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Onlygodknows


she just wants to die

it's constantly raining

she thought she wanted to feel heart break

pain makes you feel human

but now shes all alone and no one understands how she feels....not even him

shes stuck and she can't get out

she asks herself everyday

how long am I going to feel this way?

why do I feel this way?

whats wrong with me?

she hates feeling empty and sick

sometimes she prays for a lynch

the only comfort she has is in herself

she has no warmth in anybody else

but its ok everythings alright just keep pretending put on that pretty mask

tie your ribbons....it will be ok

besides you're only 16 it doesnt matter anyway
yeongweonhi
^ wow that was good!
Onlygodknows
thank you icon_smile.gif
I wrote the poem because I get sick of people telling kids that their feelings don't really matter
or they cant love just because they're under 18
yeongweonhi
ahh yes well that's true biggthumpup.gif
Onlygodknows
well I'm glad you liked it
yeongweonhi
i hope i can see more of your poems here on AF icon_smile.gif

Onlygodknows
Thanks I hope to write more
Asiya
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Even though I'm not 16, when I was that young, I remember hearing "You're just a child. You don't know anything!"

So I understand where you are coming from.

Very nice poem!
Onlygodknows
thanks
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