Hello guys and gurls!!!

I would like you all spend a lil time to help me writting a better "Cover Letter". Here is my writting cover letter as below: But i don't think my sentence is good as you all...So please writting a professional one!!


********CoVer LettEr********


I am very true and so honor to make known to you about my brief history as i described in my resume. And i would like to thanks you so much for taking time to consider about my position opportunity. Also, i hope to become your employee for all my entirelife.

I am waiting forward to hearing a good news from you! Thanks...


Respectfully,


Kim RockHeart.

Well, my English isn't perfect but I'll try.


I am very glad for your interest in my application and what is being described in my resume. I would also like to take this opportunity to show my gratitude toward your time in considering my application. I am looking forward to become one of your employee in the future to come.

I am looking forward for your good news. Thank you.

Respectfully,

Kim RockHeart.

You are serious, correct? You preliminary cover letter does not do you justice when I read it. I think you should check around the web and find site that help you with you cover letter.

Here is a site that I found from googling:

cover letter

A snippet from this site:

Your resume is a summary of your qualifications, but your cover letter is your sales pitch to the employer. If you've done your homework and written it well, it:

Properly introduces you
Highlights your qualifications
Explains what your resume can't
Shows that you've researched the company
Demonstrates your written communication skills
Convinces the employer to grant you an interview

Anyway, I can help edit your grammar after you've redone your cover letter to include the above points. I think you should PM me the cover letter to hide from the vultures on this AF forum.

Try this

Thank you for taking the time to view my resume. I would also like to take this opportunity to show my deepest appreciation of you for taking an interest in my application. I look forward to joining your company.

I hope to meet with you soon. Again, thank you.

Respectfully,

Kim RockHeart.





How's that?

I found a template which you help with your writing. Use this as a quide, it is not set in stone!

[Your Name]
[Street • City • State • Zip Code]
[Phone # • Fax phone # • Messages phone # • Email]



[Date today]




[Recipient's name]
[Company name]
[Address]
[Address]
[Address]

[JOB TITLE or JOB REFERENCE NUMBER]

Dear [Recipient's name]:

[Write your cover letter in the active voice. Keep it brief; e.g., three or four paragraphs on one page. Check your grammar and spelling, then check it again. Start by expressing your interest in the job. Employers like to know where you heard about it, so mention it.]

[Your cover letter is not the place to ask what the company can do for you, but to state what you can do for the company. The middle paragraphs are the most important, and your chance to stand out from other candidates. Summarize and highlight your skills, qualifications and major accomplishments related to the job, but don't simply reiterate your resume. Supplement it and say what it can't. Most importantly, explain why your qualifications and the job requirements are a good match. You don't have to say that verbatim, but say it some way, like by emphasizing your qualifications that match well. Use action verbs such as implemented and developed.]

[Wrap it up by stating when you'll be available for work, and the best time and place the recipient can reach you. Mention that your resume is enclosed or attached, and offer to provide more information, work samples and/or references. Indicate that you'd like an interview in person or by phone. Thank the recipient for his or her time and consideration. Say that you look forward to hearing from the recipient.]

Sincerely,

[Sign here]


[Your name]

Enclosure [or Attachment]: [Number]

It is pretty hard to correct what he said originally. Maybe with a few draft and everything is all set...but better with what you got above.

We have guite a few helpers, but where is the helpee himself? We need input from you, Rockheart. About the template I found, you should go this route if you really want a professional looking one. Something simple like Tamtamdoll23's is ok, too.

Hey all friends!! We just miscommunicate to each other. Because my Cover Latter above is just for an example. But then i would like you guys do another difference of mine, and its still a Cover Latter. Just writting a cover latter by your own way...Don't need to fix or follow mine....Do you know what i mean.


Because next week on the June 18. I have an Interview, plus hand the resume, and the cover letter to the Boss!!! I do OK with the Resume. But the cover letter is has a lil problem. So?? Please writting alot of cover letter for me!!!!!!



RockHeart,



:genius:
PS: How come i don't see the Gurls show up to help out!!!

Hey, Rockheart, how was your job interview? Have you got the good news from the company yet?

OMG!!!! I just step in to work only once week...Now the STUPID boss kicked me...And once week later the school kicked me too....Horible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Horible!!!!!Now i am a free guy on the street.........Ba bua com song lang thang....three times eating and walking around the street....You all will see RockHeart in the Califo in next year....(Summer Ending)...I go to see my friends Jayson, Sailador, DaiViet, and to see all who are living in there!! i will have a big team of Picking Oranges...


RH. :genius: