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GentleWind
A flower blooming out of the earth
Beautiful like the sun
Caught by a man's eye
He gives it all his heart
Without fearing hell
Where the demons and dark angels
Ready burn his spirits into ashes
He moves not by the crashing thunder
Only by the spirits of the flower
For it has transformed his spirits from the dust
Out of the dust, he crawls




felltohell
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GentleWind
QUOTE(felltohell @ May 12 2008, 09:15 PM) [snapback]3693372[/snapback]
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Whattttttttttt
Najjiah
rise like the phoenix!


GentleWind
QUOTE(Najjiah @ May 12 2008, 09:47 PM) [snapback]3693454[/snapback]
rise like the phoenix!


My dear whats the meaning of this
Najjiah
QUOTE(GentleWind @ May 12 2008, 07:50 PM) [snapback]3693464[/snapback]
My dear whats the meaning of this

it has a beautiful meaning, dear heart. http://www.mythicalrealm.com/creatures/phoenix.html
Rinni
Yes it does, I actually want to get a rising phoenix tattoo. biggrin.gif
GentleWind
And what does it have anything to do with my poetry
Najjiah
QUOTE(GentleWind @ May 13 2008, 12:37 AM) [snapback]3693921[/snapback]
And what does it have anything to do with my poetry

the metaphor of the phoenix rising is similar to your poem. if you read it, you will see.
GentleWind
QUOTE(Najjiah @ May 13 2008, 02:52 AM) [snapback]3693936[/snapback]
the metaphor of the phoenix rising is similar to your poem. if you read it, you will see.


That is because I am the wind

So you like my poem
Najjiah
QUOTE(GentleWind @ May 13 2008, 12:58 AM) [snapback]3693938[/snapback]
That is because I am the wind

So you like my poem

loves it. its very positive and it feels good in my mind's eye. icon_smile.gif
GentleWind
QUOTE(Najjiah @ May 13 2008, 03:08 AM) [snapback]3693952[/snapback]
loves it. its very positive and it feels good in my mind's eye. icon_smile.gif


Initially I express my negative thoughts with words, but I do not know why my expression turns positive at the end. This happens every the time. Generally, I am a peaceful and positive person.
So who is the lucky girl you ask right.
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