NINDOX
Oct 6 2008, 10:06 PM
Yet another.
A Girl Shouldn’t Smoke
She places the filter between her lips.
A flicker of the lighter and she inhale.
It creeps to back and moves its back to the front.
Out comes the smoke; clouding her in sophistication.
The accumulation of stress causes her to be the mistress,
Where on occasions she takes a step out, and tries to ingest a moment of relaxation.
Clouded fatigue and dull grey eyes,
Life could only be harmonized for a short five minutes.
Pressing her lips to kiss distress, like a moment of intimacy seen on the screen.
They’re lovers, but she’s slowly taking the life out of him.
Their lips part, and she holds puts the light aside between two fingers with much vanity.
Only to flick off the excess ashes, to lighten her load.
Glancing from the side of my eyes,
Curiosity is best describe, why I can’t look away,
Yet without a word to say.
Slowly peaking into intimacy as the smoke caress her.
Though my eyes could not look away, I was not impressed.
As the smoke confine her fine lines, clouded scars, and hid reality.
She stares at the haze like an old friend,
And slowly watches them depart; never to been seen again.
She takes the last drag, the ashes memorialized itself.
Flicking the filter aside, she steps back in, only to come back again.
BrooklynCarter
Oct 6 2008, 10:31 PM
lol a job well done! ^^ men shouldn't smoke either!
NINDOX
Oct 6 2008, 10:39 PM
QUOTE(BrooklynCarter @ Oct 6 2008, 10:31 PM) [snapback]3954299[/snapback]
lol a job well done! ^^ men shouldn't smoke either!
Kudos to that.
felltohell
Oct 7 2008, 06:55 PM
Nindox!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ever heard of othering and dual opposition???????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




well-written
some errors in grammar
but the idea fu-king sucks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

will still charm you though
NINDOX
Oct 7 2008, 07:56 PM
QUOTE(felltohell @ Oct 7 2008, 06:55 PM) [snapback]3955453[/snapback]
Nindox!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ever heard of othering and dual opposition???????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




well-written
some errors in grammar
but the idea fu-king sucks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

will still charm you though

I have never heard of othering and dual opposition, can you please tell me about.
Also, please elaborate why you don't like the idea?
felltohell
Oct 9 2008, 03:20 AM
go read about them yourself
Alexa
Oct 9 2008, 03:44 AM
I liked it even though i am a girl who smokes.
NINDOX
Oct 9 2008, 08:19 AM
QUOTE(felltohell @ Oct 9 2008, 03:20 AM) [snapback]3957534[/snapback]
go read about them yourself

So it's a book?