......

[pkakale]

Chapter 5
The gentle side of him…

This is not rated, lol I hope you guys aren’t
Disappointed, lol...
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(Pandara P.O.V)

I woke up the next morning, I was startled. This wasn’t my house! Where am I? Then I remembered it all came back to me. Yesterday was my worst nightmare. Starting today, it the beginning of more nightmares. Tears came down my eyes. I have nothing else to save that devil trampled my dignity when he raped me. I tried to get out of bed, my leg buckled from the pain between my legs.
I suddenly felt nauseous, I just remember I didn’t eat yesterday, I felt like puking, my stomach felt as if there was a knife stabbing me over and over again. I stared at the bed…omo there’s blood…that bastard rip my inside…my stomach wrenched again…it hurt…it hurt so much…

(End of Pandara P.O.V)

(TOP P.O.V)

I sit up from my bed; I kicked the b!tch that was sleeping beside me off the bed.
The b!tch woke up, “Seunghyunnie!!!” the girl cried.
“Get the fu-k out you slut!” I yelled.
After the b!tch left, I went straight to thinking, why did that Pandara chick have to get me so mad? Why couldn’t I kill her? This never happen to me before.
I decided to go see her, I went to her door, “Open the door.” I said.

*No answer*

“OPEN THE fu-kEN DOOR!” I yelled
But still there was no answer, I tried to turn the door knob, luckily the door wasn’t lock. I opened the door, instead of sleeping on the bed; there she was lying on the floor.
Dam I guess she likes the floor rather then a comfortable bed. I walked up to her and try to kick her awake. But when my foot touched her skin, I was shocked from the burning fever. I went on my knees and touched her skin. Her body flaming hot, I picked her up and lift up taking her back to the bed.
I ordered one of the maids to bring me a bucket of water and clean towel. I started wiping her body down. Her skin was so soft; I wiped her cheeks when I felt the swollen part, why is her cheek swollen? I don’t remember striking her.
Then I remembered. Yesterday the old man had raised his hand to strike her. That bastard abused her before? Then something I never felt in a long time rise up in my body. Is that anger I’m feeling? I haven’t been mad over a girl for so long. Dam…beats me. It felt good. I should have made the old man suffer before killing him.
Then I felt her stirring, her eyes flew open and directly toward me…

(End of TOP P.O.V)

(Pandara P.O.V)

A tender yet firm touched woke me up, I find myself staring at the devil. He surprised me by stroking my hair, “How are you feeling?” he had such tenderness in his eyes. This can’t be the guy who destroyed my life yesterday.
But no matter how nice he seems, he’s still the bastard who ruined me, “Let me go…” I said
“*deep sigh* Why do you like to kill my mood?”
“Please let me go!” I pleaded him.
“As I said before, you belong to me.” he said.
“You Devil! I hate you! I hope you rot in hell!” I yelled with all my strength I had left, “I hope to god one day your heart will be trampled, that you died with a broken heart!”
He stand up, his eyes full of anger, “You don’t have to wish that, I already felt the pain my heart rip out from the person I love!*grabbed my hair* don’t say things your going to regret, it well cause you dearly. *pushed me on the bed* if you don’t want things to happen to your sister the same that happen to your sister, the same that happen to you…I suggest the next time I come around you better be respectful and obedient.” He left.
What did he mean his heart rip out by his love one?
Not to long ago his eyes was full of tenderness. Just in mere seconds it was replaced with anger again.
There must be a gentle side of him, who had made him change so much?

(End of Pandara P.O.V)

(TOP P.O.V)

Why did she have to bring out the mean side of me?
She should be grateful I even took the time to tend to her. Break my heart…ha! No a chance! Not again. I won’t let any girl break my heart again not like Eun-soh…Eun-soh that b!tch…

(End of TOP P.O.V)

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Well here the 5 chapter I hope you like it….
Plz comment…

[pkakale]

Chapter 6
Am I falling for the devil!


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(Pandara P.O.V)

I woke up to the early morning, if I wasn’t feeling so depress I might notice the beauty of the early morning.

*knock*
*knock*
*knock*

“Who is it?” I called out.
“I’m the maid miss.” The stranger answered.
I open the door, there standing in my doorway was a girl no more then 16 or 17, “Um…is there something you need?” I asked her.
“My name is Minye, from the master’s order, I am to serve you.”
The girl looked well trained, but I wonder if the bastard had touched her as he had touched me.
So I decided to ask her, “Um…you not one of his…you know…uh…” she started blushing, so did I.
“No…never, he very kind to me, but never like that.” She said.
“Oh…I’m sorry if I offended you.” I apologized.
“Its fine miss…um, is their anything you like me to do for you?”
“No, but thanks.”
After she left, went to take a bath. The water felt good against my skin. The scent of lavender filled my nostrils. Umm…

(End of Pandara P.O.V)

(TOP P.O.V)

Why can’t I take her out of my head? I walked into her room; the scent of lavender suffocated the air. I walked to the bathroom, the door was open, I walked quietly, inside there lay in all her naked glory. I found myself hard just the sight of her.
I walked out the door; I decided to wait outside…

(End of TOP P.O.V)
(Pandara P.O.V)

That was such a nice bath, I felt refreshed I could smell the lavender on my skin. I walked outside and my heart almost dropped, when I spotted the devil sitting on my top of my bed.
“What do you want?” I asked curtly.
He smiled my hair and the nape of my neck, “You smell so good, my favorite scent.”
I pulled me into his arms, “I want you.”
“You can’t, so let me go you bastard!” I yelled, struggling away from him.
He tugged off my towel; I was standing in front of him naked as the day I was born. He grabbed my hair pulling me in for a kiss. I bit his lips until I can taste his blood in my mouth.
He pushed me causing me to fall on my @$$, “What did I tell you about disobeying me?! Do you really care less about your family life? One command your family can die in an instant.” He said.
“NO! No…don’t hurt my family! I’ll do anything…” I cried.
He smirked, “For disobeying me…get on your knees!” I did as he bid, “I really thought I didn’t have to come to this, to let you do this is like those sluts. But it’s you doing. I want you to take out my d!ck.” I blinked away my tears, I undid his pants, and I slid my hand inside when. I felt something warm and soft; I pulled my hand away like I just got burn. I tried again grabbing the soft warm thing out.
So this was the thing that took my virginity…
“Now stroke it…” he said hoarsely.
I started to stroke it, causing him to moan deeply behind his throat. I got the hand of it and keeping pumping him. But he stopped me, and cross the room to the bed. He sat down and motioned me to him.
I was position between his legs, “Now take me into your mouth.” He said.
I wanted to gag, I open my mouth, and he guided it into my mouth. The warm staff fit halfway into my mouth. “fu-k! Your mouth is so hot…uh…it feels so good.” He moaned.
At that moment I had the control, I felt powerful, I felt as if I was holding the world in my hand, I sucked and lick him up and down. The way I saw that slut had done it when I first came into this household. It didn’t look to difficult. I was actually having fun making him moan.
“Stop…” I stopped and looked at him with his d!ck still in my mouth.
“Come, lay here.” I got up and went to sit next to him; he gentle pushed me down so that I was lying on my back.
His hand slid from cheeks to my breast, he kissed me sliding his tongue into my mouth, as his hand knead and massage my breast. I couldn’t help but moaned. His mouth left mines, trailing down the valley of my breast, I cried out as his mouth closed around my nipple suckling. His hand went to my pussy, going between the folds until he found the spot that drive me crazy, I did nothing but squeeze his hand with my thigh screaming out with pleasure. I almost came off the bed when his mouth replaced his hand. I buckled, whimpering for more.
He came between my leg, oh no…the pain part…
I brace myself for the pain, but as he entered me there was no pain. Instead there was only pleasure. He pulled out and pushed back into me I wanted to die from the pleasure. I moaned with his every thrust.
“fu-k! You are so tight…uh…$hit…I’m coming!” he shouted as I felt his hot seed all the way to my womb. I came with him.
He collapsed on top of me knocking the air out of my lungs but I liked it. Oh…no, please don’t tell me…am I falling for the devil?

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Here is chapter 6 Hehehe did you liked it?
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[treesa]

great chapter=D

[wjfox46]

lol she likes it, interesting spin

[pkakale]

Chapter 7
Encounter with Tae...
Hey you guys hehehe
Thnx for all the comment
I’m so happy, hehehe
Well here a chap about the
Two sisters. Ima pause
On Pandara for awhile I need
To bring out the others ha-ha
Hope you don’t mind…. Oh and
It slighty rated, well rated but no
Sex yet haha.

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(Sandy P.O.V)

“Umma, please don’t cry too much, I know you miss her, I do too. But it not healthy for you to cry like that.” I don’t know what to do; my sister was taking from us, by those evil people. Now it’s up to Daleen and I to take care of our mother. I just wish my sister would be ok.
“Daleen, what umma, I’m going to the store to buy some food.” I said.
“Ok…but be careful ok.” She told me.
I nodded and went to the stores.

(End of Sandy P.O.V)

*At the stores*

(Tae P.O.V)

The more I tried to forget the more I see her in my mind; Pandara sister has taken my interest. Speaking of the angel…I saw her strolling in market.
I walked to her.
“Um…can I get some Chocopie, oh and some egg rolls.” She asked the seller.
“Who are you buying it for, I know you don’t eat all that. Do you?” I asked her.
“YOU!!!”
“*Chuckling* *Ahem* my name is Tae…not you.” I smiled.
“What—what do you want from me?” she asked.
I pulled the tip of her hair, and tangle it in one finger, it was silky and smooth, “What do you think I want to do?” I asked huskily.
“Here you go miss.” The seller gave the item to her.
Dam fu-ken lady, I glared at the seller, she backed away. I turn back to the chick I was talking to only to find her gone.
DAMNIT!

(End of Tae P.O.V)

(Sandy P.O.V)

Whew! That was close, omo I was so scared just a minute ago. What did he want? Before I can guess. Someone grabbed me and took me into the alley. I tried to scream for help but my mouth was trapped in someone hand.
“Shh…don’t make a word…” it him…
He let my mouth go, I couldn’t move he had pinned me to the wall.
“You smell so nice…” he started sniffing me, “What’s your name?” he asked me.
“Um…my name is Sandy…please let me go, I need to get home, my mother and sister will be worried.” I pleaded him.
“Don’t worry this won’t take long, I just want to feel you, I want to taste you…”
“What?”—
His lips captured mine, his tongue forcing it way into my mouth his hand sliding up my rib cage, going under my breast as he devour my mouth. His hand move to grab between my legs through the skirt, I almost yelled.
He pulled up my skirt, his hand skimming my knees, to my thighs, and the place where he wanted to go, my pussy.
He went through my panties, until he felt my burning flesh.
“STOP!” I yelled.
“Not yet sweeties a little more, moan for me. He pushed his finger into my pussy, I cried out in pain. Tears strung my cheeks. It hurt…and even as I cried he didn’t stop his torment. He rammed his finger into my pussy over and over again. But after the while the pain had subsided, only pleasure was visible, I found myself moaning and wanting more, I felt so shameful, “You like that don’t you sweetie.” He teased
“Please…st—stop…”
“A little bit more.”
“Ahh….” Tremor of hot pleasure took over, I cum on his hand, this is so embarrassing.
He pulled out his hand, “Don’t worry, there will be other time, until next time…don’t miss me to much…”
He left me in the alley, as I cried my eyes out, how can I let him invade my body like that. So shameful…so shameful…

(End of Sandy P.O.V)

(Tae P.O.V)

That was pleasing, dam I still smell her on my hand, I licked my hand…yum…virgins…
I walked home, this was the best day…and there will be better days to come.
“Where have you been?” G.Dragon asked.
“None of your business.” I told him.
“You know we were looking for you? If TOP finds out, what am I going to tell him? I’m not going to help you out all the time.” He said.
I didn’t tell you too.” I told him.
“Whatever man, I’m just watching your back.” He told me.
“I’m cool with that bro…and I’m happy your worried.” I said.
“Well then stop it.” he said.
“I”—
“What are you guys talking about?” Seungri asked.
“Nothing.” We both went the opposite, I don’t care what he said…I’m not a baby, I’ll do what I want, who have a problem with me can fu-k themselves…

(End of Tae P.O.V)

(Sandy P.O.V)

*At home*

“Sandy unni! Did you get my egg rolls?” Daleen asked me.
“Yea…here.” I said, I gave her the egg rolls. I went to my mom, I didn’t dare look at her, I gave her the Chocopie.
I walked up the stairs, and went to my room, in my own little world I can cry how much I want, I feel so shameful…

(End of Sandy P.O.V)

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Well here’s chapter 7 I hope you like it…
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This post has been edited by pkakale: Nov 14 2008, 04:45 PM

[pkakale]

Chapter 8
Fighting G.Dragon (Part 1)


Hey guys you seen what happen with
Tae and Sandy…now look at G.D
And Daleen.

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(Daleen P.O.V)

My unni is acting so strange. What happen? I decided to go up to her room and ask her.
I opened the door to her room, “Unni? Can I come”—
She tried to hide her face, but not before I saw the tears that were dripping from her eyes.
“Unni, what’s wrong?” I went to her, she started crying non stop. I held her in my arms trying to soothe her, “its ok unni…I’m here now. Tell me what’s wrong?” I cried
“I’m dirty…*pushed herself out of my arms* don’t touch me!” she hugged her knees, rocking back and forth, “I’m so sorry, I’m so dirty…please forgive me.” she cried.
“Unni! Tell me what’s wrong?” I yelled at her.
“He touched me! He touched me all over! He hurt me! Oh god! She cried.
I hugged her, she tried to push me but on the 3rd try she gave up, she held me back.
You hurt one of my sisters, now you hurt another? I would never forget you guys! I hate you guys…Black Dragons…
I held my sister in my arms, even though it not forever; at least just for tonight I would make her feel happy…

(End of Daleen P.O.V)

(G.Dragon P.O.V)

I walked down the street to get a little fresh air when TOP called me, “What up?” I asked him.
“I need you to do something for me, can you?” he asked.
“Of course…what do you want?” I asked him.
“I want you to go check on Pandara family, to see how they are doing, can you do that bro?”
“Yea…I can…” I told him.
I left the house, and started driving to Pandara family house.

*At Pandara house*

I arrived at her house, but I didn’t go in, I looked at the house from afar, I was about to nod of to sleep when I saw someone coming out of the house.
Isn’t that the youngest of Pandara sister? What was her name? I decided to follow her to see where she was going.
I followed her to the donut store…donut star? What is she getting? I started laughing when she got egg rolls. So this girl likes egg rolls. I smiled to myself…

(End of G.Dragon P.O.V)

(Daleen P.O.V)

EGG ROLLS!!! Hahaha I walked home happy, they got egg rolls. Oh $hit! I forgot to get some Chocopie for umma and Sandy unni. I turned around and bump into someone’s chest.
“Oh sorry…I didn’t mean to”—
Omo it him…G.Dragon…
“Hey cutie, where you heading?” then I remember…anger rose within me.

(End of Daleen P.O.V)

(G.Dragon P.O.V)

*Wham*

I fell backward…this chick punched me? She punched me! No one…no one ever did that to me before.
“YOU @$$hole! WHAT DID YOU GUYS DO TO MY SISTER! WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER? WHICH ONE OF YOU BASTARD TOUCHED HER!” she yelled at me.
“What the hell is she talking about?” I asked her.
“YOU b!tch!” she tried to slam her fist into my face again.
I grabbed her, bending her arm behind her back, “LET ME GO YOU BASTARD!”

(End of G.Dragon P.O.V)

(Daleen P.O.V)

“LET ME GO YOU @$$hole!” I tried too move, but he only tightens his hold. Then his hand grabbed my @$$ in return, “What a nice shape…you got one beautiful shaped @$$. What’s your name sweetly?”
“Go to hell!” I yelled.
“That not a good thing to say to your elder.”
“fu-k you, get your filthy hands off my @$$!”
“Nope… I like where it at.” He pulled my hand and dragged me to his car, he pushed me in, and close the door, “Where the fu-k are you taking me?”
I soon found out when he took me to a hotel, Aish what is he going to do!
“Give me a room!”
“That would be 3 hundred a night, 1000”—
“Give it to me now, I don’t have time! *gave him 3 hundred*” the guy look so scared he was shaking when he gave him the key.
I was dragged up the stairs, and then thrown on top of the bed, with him on top of me, “You like to fight don’t you? You know you remind me of your sister, to bad she belongs to TOP now, but you’ll do…I think your slight prettier then her anyway.”
“What do you mean she belongs to him?” I asked.
“Don’t worry, you’ll belong to me soon, but not today…I just want to taste you…”

(End Daleen P.O.V)

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Here part one, sorry, hahaha you will find out
What he going to do in the next part so stay tune lol.

[wolfblade]

nicee

[wjfox46]

interesting ^.^

[xcape]

very nice (:
are you updating anytime soon?

[pkakale]

Chapter 9

Fighting G.Dragon (Part 2)



(Daleen P.O.V)

“Don’t worry, you’ll belong to me soon, but not today…I just want to taste you…” he turned me over pinning me on the bed; he was between my legs so that I can’t kick him, “Get off of me!” I yelled.
“No…I like where I’m at.” Before I knew his intention he swoops down kissing my neck, I couldn’t move my hands he had them pinned down on top of my head, “fu-ken let go of me!” I yelled again.
He wouldn’t let me go, he continue to kiss me. his hand slid to my pants. He undid my pants sliding his hand inside…
“STOP! STOP; TAKE YOUR FITHLY HANDS AWAY FROM ME! DIDN’T YOU HAVE ENOUGH YET; YOU GUYS HAD BOTH OF MY SISTERS, NOW YOU WANT ME TOO!!!”
“But you too are 3 different person,” he said.
Then he silenced me with another kiss, his finger found a spot where I never knew can make your body tingle.
He flicked my clit, making my whole body tremble.
“Stop…stops please…” I couldn’t make him stop, why can’t I make him stop?”
“You like that don’t you?”
“NEVER!” I growled.
“But your body is telling me a whole different story.”
The I felt it. As if my world just exploded. I bit my lips from crying out. My body trembled from the aftermath.
He licked his finger, “You tasted good.”
Tears stung my eyes, “You got what you wanted now let me go.” I said with all the dignity I have left.
“No I didn’t have enough, but I’ll let you go only today, next time will be even better…
He drove me home, I wanted to cry, how can I feel pleasure in what he did to me? the man who is a part in ruining my life.
I hate you G.Dragon…

(End of Daleen P.O.V)

(G.Dragon P.O.V)

I could still smell her sex on ym finger, her sweet young pussy.
“G.D, TOP wants you.” Dae told me.
“Alright.”
I went to TOP’s room, “You called me?”
“How is the family doing?”
“Not to great in my opinion, the house rent is late, it only a matter of time before they would be kicked out, the clothes they have aren’t even new or clean, it raggedy and dirty. They are skinny, it like their starving.”
He went to his table and grabbed out a check he scribbled something on it and handed it to me.
“3,000? Isn’t that to much.” It not that I care or anything, it just that he never actually cared about what I tell him about his woman’s family.
“No…I want you to buy them a house, pay for the girl education. I heard they were still in school. Anyway, if you need anything else just tell me.”
In school? I was messing with a school girl?
“Ok…” I was about to walk out when he called me.
“Take the boys with you…”
I walked out of the room, and went looking for the boys, I have to find the guy that touched the chick sister…and I think I know who it is…

(End of G.Dragon P.O.V)

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Here the 2nd part, did you
Wait long? HahaI hoped you
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