The Plan, My first time at fanfic ^_^;;;; |
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The Plan, My first time at fanfic ^_^;;;; |
Apr 5 2004, 02:57 PM
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AF Pro Group: Members Posts: 2,117 Joined: 1-March 04 From: The Heavens |
Hi everyone! This is my first attempt at fan fic! Don't be surprised if it's not great! ^_^
Chapter 1 "Now remember our plan Edison," a shadowy figure said. "Yeah, yeah" Edison said as he stomped off. Why did I ever join the gang? he wondered as he scouted for a specific person. Lunch was already starting and most of the students were at their lockers getting their lunch. His spikey black hair glimmered as he walked down the hall. He was a tall, fairly built seventeen year old with milk chocolate eyes. He spotted the person he had been looking for and walked towards her. Mercedes Chang. She was a senior like Edison. She was a little bit popular, but everyone loved her. She was five feet nine inches, with long dark brown hair with blonde highlights. She was always up on the latest fashion and always wore expensive clothing. "Hello" Edison said, giving his smile all the girls swooned over. "Oh! Hi, what a surprise seeing you near my locker." she replied, as she closed her locker with lunch money in her hands. "Well it's never to late to make new friends!" he laughed. She giggled along with him. "So, may I walk you to lunch?" "Sure!" All of a sudden Edison grabbed her two arms and put them in hand cuffs. He picked her up and ran with her in his muscline arms. |
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Apr 18 2004, 05:05 PM
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AF Pro Group: Members Posts: 2,117 Joined: 1-March 04 From: The Heavens |
Hehe, thanks. I'll try to think about it during the week. I hope my brain isn't fried out cause I have standerized testing next week for the whole week.
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harutenshi The Plan Apr 5 2004, 02:57 PM
RockHeart Chang is a magical person! Thats why he/she ha... Apr 16 2004, 08:29 PM
Jun nice stroy so far haru good work Apr 16 2004, 08:53 PM
harutenshi Thanks Jun! ^^ I didn't think it was good,... Apr 17 2004, 08:14 AM
AzNgIrL Ooo boi! Where Edison going with that Chang gi... Apr 17 2004, 02:05 PM
harutenshi Thanks AzNgIrL! I'll try to write the next... Apr 17 2004, 02:41 PM
AzNgIrL Great! I can't wait to see this next part.... Apr 17 2004, 03:18 PM
harutenshi Hehe, thanks. Well Mercedes is going to be taken t... Apr 17 2004, 03:35 PM
AzNgIrL Ooo! What is Edison gonna do to her?!?... Apr 17 2004, 03:39 PM
harutenshi "Let go of me you scum!" screamed Me... Apr 17 2004, 04:08 PM
AzNgIrL Ouch..Mercedes sure isn't afraid...Wow..this i... Apr 18 2004, 03:05 PM
harutenshi Probably over the weekend I may have another one ... Apr 18 2004, 03:12 PM
Jiendo very interesting Apr 18 2004, 03:43 PM
AzNgIrL QUOTE (harutenshi @ Apr 18 2004, 05:12 PM)Pro... Apr 18 2004, 04:56 PM
AzNgIrL Oooo boi..Good Luck. No need to rush. Take your ti... Apr 18 2004, 05:57 PM
Jun silver dragons was the name of a triad branch in m... Apr 21 2004, 02:13 AM
harutenshi Thanks AzNgIrL. Jun I'm sorry I took the silve... Apr 21 2004, 01:16 PM
Jun ^ nah don't change it, there is no reason to Apr 21 2004, 11:44 PM![]() ![]() |
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