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Jun Vs. Armadio, the endless struggle.........
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post Feb 9 2004, 02:29 AM
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(BTW this story is completely original and is copy righted by me just like all my other stories on AF)


as many of u r aware of me n armadio have a lil score 2 settle but this a story if we were 2 encounter each other in real life.

Jun VS Armadio

On a cold summer morning around 6:00am the sky was still dark ,all that could be seen were two shadowy figures standing on a bridge above a freeway though not a car could be in sight the only thing on besides them on the bridge was two bags on either end. Eyeing each other carefully. As jun and made armadio made their way across the bridge two each other the only thing that could be heard was the gravel crunching under their feet.

Only two feet away fom each other after long examination of each other which only lasted a minute seemed to be an hour to them."I can't wait to see you squriming on the ground then after you Cevil is next" whispered Armadio.
Jun looked at him in the eye and replied "Fine".

A smirk came across Armadio's face "Jun you don't know how long i've waited for this moment" Armadio hd threw the first punch during the sentence. the punch was so unexpected that jun fell straight to the ground after being hit at his right cheek.blood trickled out of Jun's mouth.

With no remorse Armadio lefted his foot right up in a formation of an axe kick and slamed his foot down towards Jun. with quick thinking Jun rolled to his side narrowly escaping an unfortunate fate. Then tried a sweep kicked at Armadio who easily avoided the attack by jumping. Jun then after turning only 180 degrees then jumped in the air once reaching 360 degrees and swung his right foot with full force at Armadio's left check.

Armadio had lost a bit of balance but quickly regained it. The resumed staring at each other with in dying hatred until a drop of blood from Armadio's mouth had
fallin to the ground. "Give up jun and I will give you an easy death!" threatend Armadio. "Not a chance" answered Jun. With that responce Armadio walked to the bag on his side and held something long and silverish "Oh fu-k" said Jun in shock.
Jun walked to his bag and grabbed out his masamune. Armadio walked with his katana close by his side.

Armadio said calmly "It's already came to this............" All Jun kept thinking was "how did i get myself in this position?" The pair started slashing each other ferociously knowing that if one can get just one slash in it could make ll the difference. It was unfortunate for both that they were using extreme caution which made the fight more tense. Finally Armadio knocked Jun's sword out of his hand. He then kicked Jun to the ground and held his sword to Jun's neck.

"Jun I have all ways been better......" said Armadio "I can't beleive this is it........."
said Jun expecting his fate to sealed but a horn blew Armadio saw a truck speeding their way Jun took seize of the moment and quickly got up.Armadio was ready to run but Jun grabbed a hold of Armadio from behind in the struggle Armadio dropped his sword. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING" screamed Armadio in panic.
Armadio heart beat was beating harder and harder. Jun smiled and said grimly "We will both go........." "Wait Jun i wasn't gonna kill you! plus if we both die it will be a draw plus this is unfair!we both know i would've finished you off before" said Armadio in a desperate voice. "wrong my friend i had away of getting out"
the truck driver saw the two and slammed the bakes but the truck was still skidding towards them. "good bye Jun.........." "good bye Armadio we shall finish this in the after life"
THE END

so wat did ya'll fink about it???? i decided that it wouldn't b fair if only one of us won so i made a draw biggrin.gif

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post Feb 25 2004, 05:36 PM
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- Jun   Jun Vs. Armadio   Feb 9 2004, 02:29 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   I couldn't help but smile all the way through ...   Feb 9 2004, 05:12 AM
- - AzNgIrL   Nice, very nice. At some point I thought it was go...   Feb 9 2004, 02:14 PM
- - xAzN_KiDx   all i can say is awesome.... i like it but is ther...   Feb 9 2004, 04:05 PM
- - Armadio   Hahahahaha, that was pretty good Jun exacly the w...   Feb 9 2004, 04:34 PM
- - Jun   tnx guys 4 all your kind words and yes there is ...   Feb 9 2004, 11:30 PM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   This story getting intriguing, nay Gripping! M...   Feb 10 2004, 05:15 AM
- - AzNgIrL   Mayn! You know how to write! I'd agree...   Feb 11 2004, 08:51 PM
- - Nung1   sorry to be a spoil sport but the way the story is...   Feb 11 2004, 11:03 PM
- - Jun   "Well what the fu-k is it! We don't h...   Feb 12 2004, 03:09 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   I knew that you cared bout each other really! ...   Feb 12 2004, 05:05 AM
- - Armadio   Lets get something strait here James,Im not gay, a...   Feb 12 2004, 04:14 PM
- - xAzN_KiDx   dude.... THIS STORY IS IS PRETTY AWESOME props ju...   Feb 12 2004, 04:16 PM
- - AzNgIrL   You really know how to write stories Jun. You shou...   Feb 12 2004, 04:29 PM
- - Jun   (tnx 4 da support pll ) Armadio heard footsteps ...   Feb 13 2004, 02:54 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   Armadio, of course you're not gay! You and...   Feb 13 2004, 05:13 AM
- - xAzN_KiDx   keeps on getting better n better!!!...   Feb 13 2004, 01:42 PM
- - Armadio   This turnining into a regular Kung-fu story.I like...   Feb 13 2004, 01:49 PM
- - xAzN_KiDx   kung fu huh? lol i don't think cops are involv...   Feb 13 2004, 01:56 PM
- - AzNgIrL   Very nicely written. Tense building up. Nice.   Feb 13 2004, 02:16 PM
- - Jun   "Now what's happening!" thought ...   Feb 14 2004, 01:35 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   Still being persued by the Police?! But it...   Feb 14 2004, 07:14 AM
- - AzNgIrL   lol very nice once again..AF is speshul! lol..   Feb 14 2004, 09:51 AM
- - xAzN_KiDx   nice nice cool i was mentioned?!?!?!?...   Feb 14 2004, 12:22 PM
- - AzNgIrL   dont be feelin too special, bcuz i was mentioned t...   Feb 14 2004, 01:18 PM
- - Armadio   Good story,but I think we need to actualy get away...   Feb 14 2004, 01:30 PM
- - xAzN_KiDx   yea but it was kinda cooll when he stabbed the pol...   Feb 14 2004, 02:37 PM
- - Jun   um guys i was typing up the next bit of the story ...   Feb 14 2004, 06:00 PM
- - AzNgIrL   aww darn...lol..nice going jun!! lol oh ...   Feb 14 2004, 06:30 PM
- - Jun   well here are some spoilers for the next bit.........   Feb 14 2004, 07:19 PM
- - AzNgIrL   wow..i cant wait mayn!! get it get it...   Feb 14 2004, 07:38 PM
- - xAzN_KiDx   get it done yo... i wanna read more remember peop...   Feb 14 2004, 08:28 PM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   We all wait in anticipation! I hope this story...   Feb 15 2004, 08:43 AM
- - xAzN_KiDx   is it done now?????? i can't wait ne longer ma...   Feb 15 2004, 10:19 AM
- - Armadio   QUOTE (Jun @ Feb 14 2004, 08:19 PM)well here ...   Feb 16 2004, 01:42 PM
- - Jun   "fu-k! what the hell are we going to do n...   Feb 17 2004, 01:11 AM
- - dreydle   hehe, the story get's better and better! c...   Feb 17 2004, 02:14 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   wOOOOOOOOOOt! Jun this is pure gold mate! ...   Feb 17 2004, 05:25 AM
- - AzNgIrL   lol..nicely written once again Jun. Keep up the Go...   Feb 17 2004, 10:19 AM
- - xAzN_KiDx   lol nice story lol i saw some mistakes but it...   Feb 17 2004, 03:48 PM
- - AzNgIrL   stop wit da mistakes again..sheesh..it's a goo...   Feb 17 2004, 06:06 PM
- - Jun   sorry about the mistakes. i would like to say tha...   Feb 19 2004, 01:56 AM
- - xAzN_KiDx   NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MORE MORE MORE IT WAS GETTING GOO...   Feb 19 2004, 04:11 PM
- - Jun   Armadio looked up at the dark cloudy sky and vowed...   Feb 20 2004, 12:47 AM
- - AzNgIrL   :shocked: :shocked: :shocked: that was sooooooo...   Feb 20 2004, 01:02 AM
- - Jun   QUOTE (AzNgIrL @ Feb 20 2004, 02:02 AM):shock...   Feb 20 2004, 01:15 AM
- - AzNgIrL   'twas funny how you made yerself be the good n...   Feb 20 2004, 01:43 AM
- - Jun   QUOTE (AzNgIrL @ Feb 20 2004, 02:43 AM)'t...   Feb 20 2004, 01:45 AM
- - dreydle   totally AWESOME! NICE JUN! it's just G...   Feb 20 2004, 03:08 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   A great ending to justify a great story! Well ...   Feb 20 2004, 03:54 AM
- - xAzN_KiDx   awesome jun that was great!!! will you...   Feb 21 2004, 02:53 PM
- - Jun   QUOTE (xAzN_KiDx @ Feb 21 2004, 03:53 PM)awes...   Feb 21 2004, 03:59 PM
- - AzNgIrL   i bet that one will be as good as this one..keep u...   Feb 21 2004, 07:57 PM
- - xAzN_KiDx   is your next story also about peoples fighting eac...   Feb 21 2004, 08:44 PM
- - Nung1   Death with honor, and peice of mind.. well written...   Feb 21 2004, 09:28 PM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   'SIN'?? sounds interesting... I lead the c...   Feb 22 2004, 09:00 AM
- - xAzN_KiDx   what james said!!! i want a part 2...   Feb 22 2004, 12:38 PM
- - Nung1   errr... if their dead how can we have a part 2? w...   Feb 22 2004, 02:04 PM
- - xAzN_KiDx   you could have em fighting in hell or heavon or wh...   Feb 22 2004, 05:09 PM
- - Nung1   but that would defeat the purpose of the first par...   Feb 22 2004, 06:22 PM
- - Jun   i wasn't planning a seqeul lol........... nah ...   Feb 23 2004, 02:14 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   Make "Jun vs Armadio 2" a prequel if pos...   Feb 23 2004, 06:53 AM
- - Nung1   why dont we just start looking for two(or more) ne...   Feb 23 2004, 08:35 AM
- - Jun   hell im up 4 it wat u guys want me 2 do i'll d...   Feb 24 2004, 02:11 AM
- - dreydle   bwahahaha, we don't mind, as long as u keep th...   Feb 24 2004, 03:21 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   I still think a prequel would be better... 2 other...   Feb 24 2004, 05:10 AM
- - Armadio   I havent made a comment here in a while and I figu...   Feb 24 2004, 04:09 PM
- - xAzN_KiDx   bad? it was bad? >.< it's was great man...   Feb 24 2004, 10:17 PM
- - Jun   ok im going to start working on the prequel.   Feb 25 2004, 01:16 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   wOOOOt! All Right Jun! You've made t...   Feb 25 2004, 05:07 AM
- - Armadio   Thats good,cause if you didnt I was gonna beat the...   Feb 25 2004, 05:36 PM
- - Jun   it really depends wat u mean by 'badguy' ...   Feb 26 2004, 01:50 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   I'm not sure. You'd have to ask. I would h...   Feb 26 2004, 05:09 AM
- - Armadio   QUOTE (Jun @ Feb 26 2004, 02:50 AM)it really ...   Feb 29 2004, 04:11 PM
- - Nung1   looks like their fighting spirited didnt die with ...   Feb 29 2004, 04:12 PM
- - Armadio   You should consider trying this kind of thing.Its ...   Feb 29 2004, 04:18 PM
- - Jun   QUOTE (Armadio @ Feb 29 2004, 05:11 PM)QUOTE ...   Mar 1 2004, 02:35 AM
- - Armadio   (Puts katana away and takes out a bazooka.)Good by...   Mar 1 2004, 04:59 PM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   Jun, have you started to write/ or have you comple...   Mar 2 2004, 08:51 AM
- - Jun   QUOTE (JamesLovesAyumi @ Mar 2 2004, 09:51 AM...   Mar 2 2004, 10:00 PM
- - AzNgIrL   ooo i cant wait for this one either...   Mar 2 2004, 10:06 PM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   There's no hurry man! Better totake longer...   Mar 3 2004, 04:57 AM
- - Jun   this is all i've done im sorry but iv'e be...   Mar 4 2004, 12:17 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   Sounds good Jun. That sounds like the beginning of...   Mar 4 2004, 05:01 AM
- - AzNgIrL   QUOTE (Jun @ Mar 4 2004, 01:17 AM)well if the...   Mar 4 2004, 11:18 AM
- - Jun   QUOTE (AzNgIrL @ Mar 4 2004, 12:18 PM)QUOTE (...   Mar 5 2004, 01:09 AM
- - AzNgIrL   lol, really it's up to you, i wouldnt mind, bu...   Mar 5 2004, 11:02 AM
- - Armadio   Jun,I was hoping that,if you dont mind,that I coul...   Mar 6 2004, 07:22 PM
- - Jun   ^ dude you should of asked me earlier because i ha...   Mar 7 2004, 05:12 PM
- - Armadio   Lookin good so far,and Im glad you exepted my offe...   Mar 7 2004, 07:53 PM
- - Jun   lol same here   Mar 7 2004, 08:10 PM
- - Armadio   But,just so ya know,this is only a temporary truce...   Mar 8 2004, 01:04 PM
- - Jun   Armadio saw could barely see anything he went arou...   Mar 9 2004, 12:00 AM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   I didn't see this coming, but cool idea! ...   Mar 9 2004, 05:02 AM
- - dreydle   so good! woo! keep them coming jun! gr...   Mar 9 2004, 08:36 AM
- - AzNgIrL   Nice Job Jun. I started giggling when AF was menti...   Mar 9 2004, 07:02 PM
- - Armadio   Good story so far,havent had this much antisipatio...   Mar 9 2004, 07:41 PM
- - Jun   The next morning Jun and Armadio were walking thro...   Mar 9 2004, 11:59 PM
- - JamesLovesAyumi   Jun, excellent work mate! I hope this story ge...   Mar 10 2004, 05:08 AM
- - dreydle   ooo....wut happens next????!   Mar 10 2004, 06:40 AM
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