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Jun
(BTW this story is completely original and is copy righted by me just like all my other stories on AF)


as many of u r aware of me n armadio have a lil score 2 settle but this a story if we were 2 encounter each other in real life.

Jun VS Armadio

On a cold summer morning around 6:00am the sky was still dark ,all that could be seen were two shadowy figures standing on a bridge above a freeway though not a car could be in sight the only thing on besides them on the bridge was two bags on either end. Eyeing each other carefully. As jun and made armadio made their way across the bridge two each other the only thing that could be heard was the gravel crunching under their feet.

Only two feet away fom each other after long examination of each other which only lasted a minute seemed to be an hour to them."I can't wait to see you squriming on the ground then after you Cevil is next" whispered Armadio.
Jun looked at him in the eye and replied "Fine".

A smirk came across Armadio's face "Jun you don't know how long i've waited for this moment" Armadio hd threw the first punch during the sentence. the punch was so unexpected that jun fell straight to the ground after being hit at his right cheek.blood trickled out of Jun's mouth.

With no remorse Armadio lefted his foot right up in a formation of an axe kick and slamed his foot down towards Jun. with quick thinking Jun rolled to his side narrowly escaping an unfortunate fate. Then tried a sweep kicked at Armadio who easily avoided the attack by jumping. Jun then after turning only 180 degrees then jumped in the air once reaching 360 degrees and swung his right foot with full force at Armadio's left check.

Armadio had lost a bit of balance but quickly regained it. The resumed staring at each other with in dying hatred until a drop of blood from Armadio's mouth had
fallin to the ground. "Give up jun and I will give you an easy death!" threatend Armadio. "Not a chance" answered Jun. With that responce Armadio walked to the bag on his side and held something long and silverish "Oh fu-k" said Jun in shock.
Jun walked to his bag and grabbed out his masamune. Armadio walked with his katana close by his side.

Armadio said calmly "It's already came to this............" All Jun kept thinking was "how did i get myself in this position?" The pair started slashing each other ferociously knowing that if one can get just one slash in it could make ll the difference. It was unfortunate for both that they were using extreme caution which made the fight more tense. Finally Armadio knocked Jun's sword out of his hand. He then kicked Jun to the ground and held his sword to Jun's neck.

"Jun I have all ways been better......" said Armadio "I can't beleive this is it........."
said Jun expecting his fate to sealed but a horn blew Armadio saw a truck speeding their way Jun took seize of the moment and quickly got up.Armadio was ready to run but Jun grabbed a hold of Armadio from behind in the struggle Armadio dropped his sword. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING" screamed Armadio in panic.
Armadio heart beat was beating harder and harder. Jun smiled and said grimly "We will both go........." "Wait Jun i wasn't gonna kill you! plus if we both die it will be a draw plus this is unfair!we both know i would've finished you off before" said Armadio in a desperate voice. "wrong my friend i had away of getting out"
the truck driver saw the two and slammed the bakes but the truck was still skidding towards them. "good bye Jun.........." "good bye Armadio we shall finish this in the after life"
THE END

so wat did ya'll fink about it???? i decided that it wouldn't b fair if only one of us won so i made a draw biggrin.gif
JamesLovesAyumi
I couldn't help but smile all the way through reading that!

I enjoyed it immensely... When is it going to be dramatised for TV viewers?!
AzNgIrL
Nice, very nice. At some point I thought it was gonna end right there. Very Good icon_smile.gif . Theres gotta be more right?!?!?!?!? Back and Forth Battle. Nice.
xAzN_KiDx
all i can say is awesome.... i like it but is there more?!??!?!?
Armadio
Hahahahaha, embarassedlaugh.gif that was pretty good Jun exacly the way I pictured it,exept you were the only one who got hit by the truck.Well anyways,good luck when you and I finale do meet beerchug.gif .Oh and there had better be more here cause that ended way to quickly.
Jun
biggrin.gif tnx guys 4 all your kind words and icon_wink.gif yes there is more. now bak to were we all were:

Armadio with all the foce he could master swung his head backwards which had made contact with with Jun's nose. immedeatly at contact Jun lost his grip of Armadio and collapsed to the ground with a bleeding nose. Armadio ran to the sidewalk and thought to himself "ha Jun i told you i was better watch out Cevil you
are next" while he was walking away from where Jun's dead carcase was to be expected. The truck was ten metres from Jun he had lost all hope of escaping his unworthy demise. so he closed his eyes waiting for the painful torture to occur.
The rumbling of wheels were getting louder and louder Jun felt the ground shake aswell but then the rumbling and the ground shaking had started fading. Jun opened his eyes and saw that the truck had driven over him.

The sun was beginning to rise making the sky a orange-redish color. Jun laughed at his stupidity.Jun grabbed a rock near him and threw it at the departing Armadio.
"Ouch! WHAT THE fu-k.........." Armadio has turned around and saw a familiar figure walking towards him. crunch.............crunch...............crunch finally stopped walking and now was jun was a metre apart from Armadio. "Your persistent but im glad that you didn't die because i want the pleasure of you begging for mercy" said Armadio now reaching for his sword. Jun taunted Armadio "that's to bad isn't it? iv'e already had the pleasure of you begging for you misreble life"

"Those will be your last words!" yelled Armadio while swinging his sword at Jun with rage. Jun then guikly jumped to his left avoiding the deadly slash. "coward you will fight an unarmed foe with a sword-" Jun wasn't able to finish his sentence due to the fact Armadio thrusted his sword toward s Jun's chest but Jun just dropped to the ground and kicked Armadios shin. Jun quilkly got up into a fighting formation before his adversary could recover completely. "fu-k that was a close call! dam it! only if i had my masamune i would tear him to pieces!" thought jun frantically as he was scanning the road to see if his sword was in sight. "It must have fallen of the bridge.............." said Jun to him self and at that started to run as fast as he could to the edge of the bridge.

"Dam it! How the hell am i going to get down there?" Jun turned around only to find Armadio right behind him with his katana held high above his head. "GOOD BYE JUN" screamed Armadio with laughter as he swang his swrd downwards.
Jun knew what to do and he ducked down. "Why won't you just die!" questioned Armadio as he trid to free his sword that got stuck on the banister at the side of the bridge.

"AAaaaaaahhhh" screamed Jun as he landed a kick on Armadio's chest. Armadio gave a little yelp of pain before falling to the ground. Jun jumped on Armdio and aimed a direct punch to his face but fortunate for Armadio that he moved his head which resulted in Jun screaming "$hit my hand!!" Armadio swiftly threw Jun off him. the pair got up off the ground at the same time. They where about to charge at each over but heard police sirens wailing in the air. "fu-k that truck driver" said Armadio "the truck driver must of thought he ran over me.....iv'e got an idea so that we can finish this....." said Jun calmly...................
JamesLovesAyumi
This story getting intriguing, nay Gripping! More please...!

I hope Jun has more because we all want to know how it ends....
AzNgIrL
Mayn! You know how to write! I'd agree with James. Ders gotta beh more!!
Nung1
sorry to be a spoil sport but the way the story is written is disracting me from the action. try usin comparison and word variety in the story. I think its really good but i just cant shake the writing style from my mind......sorry. icon_sad.gif

Like an ecplise the light of life was drianed from my interest.
Jun
"Well what the fu-k is it! We don't have exactly all day!" demanded Armadio. Jun could see by his facial expression that he was losing patience. "We hijack their car........." replied Jun cooly "WHAT ARE YOU fu-kING INSANE!" yelled Armadio "Fine you can get caught but im going to hijack that car with you or without you" warned Jun. Armadio could hear the wailing of sirens getting slightly louder "fine" replied Armadio reluctantly.

Later on..........
"i see the body" said the 1st officer. The second one exclaimed "i hate dead bodies you go and check it!" "ok" said the 1st officer sounding very annoyed. He got out of the car and approched the body. Armadio knew that was his que so he sneaked out of the tree he was hiding in and creep towards the car. He then whispered to himself "one....two..........THREE" then opened the car door and threw out the 2nd officer who landed with a loud thud. The first officer heard the commotion and turned around to see Armadio driving the stolen car. "Get out of the car right-" before the officer could even finish his sentence Jun hit him hard at the back of the head which rendered him unconcious. Armadio opened the car door frantically "Hurry up!" screamed Armadio.

Jun dived in the car "Hit it!" commanded Jun.At that moment Armadio hit his foot on the pedal and they went speeding of the bridge which was leading them to rocky terein. "i can't beleive we pulled that said Armadio smiling "but seriously Jun you are one crazy bastard!" "yeah i know" said Jun admiring the scenery. "hey Armadio this place is like sea but of trees" "so where does this road take us Jun".
Jun didn't answer the question which irratated Armadio "well" continued Armadio
firmly. Jun still didn't reply. "fu-k you mean im driving in a direction none of us has been before............"

"stop the car" exclaimed Jun "What for? there could be cops speeding towards us as we speak" answered Armadio "I have to go" said Jun
"c'mon i can't hold it in much longer i'll be quick pleaded Jun "ok ok but you only have a minute" Armadio pulled over at the side of the road. Jun rushed out into the bush's doing his buisness. "Armadio looked through the glove compartment to find a hand gun. Armadio smiled slightly as he tucked the gun deep into his pockect with some clips "Jun you may have escaped me before but now that i have a gun you have no hope!" thought Armadio to himself.

"im back ok let's go" said Jun "Hey Jun why don't you drive?im getting tired" asked Armadio Jun shrugged and said "ok why not" so they switched seats.
"Oh $hit!looks like we've got company!" panicked Jun. Three police cars where speeding towards them. "Crap!stomp the pedal their gaining on us and fast" informed Armadio.

Bang! shots where being shot in the air by their persuers. "What the fu-k their trying to kill us" yelled Armadio "NO $hit!" answered Jun furiously. Two of the three cars where now on either side trapping them and the 3rd was right behind them. "GO FASTER" screamed Armadio with rising anger. "im trying!" replied Jun who was concentrating hard on road. the cars on either side started ramming into the car. sparks emerged from the sides rapidly. the 3rd car still followed them.
"What can they be planing?" questioned Jun "Look" screamed Armadio in horror then added We're heading towards the cliff! "fu-k OFFICERS! DAM IT I CAN'T BREAK OR TURN LEFT OR RIGHT!" Yelled Jun.

The persueing cars started to slow down but went to a complete halt. Armadio smiled menaceingly at Jun and laughed "bye Jun for the last time" Armadio went through the window to get to the roof. "smart @$$" mumbled Jun as followed him he saw Armadio jump and roll onto the the edge of the cliff. The car was now about to fall helplessly down in a heap. Jun leaped from the car..................... Armadio turned around towards the cliff and saw no car no Jun but then heard a yell "Nnnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooooooooo" soon after he heard a big explosion.
"Jun.............." whispered Armadio.
JamesLovesAyumi
I knew that you cared bout each other really! biggrin.gif embarassedlaugh.gif

Is there anymore?
Armadio
Lets get something strait here James,Im not gay,
and ofcourse theres more.
xAzN_KiDx
dude.... THIS STORY IS IS PRETTY AWESOME
props jun
AzNgIrL
You really know how to write stories Jun. You should write a book mayn! dis is freakin tense, and im juss like c'mon whats next whats next!!
Jun
(tnx 4 da support pll biggrin.gif )

Armadio heard footsteps nearing by.Armadio cursed to him self "fu-k what do i do?" Six officers started advanced on him. Sweat started to pour down Armadio's face. One officer warned "we can do this the easy way or the hard way" the sixth officer on the far left charged towards Armadio. Armadio simply sweep his foot to
trip the officer making him look like a foot. then he lefted his foot in a 90 degree angle "NO COMMING BACK FOR YOU" screamed Armadio as he thrusted his foot down on the officers spinal cord.

"AAAARRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHH" yelled the parylised officer in pain. the others stood frozen at the crumpled heap on the ground. "Who's next" asked Armadio.
This time three officer's charged at once. Armadio ran towards the trio with
fury and did a scisor kick to the officer in the middle (A scissor kick is when some one grabs their opponent with their legs and throws them) that was the second officer to fall. The other two came running towards either side of him to counter them Armadio jumped up in the air and kicked them both at the same time. The officers collapsed to the ground instantly.

Armadio was about to turn around but CRRRAAAACK! But was knocked unconcious and everything went black.........................................................

Armadio awoke in his bed "Wow what a dream. it seemed so real well at least
im at home" Armadio checked his alarm clock and saw the time was 6:00 am.
so he drifted back to sleep.

Armadio felt his body bumping up and down which broke him from his slumber. "where am i" questioned Armadio as he found him self in the back of the officers car. He realised that he was only dreaming that he was at home when he was really a captive in a officers car. Armadio went to reach for a baton he found in the back but somthing restricted his arm from moving. "what the........." thought Armadio as he saw his arm hand cauffed to the car door.

"LET ME GO" roared Armadio with fury as he tried hoplessly to free himself. The officers ignored him and continued with their conversations. "think Armadio think.."
said Armadio to himself repeadily "think.....think.......argh its hopless!" Armadio shoved his hand in his pocket and felt something smoth and cool....... Armadio smiled broadly. as he was about to pull out the gun a loud thud fell on the car roof....................................
JamesLovesAyumi
Armadio, of course you're not gay! You and Jun are just friends!

Jun, great story man! We all love it! I sense another part too.... icon_wink.gif
xAzN_KiDx
keeps on getting better n better!!!!!!! more please
Armadio
This turnining into a regular Kung-fu story.I like that.LETS HERE SOMEMORE DUDE!
xAzN_KiDx
kung fu huh? lol i don't think cops are involved in that don't you think? =/
AzNgIrL
Very nicely written. Tense building up. Nice. icon_smile.gif
Jun
"Now what's happening!" thought Armadio to himself bitterly. BOOOOM! Armadio heard a loud crash and turned around to see what was happening through the rear window and to his surprise he saw a flaming police car wreak next to a tree the officers seemed just as surprised as he was."what the hell cause them to crash?" questioned the officer driving. "let's go back and see what happend" suggested the
second one.

Suddenly Jun slide through the car window on the patienger side and in one swift motion undid the second officers seat belt,opemed the door and threw him out with no remorse what so ever. "JUN! how can this be" statted Armadio in shock.
Jun and the driver started wrestling at the front trying desperatley to for each other out. "YOU BASTARD!!!!I'LL KILL YOU" threatened Jun as he got out a long dagger and stabbed the officer in the chest. The officer eyes started to widen and
became lifeless. Jun tossed the corpse to the open road then switched to the driver's seat and began to stop the car.

Armadio was shocked that Jun did all that and took note that Jun was furious.
As Jun got out of the car he slammed the door and opened the passenger door.
"I thought you died" said Armadio "I am dead........" replied Jun. "really?" asked Armadio "No but YOU soon will be!" said Jun ferociously. "How did you escape?
asked Armadio. "well........" said Jun

Earlier
"Nnnnnnnoooooooo" Screamed Jun as he started plunging off the clifff he felt his
hair and clothes raffliing as he fell done to meet death. Frantically Jun grabbed his dagger from under his sleve wicth was held by a black bandage wrapped around
his arm. "Oh god let this work" prayed Jun as he stabbed a rock with his dagger
which had stopped his fall....................

"After that i rock climbed up and stole one of the police cars the one you where
in had already left with another one though lucky one pig decided to take a cigerrete brake" told Jun to Armadio. Armadio's jaw had dropped at the story Jun
told. Jun continued on "thanks for letting me almost plunging to my doom! I should kill you now while your unable to fight back but where is the honour in that?"
"so can u please unchauff me?" pleaded Armadio "hold still"adviced Jun as he left up his dagger above his head. "wow your like a cat with nine lives you never die and becareful i don't want my hand in two!" said Armadio. Jun ignored him and cutted the cain in two.

"so what do we do now?where do we have the final showdown? asked Armadio as he and Jun went into the front seats of the car. "I don't no to tell you the truth but what i do know is that we need to dump this car and fight some where else because the police will be after us" informed Jun "I wonder how everyone is at AF
you know nung1,cevil,james,aznkid,azngirl,atlantis,ben well u get the picture" said Armadio "You do know that only one of us will return to AF" reminded Jun as he drived back on to the freeway. "Are you there joe?" questioned a voice. "huh" remarked Jun "it's comming from the radio!" exclaimed Armadio "simon are you
there?guys are you alright don't worry we're sending fifty men over to your locaion...." echoed the voice.

"$hit what do we do now? we're fu-ked this time!" said Armadio with his voice shaking. "ummm" replied Jun slowly. "what do you think?" asked Jun quickly
"we fleee and take selter at AF until this all blow's over!" replied Armadio
"maybe if i speed i will be able to get off the freeway before........." Jun's heart
stopped as he saw a group of police cars in the distance...................
JamesLovesAyumi
Still being persued by the Police?!

But it's all good - keep up the good work Jun!
AzNgIrL
lol very nice once again..AF is speshul! lol..
xAzN_KiDx
nice nice
cool i was mentioned?!?!?!?! cool
AzNgIrL
dont be feelin too special, bcuz i was mentioned too..lol...we're all family it's all good...MORE MORE MORE NICE STORY JUN KEEP IT UP!
Armadio
Good story,but I think we need to actualy get away from the police.
xAzN_KiDx
yea but it was kinda cooll when he stabbed the police guy in the chest >:)
Jun
embarassedlaugh.gif um guys i was typing up the next bit of the story n i sorta........closed the internet window which deleted the whole thing so there is gonna be a delay.........
AzNgIrL
aww darn...lol..nice going jun!! icon_rolleyes.gif lol oh well..i'll beh waiting icon_smile.gif
Jun
well here are some spoilers for the next bit.................
1.we find out why Armadio is so fixated on killing Jun
2.AF will be a key location for the finale
3.more people will be mentioned in the story
AzNgIrL
wow..i cant wait mayn!! get it get it!!
xAzN_KiDx
get it done yo... i wanna read more

remember peoples the more you read the more you succeed icon_smile.gif
JamesLovesAyumi
We all wait in anticipation! I hope this story has an exciting climax!
xAzN_KiDx
is it done now?????? i can't wait ne longer man!!!!!!
Armadio
QUOTE (Jun @ Feb 14 2004, 08:19 PM)
well here are some spoilers for the next bit.................
1.we find out why Armadio is so fixated on killing Jun
2.AF will be a key location for the finale
3.more people will be mentioned in the story

Cant wait to see what you come up with for number one.(Grabs a 2X4 biggrin.gif )
Jun
"fu-k! what the hell are we going to do now?" asked Jun in desperation. The car was now on the bridge where they engaged in combat earlier. "drive of the bridge" replied Armadio sounding unexpectingly calm. "what" asked Jun making sure he heard clearly. "DRIVE OFF THE fu-kING BRIDGE IT"S OUR ONLY CHANCE" scolded Armadio. "Ok hang on to something" warned Jun as he swirved the car. The car was now in midair. "HOLLLLLLY SHIIIIIIIIT" screamed Jun and Armadio together as they awaited for the impact that lyed ahead. The car landed perfectly though it bumped viciously a few times making Jun's and Armadio's body fly every where."we made it!" said Jun in disbelief. "onward to AF!" replied Armadio. "hey Armadio why do we have to fight?why-" Jun was interupted by Armadio's Explosive responce "SHUT THE fu-k UP!IT'S ALL YOUR fu-kING FAULT! IF YOU DON'T SHUT UP I'LL SOMETHING RIGHT NOW THAT I CERTAINLY WON'T REGRET!" from then on the trip to AF was in an awkward dead silence.

Later......
The pair stood in front of a gigantic building which was white and big golden letters
spelling "ASIA FINEST=connecting the world to asian culture" as soon as they entered Armdio whispered in Jun's ear viciously "roof top 2:00 AM" and the he stormed of to the right and entered the games room which contained the latest arcade games. Stood there staring at the receptionest desk "I need a new masmune.........I better find Shadowblade" Jun walk of to the lounge room..........

Aznboy saw Armadio walking around the games room and decided to aproach him
"Whats up Armadio" greeted Aznboy "nothing much" replied Armadio "So you killed Jun huh" asked Aznboy "that's none of your buisness" replied Armadio with rising anger. "ooooooooohhhhhh so you ended up getting your @$$ whooped" laughed Aznboy "SHUT UP!!!"snapped Armadio. peoples heads started turning in their direction. "I'm going....." said Armadio trying to keep his cool then left the room. Azngirl poped up and asked "whats wrong with him??" "I have no idea.....maybe you can go ask Jun whats going on. James said he wanted to vs me in DDR" replied Aznboy "ok i'll go find him" said Azngirl as she left the room to begin her serch.

Jun found Shadowblade and ran towards him "hey whats up?" asked Jun. "nothing much. seeing by the way you came here you must want sometihng do you not?"
questioned Shadowblade "i need another masmune have you got any left i promise i'll pay you back next saturday" "fine but you better give me the moey by sunday or it'll get ugly" threatened Shadowblade as he gave Jun the sword. "now begone" said shadowblade unpleasent'ly "thank you and consider it done!" panicked Jun then he left for the main foyer. Then he saw Azn girl aproaching him then greeted "hey Jun" "hey" replied Jun "so who one the big fight?" asked azngirl getting straight to the point. "we still have to finish it" said Jun as he began to walk off.

"WAIT!" exclaimed Azn girl as grabbed his arm "at least tell me why you two are fighting.you two used to be really good friends" said Azn girl quickly. "Fine i'll tell you" sighed Jun. Azn girl began to listen intently to his story. "Me and Armadio liked this really nice girl don't ask hat her name is because i dont want to mention it" said Jun Azngirl nodded her head. "i remeber the night when
all this began as if it was yesterday..................."

"Hey Jun how about a drag race?" callenged Armadio but Jun shook his head "nah man i just wanted to steal this cars to test
them out" "whats wrong chicken?" mocked Armadio "c'mon it'll be fun" pleaded the girl "i'll ride with you if you do". "fine but as soon as this is over we dump the cars" sighed Jun "agreed" said Armadio as he went in the stolen car. Jun and the girl went to the car next to it. "when that light goes green we start" announced Armadio. The two started reving their cars the light was still
red.....Jun felt the palm of his hands sweating "there no need to be nervous it's just a drag race" laughed the girl. Jun nodded on the other hand Armadio was calm. The light flashed green the cars were now speeding in the distance. "WOO HOOO" Yelled Armadio who was enjoying the thrill of going at 100k. Armadio was now ahead of Jun "c'mon Jun go faster" said the girl
Jun began catching up on Armadio when out of no where disapeared by the truck crossing in front of Jun. "WATCH OUT!"
warned the girl. "fu-k!" swore Jun as he tried to swirve the car but the car keep sliding..................CRRRRRASH! the patienger
side of the collided into the truck first. Armadio had gotten out of his car and ran towards the car wreck. the car had flipped upside down by the impact of the ccrash. Armadio stood frozenly at the wreck. "hellllllllllp" "hellllllllllp" Armadio heard Jun screaming. "Armadio help me out" pleaded Jun immeadietly Armadio grabbed Jun's hand an pulled him out the wreck when turned around the car exploded up in flames. Armadio called out the girl's name as if he was expecting her to emerge from the flaming wreck. Armadio fell to his knee's "no" he said faintly a tear emerged from his left eye.

Jun staggered towards Armadio and place his hand on Armadio's shoulder to comfort him. When Armadio felt Jun's hand his sorrow then transformed into rage and he felt for the taste of revenge "YOU!" screamed Armadio as he released him self from Jun's hand he then stood up. "This is all your fault!" pointed Armadio. Jun felt his sorrow now turning in to fury "YOU THINK I WANTED THIS TO HAPPEN?!" "YOU THINK I LIKE THE FACT THAT SOME JUST DIED BEFORE MY EYE'S!" screamed Jun "YOU WERE THE ONE DRIVING!" argued Armadio "I SAID I DIDN'T WANT TO RACE!!!BUT NOOOOOOO YOU JUST HAD TO FORCE ME!!!!!" Jun then saw Armadio had calmed down and say "I shall wander ever on.........Searching for you.Because I know, As long as you, Are out there.I can never,Rest in my grave.I will find you,And make you pay."

"his face that day was like none other he was full of hatred and sorrow............." continued Jun. "wah..........i didn't things were that bad between you guys......." replied Azn girl in shock. "Bye" said Jun "Bye" said Azn girl. Jun looked around the foyer and saw Randerkill and Atlantis argueing over something in the games room near them he saw Ben and Korn talking to each as usaul. Then Jun saw Armadio making some usaul threats to Cevil. Armadio caught Jun's eye and at that moment Cevil kicked Armadio's shin and ran off to the car room. "you'll pay for that" yelled Armadio he was about to persue Cevil but he felt something pull him back. he turned around to find Jun standind right behind him. They stared at each other with unblinking eyes
until James walked pass with two girls that he chatted up. "roof top tomorrow don't forget" reminded Armadio "yeah whatever"
replied to Armadio as he left AF to prepare for tomorrows fate.......................the question is who will survive?????
dreydle
hehe, the story get's better and better!
can't wait!
JamesLovesAyumi
wOOOOOOOOOOt! Jun this is pure gold mate! biggrin.gif

Are other members getting a mention again next time? Because I'm liking my role in this! icon_smile.gif icon_wink.gif
AzNgIrL
lol..nicely written once again Jun. Keep up the Good Work icon_smile.gif

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BtW, AzNgIrL is CoOl! embarassedlaugh.gif
xAzN_KiDx
lol nice story lol i saw some mistakes but it's all good!
AzNgIrL
stop wit da mistakes again..sheesh..it's a good..no no no...great..no no..FANTASTIC story!! we need MORE!! bowdown.gif
Jun
embarassedlaugh.gif sorry about the mistakes.

i would like to say that the next chapter will conclude the story.
xAzN_KiDx
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MORE MORE MORE IT WAS GETTING GOOD!!! THE ENDING BETTER BE THE BEST!!! lol
Jun
Armadio looked up at the dark cloudy sky and vowed "I will have revenge for the both of us.........." Armadio looked at his watch, the time was 2:06 AM "what's taking Jun so long?!" said Armadio angrily to himself. Jun reached the roof top of AF. He saw Armadio on the opposite side of the building staring at him. Jun wasn't keen on fighting Armadio but knew he had no choice,Armadio's and his fate was now going to be decided. "Armadio........i don't want to fight anymore can't we put the past behind us?" called out Jun. "i don't no......." answered Armadio. "please" pleaded Jun. Armadio started laughing Jun didn't know if this was a good sign. Armadio held out his hand "sure buddy" replied Armadio merrily. Jun could hardly believe his luck now he and Armadio wouldn't have to die. Jun walked towards Armadio and shoke his hand.

Armadio then knee'd Jun at his stomach. Jun fell to his knee's clucthing at his stomach. It began to rain heavily. "Fool" remarked Armadio as he kicked Jun which threw him on his back. "do you know what it is like to have a close friend take away someone you hold dear!" interigated Armadio "that is why i will never forgive your sin!" continued Armadio. "fight me now!" demanded Armadio. Jun started to recover from the two unexpectible blows and gavered enough strengh to get in a fighting stance.

Jun ran towards Armadio and threw a staight forward punch at his head but Armadio caught Jun's fist. So Jun threw his left hand towards his target but Armadio also caught the second fist. Jun tried to release his fist's from Armadio's grip. "let go!" commanded Jun. "fine" smirked Armadio as he jumped up in the air and dropped kick Jun at the chest. Jun was thrown a few feet by the force but was able to keep his balance. Armadio started getting up of the ground but Jun ran at full speed towards Armadio and fly kicked Armadio's face. "Arrrrrgggggghhhhh" yelled Armadio in pain. Jun walked towards Armadio as he lyed on the ground hopelessly. Then suddenly Armadio sweep kicked Jun which leaded him falling onto the ground. The pair both
flipped them selves of the ground and where back on gaurd.

Armadio went in an Axe kick formation. "YES! it's always the same move everytime with him! making him quiet prodictible" thought Jun to himself as Armadio forced his foot down. Jun raised
his arms in a x-formation which caught the blow head on "what" said Armadio who was shocked that Jun was able to block the incredibly powerful blow. Jun then tripped Armadio which made him fall on his back. "Armadio.............i dont want to kill you but you leave me no choice..."
said Jun. Armadio quickly got him self off the wet ground. "I WILL WIN!" replied Armadio with new found energy. Jun tried a round house kick but Armadio swiftly ducked then as Jun's back was turned, Armadio quikly tackled Jun before he could deliver another kick. They were both
now rolling towards the edge of the building. Jun noticed that Armadio was about to throw him off if he didn't do anything so he pocked Armadio's eyes. Armadio was clutching his at eyes
"YOU BASTARD!" cursed Armadio.

Jun drawed out his sword and slowly walked towards Armadio. Armadio could see again but was now faking to lower Jun's gaurd. Armadio now drew out his sword and slashed at Jun's ankle "Aaarrrrrrrgggggggghhhhhh" exclaimed Jun he steped backwards he was lucky it was only a cut. Armadio laughed as he stood up with his katana. "still using the masamune blade eh?"
remarked Armadio "when i kill you i'll claim your sword as my own" informed Armadio. Armadio started walking towards Jun. Jun keeped his gaurd and was waqiting for Armadio to take the offenceive. Armadio went for a kick stab for Jun's chest but it was navigated away by Jun's sword. It was like de ja vou they now started were fighting viciously against each other. Their swords were blocking one another and they were now in the postion that their swords were held together as their owner's tried to push each other. "give up" stated Armadio "yeah right" replied Jun as he kicked Armadio to brake the connection between their swords.

Armadio started stumbling backwards the edge of the building but was anable to stop himself. "WATCH OUT! yelled Jun as he ran towards Armadio hoping to avoid him from falling. Armadio dropped his sword as tripped over the edge. "Im sorry i counl'dnt forfill my vow" whispered Armadio as he was about to fall rapidly to his death. "Nnnnnnoooooooooooooo" yelled Jun as he grabbed Armadio's hand. Jun used all his might to lift Armadio back on top of the building.
After Jun saved Armadio he layed on ground resting. "why did you save me?" asked Armadio
puzzled. "i guess.......i.....didn't have.....the....heart.....to let you fall' said Jun gasping for air.
"i tried to kill you so many times whilst you stll chose to save me.........." said Armadio as he stood up. "look im going im sick of this" replied Jun as he walked towards the exit.

Jun heard aloud bang and saw the door infront of him now had many cracks. Jun quikly sun around and saw Armadio with a handgun. Rage now burst through Jun "I SAVED YOUR LIFE AND THIS IS WHAT I GET!"bellowed Jun with fury. "you really didn't think i was going to let you live on did you?Plus we are even now because i saved your life from the car crash remember?"
laughed Armadio as he raised his stolen gun again and fired another shot at Jun. Jun responded by grabbing his sword and sliced the bullet in half. Armadio fired another shot and the same result happended. Armadio aimed for Jun's right shoulder and got a hit "fu-k!" hellowed Jun
in pain as he dropped his sword. Then he found another two bullets piercing through his skin.
It was the most excruciating pain he felt in his life. Armadio reloaded his gun that was the
last image Jun saw before everything thing became blury. Jun fell staight to the ground everything went black the only thing that he could feel now was the hard cold raindrops but that started to fade away everything was now black.

Jun left his body and saw Armadio staring up at the sky with triumph. "Jun......" said a familer voice. Jun spun around to see a face smiling at him it was her. Jun smiled and was happy that he was able to see her again. "oh my good im so happy to see you!" replied Jun "Jun im sorry about the trouble iv'e caused you" apoligised the girl "no" said Jun shaking his head "I should be sorry it was my fault about your early demise. "but it is because of me you are here Jun....and i don't think it was your fault i died.after all me and Armadio pushed you to race"
reasured the girl. "at least im with you i don't care anymore" replied Jun smiling he had missed her soft and gently voice. "you arn't ready yet" informed the girl as she went towards Jun's dead body. "what do you mean?" asked Jun "I mean i will bring you back to life" answered the girl as knelled over Jun's body. "please don't if you do i'll kill myself" pleaded Jun "please....kill Armadio i love him like a brother but i can not forgive what he has done to you" asked the girl
"If you decide to stay then remember i will always look after you" promised the girl "don't worry i'll be back" claimed Jun.

The girl placed her hand on Jun's heart and forced it to pump again. Jun was dragged back to the body and opened his eye's to see Armadio still looking up to the sky in silent prayer. Jun grabbed his sword and stood up and sneaked behind Armadio. Jun held his sword above his
head. Armadio heard foot steps behind him and turned around to kick Jun. Jun fell on to his stomach. "darn he knew i was behind him" thought Jun. Jun got to his knees and felt something smooth and cold being place at the back of his head. Armadio stood there with his gun placed at Jun's head "this will end once and for all" annouced Armadio. "this is for her" thought Jun as he grabbed his sword and stabbed himself. Armadio was about to pull the trigger when he felt something wet slice through his skin. Jun continued to push the blade through his body so it could go through Armadio. Blood started pouring out of Jun's mouth the same happened to Armadio. Jun then pulled the blade out of both of them and fell onto the ground and started smiling "I............did.......it" he said wearily. Armadio was still in shock that he was stabbed and walked to the edge of the the building. Jun watched him from where he was lying,
Armadio turned around and whispered "I shall wander ever on.........Searching for you.Because I know, As long as you, Are out there.I can never,Rest in my grave.I will find you,And make you pay." after his last words he fell of the building. Jun couldn't beleive it was over. He looked at the sky and to his surprise he saw it had stopped raining and it was sunny. Jun smiled at the sky and said his last words "All right...........im coming"
THE END

This concludes Jun vs Armadio i hope you guys enjoyed reading it biggrin.gif
AzNgIrL
:shocked: :shocked: :shocked: that was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good Jun!!! You should become a writer...omg...that's juss awesome!! i luv how you ended it!!

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Good Job on the Writing.
Jun
QUOTE (AzNgIrL @ Feb 20 2004, 02:02 AM)
:shocked: :shocked: :shocked: that was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good Jun!!! You should become a writer...omg...that's juss awesome!! i luv how you ended it!!

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Good Job on the Writing.

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im just happy that u enjoyed it biggrin.gif
AzNgIrL
'twas funny how you made yerself be the good n peace making kinda guy..kinda figured you'd do such a thing embarassedlaugh.gif
Jun
QUOTE (AzNgIrL @ Feb 20 2004, 02:43 AM)
'twas funny how you made yerself be the good n peace making kinda guy..kinda figured you'd do such a thing embarassedlaugh.gif

lol that is because i was not the one who started the fighting between me n Armadio. i kinda guesed he would be the more violent type in nature
also i only fight when i have to other wise i try to avoid icon_wink.gif
dreydle
totally AWESOME! NICE JUN! it's just GREAT!
JamesLovesAyumi
A great ending to justify a great story! Well done Jun.
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