Poetry, About Nature Options

[ICUQB4UQRU]

"If a tree fall in a forest what do you heard?"

1st Translation:

Total silent peace and calm of the forest
Sudden snap of wood I heaard
One step I am alred a sinner
Seven steps they called me master
-Yiam Asimer

2nd Translation:

I slept on cold rock
And took hot spring bath
The tree did fall ever slowly
Unlike that of waterfall

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This post has been edited by ICUQB4UQRU: Jan 3 2009, 03:32 PM

[ICUQB4UQRU]

"Whu do you sleep all the time master?"

1st Translation:

There are Yin and there is Yang
I drink to the sadness of life
I run to drown in tears
To live, I must first die

To die, I must die each and everyday
So that my spirit ever revived
It breath of life is ever wide
Little air it needed for my lung had die

I wandern the dessert sand alone
Roughness thicken my skins and dry my wounds
For when I thirst, I drank my own blood
Mixed with it soil, a taste o surviver

I often lay with metal and rock
That of which my nerves too die
It shocks deformed my bones
Torns or cuts ensure it opponent certain death

I eat and drink at will
So that my body itself poison
Yet, mothernature's old cursed
As I requested a merit's demise


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This post has been edited by ICUQB4UQRU: Jan 26 2009, 07:09 AM

[ICUQB4UQRU]

"How come you have yet to 'lost' a battle master?"

1st Translation:

My words are sharper than my sword
For I either play dead
Or I run away
For if something up, I'll just dial 911

-Mr. Logico

Edit: (Using logico) Dude, I posted 3 posts and it said 2 outside of this page. Better study quickly if you wants to be a Jedi. Mocking laugh

This post has been edited by ICUQB4UQRU: Jan 3 2009, 07:15 PM

[cloudyski]

what is this?

the first sounds deep

[ICUQB4UQRU]

"How come your first blade so shining new?"

First Translation:

For I never block nor step backward
Never does it touch its victim's bone
At my zennest, regvenctiful soul cry
Thousands blades fly, yet, it is not I
For when you duel with me, so does
Shall duel with all my former enemy

[cloudyski]

:o

[P00F]

>.> im confused...

it sounds really good but did u write it?

[ICUQB4UQRU]

>.> im confused...

it sounds really good but did u write it?

It is dangerous poetry with comedical tone.

Doc Co Cau Bai (here?? probably not) (He exist for only one reason and that's his prayer "to lose", I am serious)
Hooooan Vuuuu (here) (of course I don't think I created comedy but whatever; however, I learned alot of stuffs from other)

Yes I wrote it (here on this internet forum.) However, it is not exclusive right (in term of _________.) Because anyone can use its poetry-techniques and if you don't do it correctly then it cut you. It like a punch of flying blazes of words like that of the sharpness of the concerned medium (for example, wind) but make sure you don't step backward or it will hurt you (as in people start thinking I'm retarded or something. -shug) Yeah, I'm beginning to suspect that the original creator of this poetry movement, have like only one "monotonic-move." I am ok because no one is like attacking me literally while I am accidentally invoke it. It kind'a like you wants to reply but each time you start making mistake like gramma errors, spelling errors, fall down, yours pen scrach you, or like all of a sudden you realize you bleeding or something. Whatever. Basically, is not a good technique in my opinion. And then you have dimensional ants start biting you because they are the spirit of the land or something. I don't know. Metaphors of the living death.-shug

"I can here yours Vietnamese though 'noi sao khong ah'" Anyway, place he usually at is in Ancient Chinese film but I doubt you'll last in Ancient Asian hell. You have really really skillful and strong characters, what will they do to you? One thing for certain, they fight each other.

This post has been edited by ICUQB4UQRU: Mar 16 2009, 05:29 PM

[okikurumi]

one of my poem written in Ainu:

sitcuk ek na.
tapkop kasi ke ta
hure ni-ham un citarpe
kunne kamuy a.

fall came.
on the top of the hill
on the litter of red leaves
black bear sits.

[ICUQB4UQRU]

The tall tree sat nake
Lighting stuck
It is trap within
Yet the bear still there

Hey, Okikumuri, are you Japanese (you guy like sword and stuffs, sorry just an assumption) because it is not dangeous to one who know very little about "literature" because if one cannot pick up a brick of gold with one hand then it's as if nothing. But one pick it up and start holding it, it need a certain state of control. That why it is naturally safe from a skinny guy to do it, because it is "not suppose to be like this;" that is, it is X% of physical strength, Y% of ________ (or what some called "the force.")

Edit: you name sound like "ok come kill me" Ha ha

This post has been edited by ICUQB4UQRU: Mar 29 2009, 11:25 PM

[Choo]

There once was a man from Japan
Into the forest he ran
He started to pee
On the next tree
Then the tree fell on the man.

[Chillin]

In a world with tiny pains
Learning fool
Knows but doesn't

[MyNameIsVu]

In a world with tiny pains
Learning fool
Knows but doesn't

I like this. Ha ha ha, are you saying if someone state that he can build a starship but can't. I don't think so. I was watching Star Trek today, man it look so fake yet real. Too bad, they does not consider me to be on theirs side, therefore, they are not what consider good people as they hide theirs best products, hide the truths, and try to invoke anger from the like of me. Well, I hope someone will teach them a lesson, but I would not, sinking to theirs level is not proper characteristics of human beings. But yeah, I think the world should be more equalised before one engage to space, what a punches of dreamer who only think of themselves. They can't even solve theirs own problem, as the current leader, yet assert themself as leadership of "Star Fleet." Science fiction indeed. All driving around with theirs submarines, and battle ships, what a punches of retard.

[maggieblue]

Fluffy cotton clouds
drift above calm blue sea shore,
walker hunts for shells.

[tangawizi]

infinity in the plains
savannah masai
searches for the whiff of rain

[KeepinItBaller]

Can't believe i sat here and read this

[fivers]

**On the Beach**

Vietsk8rgui, boobu and Fivers were walking on the beach
it was late and the sunset showed colors from yellow to peach
a hot breeze came along so they went bathing
the water was nice and warm and the waves really shaking
suddenly something seemed out of reach
Vietsk8rgui had lost his swimming pants and boobu started to preach!
"now you are all naked! what are you gonna do?!"
"don't worry" said Vietsk8rgui, "I will borrow Fivers' bikini top"
"she hasn't much anyway to cover up!"
"that was not fun" said Fivers, "as if you have much to!"
Vietsk8rgui became red and started to cover himself with his hands
"too late!" said Boobu, "we've already seen you w/o your pants!"
luckily they found a leaf on the beach to cover up Vietsk8rgui
he was quite relieved and started to dance
at that moment Samnang passed by
as he saw the leaf, he started to glance
"yes", said Fivers and Boobu, "this is Hawaii!"
so Samnang started to dance also
and invited Boobu to dance a slow
they danced until the peachy sunset
disappeared completely
like a sunken town
all alone and lonely
into the weaves of the ocean
like a shiny minaret
that disappears into the dark and dawn
of a dead city excempt of any light and motion.

another one

**In the Woods**

mndeg and Fivers were walking in the woods
it was autumn and they were wearing their boots
suddenly mndeg saw a small deer
it had appeared from nowhere
a big scary wolf was also there!
chasing after the poor little deer!
mndeg and Fivers were both upset
"we have to save Bambi!" Fivers said
"yes!" said mndeg, "I'm taking my gun!"
by now the wolf had noticed them also
"oh dear!" said mndeg "we got to go!"
and scared they both started to run
"help!" sreamed Fivers "I don't wanna die!"
and mndeg yelled "neither do I!"
luckily boobu and Vietsk8rgui were passing by
along with a yummy Shepherd's Pie
'for the picknick later that day'
the wolf smelled the pie and said "yay!"
like swirling shimmer in the grey autumn mist
this shivering tale luckily took a happy twist.

This post has been edited by fivers: Dec 20 2009, 01:03 PM

[GentleWind]

going to sleep now rain and snow outside
wait smoke a cig first
good night

[pinkpandora]

dancing in my way
without worry and pay
ok, that's great
that's the way

[mgsekar]

Some people like daffodils in springtime's first bloom,
And some like roses with summer perfume,
But I like the half brown half green leaves from the oak
That we burn early winter, chilly with smoke.

Not just fruition but also decay,
Not just green, but russet and gray,
Not just wind in the leaves trapping heat,
But the smell of mold and the dampness of peat.

The oak is stiff and in winter stands tall
When the owls in the forest swoop down and call
"Who's going to scamper now that freely I fly?
For I live in the forest so others may die."
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This post has been edited by Ralf: Oct 13 2010, 05:14 AM