You're only 16
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Sep 13 2008, 12:32 PM
she just wants to die
it's constantly raining
she thought she wanted to feel heart break
pain makes you feel human
but now shes all alone and no one understands how she feels....not even him
shes stuck and she can't get out
she asks herself everyday
how long am I going to feel this way?
why do I feel this way?
whats wrong with me?
she hates feeling empty and sick
sometimes she prays for a lynch
the only comfort she has is in herself
she has no warmth in anybody else
but its ok everythings alright just keep pretending put on that pretty mask
tie your ribbons....it will be ok
besides you're only 16 it doesnt matter anyway
Sep 13 2008, 01:33 PM
^ wow that was good!
Sep 13 2008, 02:10 PM
I wrote the poem because I get sick of people telling kids that their feelings don't really matter
or they cant love just because they're under 18
Sep 13 2008, 02:27 PM
ahh yes well that's true
Sep 13 2008, 02:28 PM
well I'm glad you liked it
Sep 13 2008, 02:38 PM
i hope i can see more of your poems here on AF
Sep 13 2008, 02:39 PM
Thanks I hope to write more
Sep 14 2008, 09:17 PM
Even though I'm not 16, when I was that young, I remember hearing "You're just a child. You don't know anything!"
So I understand where you are coming from.
Very nice poem!
Sep 15 2008, 03:24 PM
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