miss_merisha
Jan 18 2009, 05:34 PM
Here, I am again without an umbrella within my reach. The rain keeps falling from the sky and the tears I once held back are dripping all over my face. Once upon a time, the sun was out and the grass was green. Now, the sun hides in fear and the grass is greener on the other side.
Our paths would have never crossed, however, due to our decisions, our paths crosses. We were not star crossed lovers; we did came from different worlds.
Man, I'm stuck, I don't know how to continue this piece.
mikekk86
Jan 18 2009, 09:32 PM
It's not meant to be continued. Stamp a "The End" on it and move on to the next story.
Chillin
Jan 20 2009, 02:30 PM
haha shes always being cute.
miss_merisha
Jan 20 2009, 08:11 PM
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I'm not always being cute and no I'm not cute... I'm a MONSTER! ROAR!
NINDOX
Jan 20 2009, 10:38 PM
QUOTE(miss_merisha @ Jan 20 2009, 08:11 PM) [snapback]4093973[/snapback]
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I'm not always being cute and no I'm not cute... I'm a MONSTER! ROAR!
I like the imagery, but it gets jumbled with some words.
miss_merisha
Jan 21 2009, 11:10 PM
Haven't edited this piece yet and I might give up on this piece.
cloudyski
Jan 24 2009, 10:06 PM
QUOTE(miss_merisha @ Jan 20 2009, 08:11 PM) [snapback]4093973[/snapback]
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I'm not always being cute and no I'm not cute... I'm a MONSTER! ROAR!
hahah i liked that