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"Take that Jun!" yelled a little black hair boy, as he threw sand to another boy with dark brown hair.
"Haha Armadio you always think you can defeat me!" laughed Jun, as he threw a juice box to Armadio, hitting him in the head.
"Waaaa!!" cried Armadio. A girl about three years old rushed to him.
"What wrong Armadio?" asked the girl with a ponytail.
"Jun hit me with a juice box, now I got a boo boo on my head!"
"Jun that wasn't very nice she threw a bucket of water at him.
"Hey, Shinee! Stop that" Jun laughed. Armadio, Jun, and Shinee threw water at each other. Then a girl with pig tails waddled over to them.
"Umm, hi" the girl with pig tails said softly.
"Oh hi!" the three said in unison.
"What's your name?" asked Shinee looking at her.
"Harutenshi, but people call me Haru." she spoke softly and looked at the sand.
"Welcome Haru! I'm Armadio! To my left is Shinee and to my right is the clumsy Jun!"
"What'd you say?" asked Jun to Armadio.
"I said, spiffy Jun!" Armadio lied. Jun rolled his eyes.
"Come play with us Haru!" offered Shinee.
Haru's big brown eyes widen and sparkled! The four played tagged and threw sand at each other for the rest of the day.
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(Now they're teenagers and preteens)
Jun and Shinee were a couple and they were inseperable. Armadio was a very strong fighter, very good martial arts. And Haru was more out spoken. But then one day they lost each other.
"I'm sorry you guys." spoke Haru as they hung out at AsiaFinest smoothie bar.
"What are you talking about Haru?" asked Jun, as he shook up his orange mango smoothie.
"I have to leave."
"Haru stop pulling pranks on us again." said Armadio and Shinee.
"I'm serious. I'm moving to New York City. I want to persue my dreams." The three were confused. Haru did talk about wanting to go live in the city, but that was after college. They agreed to stick with each other no matter what happened.
"How can you do this to us Haru?" asked Jun who was the most quiet out of all of them this afternoon.
"It was my decison. Why can't you be more supportive of me?" asked Haru.
"But why the rush Haru? You said after college! We all agreed all four of us would go there for college and then we would get apartments and live near each other." said Shinee.
"Times change and so do people" Haru spat as she got up and smoothed her Paris shirt, they got her for her birthday. She grabbed her Hello Kitty bag. "I'm sorry, swing by my house when you all are finished." she mumbled as she ran out the door.

So how do ya like it? It's not that great is it? I'll continue it later though!
Armadio2
Haru,I had no idea you could write so passionatly. Your story,its beautiful,I could literaly feel the sadness from it. I bow before your writing skills. I must know what happens next!
AzNgIrL
Awww, C'mon Haru! Don't leave us! Hehe, nice job. Lol, I like how the beginning started embarassedlaugh.gif
harutenshi
Thanks icon_smile.gif I'll try to post it a.s.a.p.
AzNgIrL
Where do you get your ideas? icon_wink.gif
Nung1
interesting..... curiosity is getting the best of me. post soon,biggrin.gif
Jun
haha great story haru beerchug.gif
im eager to see what happens in the next chapter
Armadio2
Maaaann. That next chapter must be pretty long. embarassedlaugh.gif
harutenshi
"We gotta find some way for Haru not to go." Armadio said. He, Jun, and Shinee sat on the bench.
"It looks like she has her mind set on it." said Jun as he closed his eyes.
"How could you say that!" yelled Armadio. The three sat around still trying to come up with a plan.
"I got an idea!" Shinee exclaimed.
"What's that?" asked both Jun and Armadio.
"We go over to Haru's house and try to convice." The three got up and walked to Haru's place.
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Haru heard a knock at the door and got up to see who it was.
"Who is it?" asked Haru
"It's us!"
Well gee, that really specfic, thought Haru as she heard Armadio and Jun fighting. "Come on in!" Haru opened the door and the four walked to the living room.
"So when are you moving?" asked Jun
"Well, I'm looking for some apartments in Manhattan."
"How could you do this to us!" yelled Armadio. Shinee kicked Armadio in the shin for his behavior.
"I don't understand what you're talking about" said a confused Haru.
"You think it's okay to move to New York City and leaveyour friends behind in this crappy place!" yelled Armadio. Jun and Shinee held hands together afraid something bad was going to happen. Haru started crying.
"Do you know bad it hurts when I'm moving without my friends by my side! Do you know how bad it hurts when you say that!" Haru cried, breaking down.
"Haru.." said Shinee softly as she tried comforting her, but Haru pushed away.
"You know, I wasn't sure if I should stay here or not. This makes me want to move to New York City more!" Haru shouted as she ran out of the house slamming the door behind her.

Oy, that was bad. embarassedlaugh.gif I had writer's block for a long time. I don't know where I get my ideas. embarassedlaugh.gif It just comes to me, when I start typing.
Jun
wow...im surprised on how well you got our personality's in this...
this is a good story Haru i hope you get the next chapter out soon biggrin.gif
Armadio2
Ya,I know. Well I hope to see the next part soon O.K? icon_wink.gif
AzNgIrL
Nice going Armadio!

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"You think it's okay to move to New York City and leaveyour friends behind in this crappy place!" yelled Armadio.


icon_lame.gif Smartness Armadio embarassedlaugh.gif
Armadio2
*slumps*Life mocks me at every turn.
harutenshi
*pats Armadio on back* Don't worry, I'll try not to mocj you in the next chapter. Sowwies.
Armadio2
Its okay.*bows*Besides I said life,not my friends.
JunKun
O.o oooohh another story to read good job Haru beerchug.gif
harutenshi
Haru walked around around the park still trying to cool down after the episode. Maybe I was being a little too rough on Armadio. And I should apolgize to him, thought Haru as she walked along the pond. She was too caught up in thinking of what to say to her friends that she bumped into a guy. "Aaah!! I'm so sorry!" cried Haru, as she got up to help the guy.
"No, it's my fault." said the guy, as he held his hand. She looked at him and he took her breath away. He was tall around 6 foot. He had spikey black hair with brown highlights. He was asian and looked like the surfer/skater/preppy kinda guy. She blushed as her mouth dropped to the ground. "So what's your name?" he asked.
"Uh...what's my name you ask? Uhh....my name is Harutenshi, but everyone calls me Haru."
"Haha, you're a cute one. That's a cute name." He said, as he observed her.
"What's yours?"
"My name is Lei." he smiled.
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"Armadio this all your fault!" yelled Shinee as they ran after Haru.
"Well sorry!" Yelled Armadio, as the three made a turn.
"Come on you guys. Calm down! The main thing is to find Haru." Jun said, as he wiped the sweat dripping down from his forehead. All of a sudden they spotted when of their fellow friend from AF.
"NUNG!!!" the three shouted as they ran up to him.
"Oh hey guys!" said Nung, he had brown hair and was around 5'10.
"Have you seen Haru?" asked Armadio.
"I might have..."
"You sure?" asked Jun. The four walked into the park and heard two people talking.
"Well I gotta go." said Nung, as he jogged out. The three waved bye to him.
"Ya know...that voice sounds awfully familar." said Shinee. "Wait, that's Haru's!" Shinee exclaimed as the three followed the voice. They saw Haru talking to a guy. Shinee, Armadio, and Jun all exchanged weird looks as they saw Haru and the guy walk away, hand in hand.
Armadio2
Even in the stories that guy intrudes. Not that theres anything wrong with that.
Great job Jessie.
harutenshi
^Haha. It's a different dude.
Armadio2
Yeah but still. Nah,I'm kidding its cool.
harutenshi
^Haha. I'll change his name. I couldn't come up with a good one anyways.
Armadio2
Hey,like I said,its cool. Besides, it's your story,youshouldnt change it just because of one persons opinion.
harutenshi
^Okies okies. But I found a name...but..ah, so confused. Well actually I couldn't come up with anything good. So I'll change it anyways.
AzNgIrL
o.O Go Haru! embarassedlaugh.gif And about time you continued the story! embarassedlaugh.gif Great Job Haru! beerchug.gif
Jun
go get him haru biggthumpup.gif
squeekers
Great job with the story biggrin.gif Its kinda funny though because in the fan fiction stories they always have the same people, its really cool. icon_smile.gif
harutenshi
Thanks everyone for the comments. I really enjoy reading them. biggrin.gif

Jun, Shinee, and Armadio mouths dropped as they saw Haru walk with that mysterious guy.
"I don't know anout you two, but I'm following Haru." said Armadio, as he walked away from Shinee and Jun.
"Hold it there buddy," Jun said as he stopped Armadio. Armadio tried to run, but Jun's grip was too tight.
"Would ya let go of me please! What happens if that dude kills Haru!" Armadio yelled, squirming to get out Jun's firm grip.
"Yea I know that might happen. But maybe we should follow her quietly or do something so she won't notice that it's us." Jun stated.
"Sorta like spying?" Shinee asked.
"Along those lines," Jun said, as he finally let go of his grip.
"Well, let's do it!" Shinee shouted.
"Maybe we could buy baseball caps and news papers." suggested Armadio. The three nodded as they ran quickly, but quietly.
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"So...uh how old are you?" asked Haru, as she and Lei sat down at a table in a bubble tea house.
"Fifteen." Lei smiled.
"Oh, that's cool. I'm fourteen..." she said as her voice trailed off and looked around the place. The atmosphere was very club like. Music bounced off the walls. It was a busy tea house with lots of people around her and Lei's age.
"Haven't I seen you around somewhere?" Lei questioned, as he broke the silence.
"Uh, I don't know." she said, as she still looked around. Oh my god...why did I ever follow this stranger? What happens if he's an ex convict? Is it me or is it getting hot in here. So stuffy! Haru thought, as she started to sweat.
"Umm, are you okay?" Lei questioned, as he noticed she was sweating and breathing heavily.
"I'm fine...oh look the drinks are here!" The waitress put down two bubble tea drinks on the table and walked away.
"Yum, I love peach flavored." said Lei as he took as sip of his drink. "Do you want to dance?" asked Lei. She heard this and instantly choked on the tapoica.
"Are you okay?" Haru punched her chest and nearly knocked the wind out of herself. Everyone looked at her to see if she was alright.
"Yes...fine...dance ya say...err...I don't how to." she said as she cleared her throat.
"It's simple, I'll show you." Lei got up and took her hand. She refused to, but the words didn't come out of her mouth. Her legs moved along the dance floor. The music pounded into her body. All of a sudden a slow dance came on.
"Look, it's simple." he grabbed her hand and automatically everything registered in her head. She danced to a korean song called "You Don't Know" and without thinking layed her head onto his chest.
"I think...I'm...falling in love..." she whispered
"Hmmm?"
"Nothing," she said. Maybe it's just infatuation...she thought.


That was really long...hehe. And yes I did change the name cause it didn't really fit in.
Armadio2
Well, looks like some comedy might starting up pretty soon. embarassedlaugh.gif
squeekers
that would be funny if the three of them got caught by Lei and Haru....lol embarassedlaugh.gif

It also would be weird of them to think he was a convict though because he is only 15.....? confused.gif
Jun
ooohhhhhh haru's in love icon_wink.gif
lol kool story Haru, im sure we all can't wait until the next chapter comes out biggrin.gif beerchug.gif
AzNgIrL
Awww! Haru is growing up cry2.gif It seems like it was just yesterday when she was in diapers



^^ Don't ask embarassedlaugh.gif

Hope to see what happens in the next chapter o.O
squeekers
QUOTE
Awww! Haru is growing up cry2.gif  It seems like it was just yesterday when she was in diapers


^ wow thats really scary.... icon_confused.gif^

well anyways good job with the story!!!!! biggrin.gif i like it a lot and i hope to see you post a chapter soon!!!! biggrin.gif
Rocky Cuong V
seem like ppls are really into this story. I better read it!
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