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GentleWind
Swirling in the wind slow and gentle they falling on the forest floor. Reds and Yellows. Anchoring the earth and facing the dark sky are their branches awaiting for the winter snow to bloom with snowy flowers clear and crystalized. Trampling on the leaves, a family moving cautiously through the forest. Above their heads the sun slowly sinking into the horizon far away. Darkness gradually sweeping through the forest. Charging towards a destination with their feet quaking the earth. Approaching the cliff. Patiently they sit and gaze at the bright stars. Slowly emerging from the sky and shining on their faces, a big full bright moon. Looking at the moon, they howling. Their echoes surging throughout the wilderness. This signifies the end and the beginning. The endless...

For personal use only lol

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avisitor
QUOTE(GentleWind @ Dec 4 2007, 06:44 PM) [snapback]3348014[/snapback]
Swirling in the wind slow and gentle they falling on the forest floor. Reds and Yellows. Anchoring the earth and facing the the dark sky are their branches waiting for the winter snow. When the time comes these branches will bloom with snowy flowers clear and crystalized. Trampling on the leaves, a family moving cautiously through the forest. They know the sun above their heads is slowly sinking into the horizon far away. Darkness gradually sweeping through the forest. Suddenly diving forwards they run. After a long distance, they finally arrive at the cliff. Sitting patiently and gazing at the bright stars. Slowing emerging from the sky and shining on their faces, the big full moon. Howling 'oooohhhoooooooo.' This signifies the end is the beginning. The Endless...

For personal use only lol

Thanx
GentleWind
Welcome
avisitor
I have to work on my sarcasm. icon_twisted.gif
Only kidding.
resilientone
QUOTE(avisitor @ Dec 5 2007, 10:53 PM) [snapback]3350571[/snapback]
I have to work on my sarcasm. icon_twisted.gif
Only kidding.

^^ sarcasm didn't work and your post was stupid.
GentleWind
QUOTE(avisitor @ Dec 5 2007, 11:53 PM) [snapback]3350571[/snapback]
I have to work on my sarcasm. icon_twisted.gif
Only kidding.


Are you tellling me that my piece looks like $hit

That's fine

But lets see some of yours embarassedlaugh.gif
avisitor
QUOTE(GentleWind @ Dec 6 2007, 07:24 PM) [snapback]3352171[/snapback]
Are you tellling me that my piece looks like $hit

That's fine

But lets see some of yours embarassedlaugh.gif

No, your piece is fine. Very good in fact.
It is a bit flowery. But, very tight in description.

My response was to make you think a little and maybe laugh.
Sorry, if you were offended.
GentleWind
QUOTE(avisitor @ Dec 7 2007, 01:50 AM) [snapback]3353086[/snapback]
No, your piece is fine. Very good in fact.
It is a bit flowery. But, very tight in descroption.

My response was to make you think a little and maybe laugh.
Sorry, if you were offended.



I am not offended
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