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The Plan, My first time at fanfic ^_^;;;;
harutenshi
post Apr 5 2004, 02:57 PM
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Hi everyone! This is my first attempt at fan fic! Don't be surprised if it's not great! ^_^

Chapter 1

"Now remember our plan Edison," a shadowy figure said.
"Yeah, yeah" Edison said as he stomped off. Why did I ever join the gang? he wondered as he scouted for a specific person. Lunch was already starting and most of the students were at their lockers getting their lunch. His spikey black hair glimmered as he walked down the hall. He was a tall, fairly built seventeen year old with milk chocolate eyes. He spotted the person he had been looking for and walked towards her. Mercedes Chang. She was a senior like Edison. She was a little bit popular, but everyone loved her. She was five feet nine inches, with long dark brown hair with blonde highlights. She was always up on the latest fashion and always wore expensive clothing.
"Hello" Edison said, giving his smile all the girls swooned over.
"Oh! Hi, what a surprise seeing you near my locker." she replied, as she closed her locker with lunch money in her hands.
"Well it's never to late to make new friends!" he laughed. She giggled along with him.
"So, may I walk you to lunch?"
"Sure!" All of a sudden Edison grabbed her two arms and put them in hand cuffs. He picked her up and ran with her in his muscline arms.
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post Apr 18 2004, 05:05 PM
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Hehe, thanks. I'll try to think about it during the week. I hope my brain isn't fried out cause I have standerized testing next week for the whole week.
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- harutenshi   The Plan   Apr 5 2004, 02:57 PM
- - RockHeart   Chang is a magical person! Thats why he/she ha...   Apr 16 2004, 08:29 PM
- - Jun   nice stroy so far haru good work   Apr 16 2004, 08:53 PM
- - harutenshi   Thanks Jun! ^^ I didn't think it was good,...   Apr 17 2004, 08:14 AM
- - AzNgIrL   Ooo boi! Where Edison going with that Chang gi...   Apr 17 2004, 02:05 PM
- - harutenshi   Thanks AzNgIrL! I'll try to write the next...   Apr 17 2004, 02:41 PM
- - AzNgIrL   Great! I can't wait to see this next part....   Apr 17 2004, 03:18 PM
- - harutenshi   Hehe, thanks. Well Mercedes is going to be taken t...   Apr 17 2004, 03:35 PM
- - AzNgIrL   Ooo! What is Edison gonna do to her?!?...   Apr 17 2004, 03:39 PM
- - harutenshi   "Let go of me you scum!" screamed Me...   Apr 17 2004, 04:08 PM
- - AzNgIrL   Ouch..Mercedes sure isn't afraid...Wow..this i...   Apr 18 2004, 03:05 PM
- - harutenshi   Probably over the weekend I may have another one ...   Apr 18 2004, 03:12 PM
- - Jiendo   very interesting   Apr 18 2004, 03:43 PM
- - AzNgIrL   QUOTE (harutenshi @ Apr 18 2004, 05:12 PM)Pro...   Apr 18 2004, 04:56 PM
- - harutenshi   Hehe, thanks. I'll try to think about it durin...   Apr 18 2004, 05:05 PM
- - AzNgIrL   Oooo boi..Good Luck. No need to rush. Take your ti...   Apr 18 2004, 05:57 PM
- - Jun   silver dragons was the name of a triad branch in m...   Apr 21 2004, 02:13 AM
- - harutenshi   Thanks AzNgIrL. Jun I'm sorry I took the silve...   Apr 21 2004, 01:16 PM
- - Jun   ^ nah don't change it, there is no reason to   Apr 21 2004, 11:44 PM


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