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Jun Vs. Armadio, the endless struggle.........
Jun
post Feb 9 2004, 02:29 AM
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(BTW this story is completely original and is copy righted by me just like all my other stories on AF)


as many of u r aware of me n armadio have a lil score 2 settle but this a story if we were 2 encounter each other in real life.

Jun VS Armadio

On a cold summer morning around 6:00am the sky was still dark ,all that could be seen were two shadowy figures standing on a bridge above a freeway though not a car could be in sight the only thing on besides them on the bridge was two bags on either end. Eyeing each other carefully. As jun and made armadio made their way across the bridge two each other the only thing that could be heard was the gravel crunching under their feet.

Only two feet away fom each other after long examination of each other which only lasted a minute seemed to be an hour to them."I can't wait to see you squriming on the ground then after you Cevil is next" whispered Armadio.
Jun looked at him in the eye and replied "Fine".

A smirk came across Armadio's face "Jun you don't know how long i've waited for this moment" Armadio hd threw the first punch during the sentence. the punch was so unexpected that jun fell straight to the ground after being hit at his right cheek.blood trickled out of Jun's mouth.

With no remorse Armadio lefted his foot right up in a formation of an axe kick and slamed his foot down towards Jun. with quick thinking Jun rolled to his side narrowly escaping an unfortunate fate. Then tried a sweep kicked at Armadio who easily avoided the attack by jumping. Jun then after turning only 180 degrees then jumped in the air once reaching 360 degrees and swung his right foot with full force at Armadio's left check.

Armadio had lost a bit of balance but quickly regained it. The resumed staring at each other with in dying hatred until a drop of blood from Armadio's mouth had
fallin to the ground. "Give up jun and I will give you an easy death!" threatend Armadio. "Not a chance" answered Jun. With that responce Armadio walked to the bag on his side and held something long and silverish "Oh fu-k" said Jun in shock.
Jun walked to his bag and grabbed out his masamune. Armadio walked with his katana close by his side.

Armadio said calmly "It's already came to this............" All Jun kept thinking was "how did i get myself in this position?" The pair started slashing each other ferociously knowing that if one can get just one slash in it could make ll the difference. It was unfortunate for both that they were using extreme caution which made the fight more tense. Finally Armadio knocked Jun's sword out of his hand. He then kicked Jun to the ground and held his sword to Jun's neck.

"Jun I have all ways been better......" said Armadio "I can't beleive this is it........."
said Jun expecting his fate to sealed but a horn blew Armadio saw a truck speeding their way Jun took seize of the moment and quickly got up.Armadio was ready to run but Jun grabbed a hold of Armadio from behind in the struggle Armadio dropped his sword. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING" screamed Armadio in panic.
Armadio heart beat was beating harder and harder. Jun smiled and said grimly "We will both go........." "Wait Jun i wasn't gonna kill you! plus if we both die it will be a draw plus this is unfair!we both know i would've finished you off before" said Armadio in a desperate voice. "wrong my friend i had away of getting out"
the truck driver saw the two and slammed the bakes but the truck was still skidding towards them. "good bye Jun.........." "good bye Armadio we shall finish this in the after life"
THE END

so wat did ya'll fink about it???? i decided that it wouldn't b fair if only one of us won so i made a draw biggrin.gif

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post Mar 9 2004, 11:59 PM
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The next morning Jun and Armadio were walking through the city as they were walking to AF the accident went past some people taking photo's. They once again were in front of AF, Jun walked in the building followed by Armadio. "see that desk there" pointed Jun "yeh" replied Armadio "why?" "you have to apply for membership then they'll give you a name tag see" said Jun pointing to his.
"I have to wear a name tag!" exclaimed Armadio in shock "but there so......." "Just do it!" commanded Jun. "Ok ok im going........."
"how did i ever get myself into this..........." thought Armadio to himself as approached the desk. He saw a guy with the name tag saying "KoRn". "look at this paper work for me Ben" said KoRn throwing a binder at Ben. "Ouch! what the hell do you have in this thing" asked Ben as he started to rub his head. KoRn broke out into laughter. "Yeah keep laughin' KoRn until you see what happened to your car" said Ben mischiefly "my car...." said KoRn to himself "MY CAR!" KoRn ran outside the building.
Armadio saw Ben putting what looked like laxative's in KoRn's coffee. Ben achknowledge Armadio waiting. "Hi how may i help you" asked Ben "I came to apply for membership" anwsered Armadio. "Sure just fill out these forms and your set" instructed Ben as he reached in side the desk for an application form............

Jun was wondering why KoRn had ran out side the building so fast..........then he saw a girl entering the AF lounge. She saw him looking at her and he just looked away for awhile "Whoa...........who is she?" thought Jun to himself. Jun saw that Armadio was still filling out the form. "I'll go for a quick peck for her name tag then come back......" thought Jun to himself by the time he turned around she was gone. "arrrgggghhhh now iv'e got to look for her............." sighed Jun to himself as he approached the AF lounge
He scanned the room.........kulong was talking to Shortibebi and a few other girls.......near them was Xx Alex xX having some god knows what argument with nung........in the end she got so sick of that she slapped him which made his face go really really red...........Whoami was talking to saint legend about kung fu but where was that girl? He felt a tap on his shoulder he span right around to find himself face to face with.......her he was shocked that she was behind him the whole time. she didn't say anything
she jus looked deep within his eyes he did the same. he even forgot to look at her name tag. It was like their eyes were hypnotised......after what seem like forever she spoke "you dropped your card Jun" she gave him the card and walked in the other direction. Jun was still staring at her until she left the room....."who is she?" questioned Jun to himself

Armadio had finally finished all his forms. "Welcome to AF" welcomed Ben. Armadio thanked him "thank you" he now put on his nametag. He a then saw the girl that Jun had just encountered. "Oh my god...." said Armadio to himself as he watched her walk to
the exit. He decided to run after her. He finally caught up "Hi" said Armadio quickly. The girl turned around slowly and greeted Armadio "Hey" "can you please show me around uh you see i'm new here please" he smiled at her. she smiled back "ok".
"My name is Armadio" said Armadio introducing himself "I know i saw your name tag well mine is Shinee" replied Shinee pointing to hers. "Where would you like to start" asked Shinee "anywhere" replied Armadio. "well how about we start with the game room?"
suggested Armadio "fine with me" smiled Armadio so the duo went to the game room.

Jun returned to the foyer only to discover that Armadio was gone "where is he?" thought Jun to himself......"WAIT A MINUTE!" thought Jun to himself smiling. "Maybe i could use this time to catch the girls name!even know more about her!" Jun decided it was time to search for her so he decided to check the game room first he entered the magnificent room ony to find hundreds of people playing the arcade games. "Oh man i had to pick this room first............" thought Jun to himself. He then heard a familiar voice "me and you Jun one on one!" Jun turned around to see James with his usaul fan club of girls. Jun smiled "Ok let's go b!tch"

The two were both play DDR "Your going down Jun" laughed James as he was getting every combo right. "Dawm" thought Jun
"his gotten better.........." Armadio walked passed with Shinee and saw Jun versing James "Go Jun!" cheered Armadio Jun turned around to find Armadio and.....HER! Jun then lost got distracted.........."Ha Jun looks like i win to day laughed James as he decided to find another opponent. "Hey Jun this is my friend Shinee" smiled Armadio and Shinee this is my "And Shinee this is my friend Jun" "Hi" said Jun blushing "Hey" replied Shinee "So what you guys doing"asked Jun "I was just showing Armadio around AF"replied Shinee "hey im going to leave ok so see you all later" said Jun "really? how come" asked Armadio "Tired" said Jun sounding disbelievingly tired. "well ok then i'll see you tomorrow at the station" informed Armadio "ok bye" said Jun "Bye" replied Armadio and Shinee together. "I need to go to the toliet i'll be right back ok Armadio" said Shinee rushing to the toilet.

Jun walked out the AF building and saw a group of suspicous guys with black bandana's looking in his direction and back. It was as if they were looking at a picture or something......they now started to stand up and walk in his direction. Jun knew there was no way he could take on all of them....so he ran he was hoping that they weren't after him so he looked back to find 20 guys chasing him "OHHHHH $hit!" yeld Jun as he ran down the street.....at time like this i wish wasn't so young...........He saw 4 motor cycles coming his way...."aaaaaahhh crap if i go back i'll get beaten to a pulp but if i go forward im gonna get runned over!" said Jun to himself but he still chose to run towards the motorcycles. The motor bike now had reached but were circling him like hungry vultures. Jun jump onto a bike and threw the gangster off "thank god my friend taught me how to use this" said Jun to him self as he started to zoom into the distance wait i have to get Armadio! Jun skillful swirved the bike round towards AF and speed towards there
3 bikes were still persueing while the 20 other guys were waiting for Armadio outside of AF. Jun ride through the glass doors of AF
knowing that if got of his bike
A:it would get taken back
B:he would get pummeled to a pulp
C:he would have no escape

Jun went flying through the doors glass shattered everywhere. everyone in the foyer stared as Jun. Jun put a fake smiled and acted as if nothing had happened "haha..........hey guys" Armadio rushed towards Jun "WHAT ARE YOU DOIN!" demanded Armadio for an anwser. Shinee walked in the room next to Armadio "No time to explain people" anounced Jun and he pointed to Armadio "Dude you and me need to get the fu-k out of here!the gang from yesterday are after us forrevenge just like Phong said!" "No way" said Armadio not believing what he heard. "Just get on!" commanded Jun. Armadio went on. As soon as Armadio got on the bike.
Jun speed out out of the foyer and jkust like he suspected the gang now was persuing them...... but this time 10 bikes were after them the rider's were twirling Chains. One bike was now beside Jun but Armadio decided to show them that they weren't going to go down with a fight. So he actaully jumped on the persueing bike and stabed the gangster with Phongs knife.
"Heh i knew this would come in handy" said Armadio as he caught back up with Jun. "Dude that was cool!" exclaimed Jun as he speed past a car.

"WHAT DO WE DO NOW?" screamed Armadio but the wind muffled his voice. Jun barely heard him "WE RIDE TO THAT TRAIN" yelled Jun back as he pointed to it. The persuers must have seen Jun pointing because they too were now heading for the train!
Jun and Armadio were now on train tracks persuing the train. Jun was right in front of Armadio. Armadio saw that their enmies were drawing near. Jun grabbed his shoe and threw it threw the door window. "Ok now all i have to do is open it......"
thought Jun to himself he leapt and grabbed the window though he felt glass cutting through his skin. "HURRY JUN THE ARE RIGHT BEHIND US NOW!" warned Armadio as he tried to speed up. Jun opened the door "JUMP ARMADIO!" A chain that was thrown at Armadio's bikes wheel so Armadio forced him self to jump unwillingly seconds before the bike flipped over. Jun grabbed Armadio's hand and pulled him to safety....................................
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- Jun   Jun Vs. Armadio   Feb 9 2004, 02:29 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   I couldn't help but smile all the way through ...   Feb 9 2004, 05:12 AM
- - AzNgIrL   Nice, very nice. At some point I thought it was go...   Feb 9 2004, 02:14 PM
- - xAzN_KiDx   all i can say is awesome.... i like it but is ther...   Feb 9 2004, 04:05 PM
- - Armadio   Hahahahaha, that was pretty good Jun exacly the w...   Feb 9 2004, 04:34 PM
- - Jun   tnx guys 4 all your kind words and yes there is ...   Feb 9 2004, 11:30 PM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   This story getting intriguing, nay Gripping! M...   Feb 10 2004, 05:15 AM
- - AzNgIrL   Mayn! You know how to write! I'd agree...   Feb 11 2004, 08:51 PM
- - Nung1   sorry to be a spoil sport but the way the story is...   Feb 11 2004, 11:03 PM
- - Jun   "Well what the fu-k is it! We don't h...   Feb 12 2004, 03:09 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   I knew that you cared bout each other really! ...   Feb 12 2004, 05:05 AM
- - Armadio   Lets get something strait here James,Im not gay, a...   Feb 12 2004, 04:14 PM
- - xAzN_KiDx   dude.... THIS STORY IS IS PRETTY AWESOME props ju...   Feb 12 2004, 04:16 PM
- - AzNgIrL   You really know how to write stories Jun. You shou...   Feb 12 2004, 04:29 PM
- - Jun   (tnx 4 da support pll ) Armadio heard footsteps ...   Feb 13 2004, 02:54 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   Armadio, of course you're not gay! You and...   Feb 13 2004, 05:13 AM
- - xAzN_KiDx   keeps on getting better n better!!!...   Feb 13 2004, 01:42 PM
- - Armadio   This turnining into a regular Kung-fu story.I like...   Feb 13 2004, 01:49 PM
- - xAzN_KiDx   kung fu huh? lol i don't think cops are involv...   Feb 13 2004, 01:56 PM
- - AzNgIrL   Very nicely written. Tense building up. Nice.   Feb 13 2004, 02:16 PM
- - Jun   "Now what's happening!" thought ...   Feb 14 2004, 01:35 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   Still being persued by the Police?! But it...   Feb 14 2004, 07:14 AM
- - AzNgIrL   lol very nice once again..AF is speshul! lol..   Feb 14 2004, 09:51 AM
- - xAzN_KiDx   nice nice cool i was mentioned?!?!?!?...   Feb 14 2004, 12:22 PM
- - AzNgIrL   dont be feelin too special, bcuz i was mentioned t...   Feb 14 2004, 01:18 PM
- - Armadio   Good story,but I think we need to actualy get away...   Feb 14 2004, 01:30 PM
- - xAzN_KiDx   yea but it was kinda cooll when he stabbed the pol...   Feb 14 2004, 02:37 PM
- - Jun   um guys i was typing up the next bit of the story ...   Feb 14 2004, 06:00 PM
- - AzNgIrL   aww darn...lol..nice going jun!! lol oh ...   Feb 14 2004, 06:30 PM
- - Jun   well here are some spoilers for the next bit.........   Feb 14 2004, 07:19 PM
- - AzNgIrL   wow..i cant wait mayn!! get it get it...   Feb 14 2004, 07:38 PM
- - xAzN_KiDx   get it done yo... i wanna read more remember peop...   Feb 14 2004, 08:28 PM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   We all wait in anticipation! I hope this story...   Feb 15 2004, 08:43 AM
- - xAzN_KiDx   is it done now?????? i can't wait ne longer ma...   Feb 15 2004, 10:19 AM
- - Armadio   QUOTE (Jun @ Feb 14 2004, 08:19 PM)well here ...   Feb 16 2004, 01:42 PM
- - Jun   "fu-k! what the hell are we going to do n...   Feb 17 2004, 01:11 AM
- - dreydle   hehe, the story get's better and better! c...   Feb 17 2004, 02:14 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   wOOOOOOOOOOt! Jun this is pure gold mate! ...   Feb 17 2004, 05:25 AM
- - AzNgIrL   lol..nicely written once again Jun. Keep up the Go...   Feb 17 2004, 10:19 AM
- - xAzN_KiDx   lol nice story lol i saw some mistakes but it...   Feb 17 2004, 03:48 PM
- - AzNgIrL   stop wit da mistakes again..sheesh..it's a goo...   Feb 17 2004, 06:06 PM
- - Jun   sorry about the mistakes. i would like to say tha...   Feb 19 2004, 01:56 AM
- - xAzN_KiDx   NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MORE MORE MORE IT WAS GETTING GOO...   Feb 19 2004, 04:11 PM
- - Jun   Armadio looked up at the dark cloudy sky and vowed...   Feb 20 2004, 12:47 AM
- - AzNgIrL   :shocked: :shocked: :shocked: that was sooooooo...   Feb 20 2004, 01:02 AM
- - Jun   QUOTE (AzNgIrL @ Feb 20 2004, 02:02 AM):shock...   Feb 20 2004, 01:15 AM
- - AzNgIrL   'twas funny how you made yerself be the good n...   Feb 20 2004, 01:43 AM
- - Jun   QUOTE (AzNgIrL @ Feb 20 2004, 02:43 AM)'t...   Feb 20 2004, 01:45 AM
- - dreydle   totally AWESOME! NICE JUN! it's just G...   Feb 20 2004, 03:08 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   A great ending to justify a great story! Well ...   Feb 20 2004, 03:54 AM
- - xAzN_KiDx   awesome jun that was great!!! will you...   Feb 21 2004, 02:53 PM
- - Jun   QUOTE (xAzN_KiDx @ Feb 21 2004, 03:53 PM)awes...   Feb 21 2004, 03:59 PM
- - AzNgIrL   i bet that one will be as good as this one..keep u...   Feb 21 2004, 07:57 PM
- - xAzN_KiDx   is your next story also about peoples fighting eac...   Feb 21 2004, 08:44 PM
- - Nung1   Death with honor, and peice of mind.. well written...   Feb 21 2004, 09:28 PM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   'SIN'?? sounds interesting... I lead the c...   Feb 22 2004, 09:00 AM
- - xAzN_KiDx   what james said!!! i want a part 2...   Feb 22 2004, 12:38 PM
- - Nung1   errr... if their dead how can we have a part 2? w...   Feb 22 2004, 02:04 PM
- - xAzN_KiDx   you could have em fighting in hell or heavon or wh...   Feb 22 2004, 05:09 PM
- - Nung1   but that would defeat the purpose of the first par...   Feb 22 2004, 06:22 PM
- - Jun   i wasn't planning a seqeul lol........... nah ...   Feb 23 2004, 02:14 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   Make "Jun vs Armadio 2" a prequel if pos...   Feb 23 2004, 06:53 AM
- - Nung1   why dont we just start looking for two(or more) ne...   Feb 23 2004, 08:35 AM
- - Jun   hell im up 4 it wat u guys want me 2 do i'll d...   Feb 24 2004, 02:11 AM
- - dreydle   bwahahaha, we don't mind, as long as u keep th...   Feb 24 2004, 03:21 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   I still think a prequel would be better... 2 other...   Feb 24 2004, 05:10 AM
- - Armadio   I havent made a comment here in a while and I figu...   Feb 24 2004, 04:09 PM
- - xAzN_KiDx   bad? it was bad? >.< it's was great man...   Feb 24 2004, 10:17 PM
- - Jun   ok im going to start working on the prequel.   Feb 25 2004, 01:16 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   wOOOOt! All Right Jun! You've made t...   Feb 25 2004, 05:07 AM
- - Armadio   Thats good,cause if you didnt I was gonna beat the...   Feb 25 2004, 05:36 PM
- - Jun   it really depends wat u mean by 'badguy' ...   Feb 26 2004, 01:50 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   I'm not sure. You'd have to ask. I would h...   Feb 26 2004, 05:09 AM
- - Armadio   QUOTE (Jun @ Feb 26 2004, 02:50 AM)it really ...   Feb 29 2004, 04:11 PM
- - Nung1   looks like their fighting spirited didnt die with ...   Feb 29 2004, 04:12 PM
- - Armadio   You should consider trying this kind of thing.Its ...   Feb 29 2004, 04:18 PM
- - Jun   QUOTE (Armadio @ Feb 29 2004, 05:11 PM)QUOTE ...   Mar 1 2004, 02:35 AM
- - Armadio   (Puts katana away and takes out a bazooka.)Good by...   Mar 1 2004, 04:59 PM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   Jun, have you started to write/ or have you comple...   Mar 2 2004, 08:51 AM
- - Jun   QUOTE (JamesLovesAyumi @ Mar 2 2004, 09:51 AM...   Mar 2 2004, 10:00 PM
- - AzNgIrL   ooo i cant wait for this one either...   Mar 2 2004, 10:06 PM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   There's no hurry man! Better totake longer...   Mar 3 2004, 04:57 AM
- - Jun   this is all i've done im sorry but iv'e be...   Mar 4 2004, 12:17 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   Sounds good Jun. That sounds like the beginning of...   Mar 4 2004, 05:01 AM
- - AzNgIrL   QUOTE (Jun @ Mar 4 2004, 01:17 AM)well if the...   Mar 4 2004, 11:18 AM
- - Jun   QUOTE (AzNgIrL @ Mar 4 2004, 12:18 PM)QUOTE (...   Mar 5 2004, 01:09 AM
- - AzNgIrL   lol, really it's up to you, i wouldnt mind, bu...   Mar 5 2004, 11:02 AM
- - Armadio   Jun,I was hoping that,if you dont mind,that I coul...   Mar 6 2004, 07:22 PM
- - Jun   ^ dude you should of asked me earlier because i ha...   Mar 7 2004, 05:12 PM
- - Armadio   Lookin good so far,and Im glad you exepted my offe...   Mar 7 2004, 07:53 PM
- - Jun   lol same here   Mar 7 2004, 08:10 PM
- - Armadio   But,just so ya know,this is only a temporary truce...   Mar 8 2004, 01:04 PM
- - Jun   Armadio saw could barely see anything he went arou...   Mar 9 2004, 12:00 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   I didn't see this coming, but cool idea! ...   Mar 9 2004, 05:02 AM
- - dreydle   so good! woo! keep them coming jun! gr...   Mar 9 2004, 08:36 AM
- - AzNgIrL   Nice Job Jun. I started giggling when AF was menti...   Mar 9 2004, 07:02 PM
- - Armadio   Good story so far,havent had this much antisipatio...   Mar 9 2004, 07:41 PM
- - Jun   The next morning Jun and Armadio were walking thro...   Mar 9 2004, 11:59 PM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   Jun, excellent work mate! I hope this story ge...   Mar 10 2004, 05:08 AM
- - dreydle   ooo....wut happens next????!   Mar 10 2004, 06:40 AM
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