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harutenshi
post Apr 25 2004, 02:23 PM
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"Take that Jun!" yelled a little black hair boy, as he threw sand to another boy with dark brown hair.
"Haha Armadio you always think you can defeat me!" laughed Jun, as he threw a juice box to Armadio, hitting him in the head.
"Waaaa!!" cried Armadio. A girl about three years old rushed to him.
"What wrong Armadio?" asked the girl with a ponytail.
"Jun hit me with a juice box, now I got a boo boo on my head!"
"Jun that wasn't very nice she threw a bucket of water at him.
"Hey, Shinee! Stop that" Jun laughed. Armadio, Jun, and Shinee threw water at each other. Then a girl with pig tails waddled over to them.
"Umm, hi" the girl with pig tails said softly.
"Oh hi!" the three said in unison.
"What's your name?" asked Shinee looking at her.
"Harutenshi, but people call me Haru." she spoke softly and looked at the sand.
"Welcome Haru! I'm Armadio! To my left is Shinee and to my right is the clumsy Jun!"
"What'd you say?" asked Jun to Armadio.
"I said, spiffy Jun!" Armadio lied. Jun rolled his eyes.
"Come play with us Haru!" offered Shinee.
Haru's big brown eyes widen and sparkled! The four played tagged and threw sand at each other for the rest of the day.
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(Now they're teenagers and preteens)
Jun and Shinee were a couple and they were inseperable. Armadio was a very strong fighter, very good martial arts. And Haru was more out spoken. But then one day they lost each other.
"I'm sorry you guys." spoke Haru as they hung out at AsiaFinest smoothie bar.
"What are you talking about Haru?" asked Jun, as he shook up his orange mango smoothie.
"I have to leave."
"Haru stop pulling pranks on us again." said Armadio and Shinee.
"I'm serious. I'm moving to New York City. I want to persue my dreams." The three were confused. Haru did talk about wanting to go live in the city, but that was after college. They agreed to stick with each other no matter what happened.
"How can you do this to us Haru?" asked Jun who was the most quiet out of all of them this afternoon.
"It was my decison. Why can't you be more supportive of me?" asked Haru.
"But why the rush Haru? You said after college! We all agreed all four of us would go there for college and then we would get apartments and live near each other." said Shinee.
"Times change and so do people" Haru spat as she got up and smoothed her Paris shirt, they got her for her birthday. She grabbed her Hello Kitty bag. "I'm sorry, swing by my house when you all are finished." she mumbled as she ran out the door.

So how do ya like it? It's not that great is it? I'll continue it later though!
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- harutenshi   Miles Apart   Apr 25 2004, 02:23 PM
- - Armadio2   Haru,I had no idea you could write so passionatly....   Apr 25 2004, 05:57 PM
- - AzNgIrL   Awww, C'mon Haru! Don't leave us! ...   Apr 25 2004, 06:26 PM
- - harutenshi   Thanks I'll try to post it a.s.a.p.   Apr 25 2004, 07:14 PM
- - AzNgIrL   Where do you get your ideas?   Apr 25 2004, 10:13 PM
- - Nung1   interesting..... curiosity is getting the best of ...   Apr 25 2004, 11:01 PM
- - Jun   haha great story haru im eager to see what happ...   Apr 25 2004, 11:33 PM
- - Armadio2   Maaaann. That next chapter must be pretty long.   May 15 2004, 12:34 PM
- - harutenshi   "We gotta find some way for Haru not to go....   May 15 2004, 12:55 PM
- - Jun   wow...im surprised on how well you got our persona...   May 15 2004, 03:49 PM
- - Armadio2   Ya,I know. Well I hope to see the next part soon O...   May 16 2004, 11:49 AM
- - AzNgIrL   Nice going Armadio! QUOTE "You think it...   May 16 2004, 02:15 PM
- - Armadio2   *slumps*Life mocks me at every turn.   May 16 2004, 02:21 PM
- - harutenshi   *pats Armadio on back* Don't worry, I'll t...   May 16 2004, 02:30 PM
- - Armadio2   Its okay.*bows*Besides I said life,not my friends.   May 16 2004, 02:33 PM
- - JunKun   O.o oooohh another story to read good job Haru   May 17 2004, 05:51 PM
- - harutenshi   Haru walked around around the park still trying to...   Jun 20 2004, 04:34 PM
- - Armadio2   Even in the stories that guy intrudes. Not that th...   Jun 20 2004, 04:47 PM
- - harutenshi   ^Haha. It's a different dude.   Jun 20 2004, 04:51 PM
- - Armadio2   Yeah but still. Nah,I'm kidding its cool.   Jun 20 2004, 04:53 PM
- - harutenshi   ^Haha. I'll change his name. I couldn't co...   Jun 20 2004, 04:57 PM
- - Armadio2   Hey,like I said,its cool. Besides, it's your s...   Jun 20 2004, 04:59 PM
- - harutenshi   ^Okies okies. But I found a name...but..ah, so con...   Jun 20 2004, 05:01 PM
- - AzNgIrL   o.O Go Haru! And about time you continued th...   Jun 21 2004, 03:48 AM
- - Jun   go get him haru   Jun 22 2004, 01:56 AM
- - squeekers   Great job with the story Its kinda funny though...   Jun 27 2004, 10:13 AM
- - harutenshi   Thanks everyone for the comments. I really enjoy r...   Jun 27 2004, 01:29 PM
- - Armadio2   Well, looks like some comedy might starting up pre...   Jun 27 2004, 02:18 PM
- - squeekers   that would be funny if the three of them got caugh...   Jun 27 2004, 03:00 PM
- - Jun   ooohhhhhh haru's in love lol kool story Haru...   Jun 27 2004, 09:25 PM
- - AzNgIrL   Awww! Haru is growing up It seems like it wa...   Jun 27 2004, 10:38 PM
- - squeekers   QUOTE Awww! Haru is growing up   It seems like...   Jun 28 2004, 03:02 PM
- - Cuong   seem like ppls are really into this story. I bette...   Jun 29 2004, 08:21 PM


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