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A Game Called "paciffing The West", a way to change history
DAI_VIET
post Apr 20 2004, 12:47 PM
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Well, since those people believe that Vietnamese are moving toward their borders [which is so untrue], then we might as well make it true by resersing history itself.

The year, 1780.
The place, South East Asia

In 1780, after the defeat of the Manchus in the North, Emperor Quang Trung united Vietnam and had military posts all over Vietnam to protect Vietnam from another invasion.

But the Khmers in the southwest have long to avenge the lost of their land around the Mekong delta. That same year, Khmer king sent FKR and his comrades with 30,000 troops to take back Gia Dinh (current day Ho Chi Minh city). FKR surrounded the city and sieged the city for 2 weeks without any success.

When Emperor Quang Trung heard of the news, he sent DAI VIET, Byron, and Jayson along with 50,000 troops south to put down the invasion and protect Vietnam and its citizens. When FKR heard the Dai-Vietan troops moving in, he withdrew his troops back to Khmer land, and on his way there, he sacked and burned down all villages, killing innocent Dai-Vietan settlers and destroyed infastructures.

When DAI VIET, Byron, and Jayson heard of this news. DAI VIET sent a letter to Emperor Quang Trung to have NQSH station some troops in Thang Long (Ha Noi) to protect the north.

Emperor Quang Trung agreed. He wanted to retaliate against these barbarians who dared to invade Dai-Viet and killed its citizens. He orderd Byron to take the sea route from Gia Dinh to the borders of Thailand and Khmer, attacked one city and defend that city until further notice.

Jayson would take a route from Laos, who was neutral in this war, and stationed his troops at the borders of Laos and Khmer. DAI VIET would take his main forces and punch right into the Khmer capital of Phom Pheng. Emperor Quang Trung wanted this once and for all to put down these rebells and killed the bastards who dared to invade Dai-Viet. He said the 3 forces of DAI VIET, Byron, and Jayson would meet in Phom Pheng in 2 weeks.




TO BE CONTINUED...

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post Apr 20 2004, 01:00 PM
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Sorry to interrupt your story but when you talk about the 1780's, you remind me of the year 1786 in which Emperor Quang Trung smashed an invading Siamese army of 50,000 at the battle of Xam Goai Mut despite having only 20,000 men.
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post Apr 20 2004, 01:05 PM
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Let the story continues...

... As soon as DAI VIET's troops heading toward the borders, he ordered his troops not to disturb the Khmer people and kill all those who oppose the imperial troops.

DAI VIET and his troops moved into Khmer land without any hard resistance. By day 10, his troops were 20 miles east of Phom Pheng. Jayson had secured the borders of Laos and Khmer. Byron had already made a landing along Thailand and Khmer borders.

When everything was set, DAI VIET troops stormed Phom Pheng with ladders, arrows, catapults, and cannons to take down the wall. The next day, Phom Pheng fell, and DAI VIET once again ordered his troops not to kill innocent lives. FKR and his troops took the other gate and ran toward Thailand.

DAI VIET took Khmer king and sent him back to Dai-viet to get punished for the invasion of Dai-Viet and disturbance of peace throughout the land. When FKR ran to Thailand, RockHeart, along with angkorwatt, and other comrades ran to Laos in an attempt to cross Laos and into China and beg for help.

FKR's troops ran to Thailand and met Byron's troops, there, Byron smashed his troops into pieces and FKR's head was chopped off and sent back to Phom Pheng and his head was hung at the gate to let all Khmer people know that traitors like FKR will not be tolerated. RockHeart and angkorwatt's troops ran to Laos, there, they met Jayson. Jayson destroyed 90% of their troops, and the rest was taken prisoners.

On day 14, Byron and Jayson moved their troops to Phom Pheng, and there they celebrated the victory. Emperor Quang Trung changed Phom Pheng to Tay Thanh, and the entire Khmer land was divided into 30 small provinces.

DAI VIET, Jayson, and Byron stationed their troops there and introduced Dai-Vietan education system, laws, culture, clothes for the Khmer people, who had been living under a tyrant for a long time.


THE END.

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post Apr 20 2004, 01:07 PM
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Haha, great story so far. But come on, it's just not plausible to have jayson on the winning side. You guys are in for a definite loss if his dumb @$$ is in command of troops. But good stuff.

Btw, it's Phnom Penh.
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post Apr 20 2004, 01:12 PM
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QUOTE (akara @ Apr 20 2004, 02:07 PM)
Haha, great story so far.  But come on, it's just not plausible to have jayson on the winning side.  You guys are in for a definite loss if his dumb @$$ is in command of troops.  But good stuff.

Btw, it's Phnom Penh.

Well, thanks for the comment. I truly believe Jayson and Byron and me will do just fine in this story in pacciffying the west.

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Sorry to interrupt your story but when you talk about the 1780's, you remind me of the year 1786 in which Emperor Quang Trung smashed an invading Siamese army of 50,000 at the battle of Xam Goai Mut despite having only 20,000 men.

Hehehhehee... yah, I know that story. Hehehehe... But in this story, Emperor Quang Trung could have sent only 20,000 troops, but he wanted to make sure of total victory and no more wars in the future, that's why I requested Emperor Quang Trung to have 50,000 troops for this war.

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post Apr 20 2004, 01:28 PM
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QUOTE (DAI_VIET @ Apr 20 2004, 02:12 PM)
Well, thanks for the comment. I truly believe Jayson and Byron and me will do just fine in this story in pacciffying the west.

Don't let your nationalism cloud your judgement, DAI_VIET. An incompetent dumb @$$ is always an incompetent dumb @$$. I'm sure there are plenty of more worthy commanders.

Edit: Wait a second. If FKR was a Khmer soldier then how is he a traitor? That's a plot hole that needs to be fixed, pronto.

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post Apr 20 2004, 01:49 PM
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First FKR and now you Dai Viet? If you guys REALLY want to write then write it in the Fan Fic Section and not here. I'm moving this there soon.
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post Apr 20 2004, 03:30 PM
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QUOTE (akara @ Apr 20 2004, 02:28 PM)
Edit: Wait a second. If FKR was a Khmer soldier then how is he a traitor? That's a plot hole that needs to be fixed, pronto.

He fled out of Phnom Pheng other than rescueing his king. Therefore, he thinks for himself more than of his king and country.
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First FKR and now you Dai Viet? If you guys REALLY want to write then write it in the Fan Fic Section and not here. I'm moving this there soon.

Ahww... come on!
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post Apr 21 2004, 09:26 AM
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QUOTE (DAI_VIET @ Apr 20 2004, 04:30 PM)
QUOTE (akara @ Apr 20 2004, 02:28 PM)
Edit: Wait a second.  If FKR was a Khmer soldier then how is he a traitor?  That's a plot hole that needs to be fixed, pronto.

He fled out of Phnom Pheng other than rescueing his king. Therefore, he thinks for himself more than of his king and country.

That just doesn't make sense.

FKR's troops ran to Thailand and met Byron's troops, there, Byron smashed his troops into pieces and FKR's head was chopped off and sent back to Phom Pheng and his head was hung at the gate to let all Khmer people know that traitors like FKR will not be tolerated. RockHeart and angkorwatt's troops ran to Laos, there, they met Jayson. Jayson destroyed 90% of their troops, and the rest was taken prisoners.

If FKR was a traitor to the Cambodian king, then why would Byron use him to deter future betrayal of Vietnam? Are you trying to suggest a chain of events that parallel those in Braveheart in which the English king dismembers Wallace's body to set an example? If so, then I'd like to point out two important things:

1. FKR did not betray Vietnam while Wallace did "betray" England.
2. Sending Wallace's body parts to the corners of the kingdom did not work in England's favour.

If I'm completely off in my assumption then....meh, you still have a plot hole.

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post Apr 21 2004, 11:51 AM
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Wow I cant believe read that haha.
haha i like it, using members in here to include in your story make it sounds better! haha..

9/10!
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post Apr 21 2004, 02:12 PM
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But, FKR's son still lives and he ran to Laos in exile, there, he nourished his revenge to avenge the death of his father.


To be continued...
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